Re: [yang-doctors] Yangdoctors early review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ac-lxsm-lxnm-glue-04
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To: Martin Björklund <mbj+ietf@4668.se>, "yang-doctors@ietf.org" <yang-doctors@ietf.org>
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Thread-Topic: Yangdoctors early review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ac-lxsm-lxnm-glue-04
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Date: Wed, 24 Jan 2024 15:27:59 +0000
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Subject: Re: [yang-doctors] Yangdoctors early review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ac-lxsm-lxnm-glue-04
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Hi Martin, Thanks for the review. FWIW, a new version that fixes the nit you reported and other minor pending we had is available online: https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url2=draft-ietf-opsawg-ac-lxsm-lxnm-glue-05 Cheers, Med > -----Message d'origine----- > De : Martin Björklund via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> > Envoyé : mercredi 24 janvier 2024 16:18 > À : yang-doctors@ietf.org > Cc : draft-ietf-opsawg-ac-lxsm-lxnm-glue.all@ietf.org; opsawg@ietf.org > Objet : Yangdoctors early review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ac-lxsm-lxnm- > glue-04 > > Reviewer: Martin Björklund > Review result: Ready with Nits > > This is a very short, and from a YANG-perspective simple, module. It > looks good, and I also found one nit: s/provisionned/provisioned/g > > /martin > ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Ce message et ses pieces jointes peuvent contenir des informations confidentielles ou privilegiees et ne doivent donc pas etre diffuses, exploites ou copies sans autorisation. Si vous avez recu ce message par erreur, veuillez le signaler a l'expediteur et le detruire ainsi que les pieces jointes. Les messages electroniques etant susceptibles d'alteration, Orange decline toute responsabilite si ce message a ete altere, deforme ou falsifie. Merci. This message and its attachments may contain confidential or privileged information that may be protected by law; they should not be distributed, used or copied without authorisation. If you have received this email in error, please notify the sender and delete this message and its attachments. As emails may be altered, Orange is not liable for messages that have been modified, changed or falsified. Thank you.
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