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[xml2rfc-dev] Please help review v3 files

Sandy Ginoza <sginoza@amsl.com> Thu, 18 July 2019 06:19 UTC

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Subject: [xml2rfc-dev] Please help review v3 files
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Hi all,

As you know, the transition to XMLv3 is quickly approaching.  As part of our preparation, the RPC is  converting some XMLv2 files to XMLv3.  We’re hoping some of you will take the time to review the files and provide feedback regarding whether the updates are as expected and the XMLv3 files are considered “good” v3 files.  

A couple of notes:
- we focused on format only; we did not make editorial updates. 
- the diff files compare the initial v2v3 output with the files we edited.

Please review the following files:

1) draft-ietf-spring-segment-routing-msdc
https://www.ietf.org/id/draft-ietf-spring-segment-routing-msdc-11.txt

https://www.rfc-editor.org/v3test/draft-ietf-spring-segment-routing-msdc-11-MS.v2v3.html
https://www.rfc-editor.org/v3test/draft-ietf-spring-segment-routing-msdc-11-MS.v2v3.pdf
https://www.rfc-editor.org/v3test/draft-ietf-spring-segment-routing-msdc-11-MS.v2v3.txt
https://www.rfc-editor.org/v3test/draft-ietf-spring-segment-routing-msdc-11-MS.v2v3.xml

rfc-xmldiff:
https://www.rfc-editor.org/v3test/draft-ietf-spring-segment-routing-msdc-11-MS.v2v3-xmldiff.html

htmlwdiff:
file:///Volumes/rfcpa/inc-work/v3test/draft-ietf-spring-segment-routing-msdc-11-MS.v2v3-htmlwdiff.html


2) draft-ietf-isis-l2bundles
https://www.ietf.org/id/draft-ietf-isis-l2bundles-07.txt

Please pay particular attention to lists and the use of <aside>.  We experimented with list styles and used <aside> for notes.  Using <aside> in this way required some changes because <aside> can’t be used within lists.  

https://www.rfc-editor.org/v3test/draft-ietf-isis-l2bundles-07-SG.v2v3.html
https://www.rfc-editor.org/v3test/draft-ietf-isis-l2bundles-07-SG.v2v3.pdf
https://www.rfc-editor.org/v3test/draft-ietf-isis-l2bundles-07-SG.v2v3.txt
https://www.rfc-editor.org/v3test/draft-ietf-isis-l2bundles-07-SG.v2v3.xml

rfc-xmldiff:
https://www.rfc-editor.org/v3test/draft-ietf-isis-l2bundles-07-SG.orignal.v2v3-xmldiff.html

htmlwdiff:
https://www.rfc-editor.org/v3test/draft-ietf-isis-l2bundles-07-SG.orignal.v2v3-htmlwdiff.html


Thanks for your help!
Sandy

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