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Re: [v6ops] Opsdir early review of draft-ietf-v6ops-v4v6-xlat-prefix-00

"Joe Clarke (jclarke)" <jclarke@cisco.com> Tue, 02 May 2017 23:09 UTC

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From: "Joe Clarke (jclarke)" <jclarke@cisco.com>
To: Brian E Carpenter <brian.e.carpenter@gmail.com>
CC: "ops-dir@ietf.org" <ops-dir@ietf.org>, "v6ops@ietf.org" <v6ops@ietf.org>, "ietf@ietf.org" <ietf@ietf.org>, "draft-ietf-v6ops-v4v6-xlat-prefix.all@ietf.org" <draft-ietf-v6ops-v4v6-xlat-prefix.all@ietf.org>
Thread-Topic: [v6ops] Opsdir early review of draft-ietf-v6ops-v4v6-xlat-prefix-00
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> On May 2, 2017, at 19:01, Brian E Carpenter <brian.e.carpenter@gmail.com> wrote:
> 
>> On 03/05/2017 01:30, Joe Clarke wrote:
>> ...
>> NITS:
>> 
>> In your Abstract, you mention RFC6890, but this does not appear to be
>> an xref to it, and it should be.
> 
> afaik, the RFC Editor style does not allow xrefs in the Abstract.

I've seen some that do (ostensibly).  But this if this isn't required, it wasn't critical.

Joe

> 
> (Also: draft-bchv-rfc6890bis will update 6890 soon. I don't know whether
> that's relevant.)
> 
>    Brian

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