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Re: [v6ops] Opsdir early review of draft-ietf-v6ops-v4v6-xlat-prefix-00

Brian E Carpenter <brian.e.carpenter@gmail.com> Tue, 02 May 2017 23:04 UTC

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To: Joe Clarke <jclarke@cisco.com>, ops-dir@ietf.org
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From: Brian E Carpenter <brian.e.carpenter@gmail.com>
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Subject: Re: [v6ops] Opsdir early review of draft-ietf-v6ops-v4v6-xlat-prefix-00
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On 03/05/2017 01:30, Joe Clarke wrote:
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> NITS:
> 
> In your Abstract, you mention RFC6890, but this does not appear to be
> an xref to it, and it should be.

afaik, the RFC Editor style does not allow xrefs in the Abstract.

(Also: draft-bchv-rfc6890bis will update 6890 soon. I don't know whether
that's relevant.)

    Brian

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