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Re: [xml2rfc-dev] Please help review v3 files

Carsten Bormann <cabo@tzi.org> Thu, 18 July 2019 07:23 UTC

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Subject: Re: [xml2rfc-dev] Please help review v3 files
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The HTML form has an intrusive tablet of contents that is hiding a third of each line, is hard to get rid of, and that reappears on the slightest scrolling.  The page is essentially unusable.  (Viewed on an iPhone)

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> On 18. Jul 2019, at 08:19, Sandy Ginoza <sginoza@amsl.com> wrote:
> 
> Hi all,
> 
> As you know, the transition to XMLv3 is quickly approaching.  As part of our preparation, the RPC is  converting some XMLv2 files to XMLv3.  We’re hoping some of you will take the time to review the files and provide feedback regarding whether the updates are as expected and the XMLv3 files are considered “good” v3 files.  
> 
> A couple of notes:
> - we focused on format only; we did not make editorial updates. 
> - the diff files compare the initial v2v3 output with the files we edited.
> 
> Please review the following files:
> 
> 1) draft-ietf-spring-segment-routing-msdc
> https://www.ietf.org/id/draft-ietf-spring-segment-routing-msdc-11.txt
> 
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/v3test/draft-ietf-spring-segment-routing-msdc-11-MS.v2v3.html
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/v3test/draft-ietf-spring-segment-routing-msdc-11-MS.v2v3.pdf
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/v3test/draft-ietf-spring-segment-routing-msdc-11-MS.v2v3.txt
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/v3test/draft-ietf-spring-segment-routing-msdc-11-MS.v2v3.xml
> 
> rfc-xmldiff:
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/v3test/draft-ietf-spring-segment-routing-msdc-11-MS.v2v3-xmldiff.html
> 
> htmlwdiff:
> file:///Volumes/rfcpa/inc-work/v3test/draft-ietf-spring-segment-routing-msdc-11-MS.v2v3-htmlwdiff.html
> 
> 
> 2) draft-ietf-isis-l2bundles
> https://www.ietf.org/id/draft-ietf-isis-l2bundles-07.txt
> 
> Please pay particular attention to lists and the use of <aside>.  We experimented with list styles and used <aside> for notes.  Using <aside> in this way required some changes because <aside> can’t be used within lists.  
> 
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/v3test/draft-ietf-isis-l2bundles-07-SG.v2v3.html
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/v3test/draft-ietf-isis-l2bundles-07-SG.v2v3.pdf
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/v3test/draft-ietf-isis-l2bundles-07-SG.v2v3.txt
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/v3test/draft-ietf-isis-l2bundles-07-SG.v2v3.xml
> 
> rfc-xmldiff:
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/v3test/draft-ietf-isis-l2bundles-07-SG.orignal.v2v3-xmldiff.html
> 
> htmlwdiff:
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/v3test/draft-ietf-isis-l2bundles-07-SG.orignal.v2v3-htmlwdiff.html
> 
> 
> Thanks for your help!
> Sandy
> 
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