Re: [yang-doctors] Yangdoctors early review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ac-lxsm-lxnm-glue-04

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Hi Martin, all, 

FWIW, the proposed changes are now implemented in the public version: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-opsawg-ac-lxsm-lxnm-glue-06.

Cheers,
Med 

> -----Message d'origine-----
> De : BOUCADAIR Mohamed INNOV/NET
> Envoyé : jeudi 25 janvier 2024 13:56
> À : 'Martin Björklund' <[e-mail]>
> Cc : [e-mail]; draft-ietf-opsawg-ac-lxsm-lxnm-
> [e-mail]; [e-mail]
> Objet : RE: Yangdoctors early review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ac-lxsm-
> lxnm-glue-04
> 
> Hi Martin,
> 
> Thank you for the follow-up.
> 
> Fixed the nits in the yang file. Also updated the module to make use
> of the new groupings for referencing purposes instead of the broken
> typedefs in the ac-ntw:
> 
> https://author-tools.ietf.org/api/iddiff?iddiff?doc_1=draft-ietf-
> opsawg-ac-lxsm-lxnm-glue&url_2=https://boucadair.github.io/attachment-
> circuit-model/boucadair-patch-5/draft-ietf-opsawg-ac-lxsm-lxnm-
> glue.txt
> 
> Cheers,
> Med
> 
> > -----Message d'origine-----
> > De : Martin Björklund <[e-mail]> Envoyé : mercredi 24
> janvier
> > 2024 16:52 À : BOUCADAIR Mohamed INNOV/NET
> > <[e-mail]> Cc : [e-mail];
> > draft-ietf-opsawg-ac-lxsm-lxnm- [e-mail]; [e-mail]
> > Objet : Re: Yangdoctors early review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ac-lxsm-
> > lxnm-glue-04
> >
> > [e-mail] wrote:
> > > Hi Martin,
> > >
> > > Thanks for the review.
> > >
> > > FWIW, a new version that fixes the nit you reported and other
> minor
> > pending we had is available online:
> > >
> >
> https://eur03.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fauth
> > > or-tools.ietf.org%2Fiddiff%3Furl2%3Ddraft-ietf-opsawg-ac-lxsm-
> lxnm-
> > glu
> > > e-
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> > >
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> > That was quick!  However, the spelling error is still there, and I
> > think you introduced a new one ;-)
> >
> >
> >             was provisionned using the ACaaS module.";
> >                 ^^^^^^^^^^^^
> >
> > Thansk to Martin Björklund for the yangdoctors review.
> > ^^^^^^
> >
> >
> >
> > /martin
> >
> >
> >
> >
> >
> >
> > >
> > > Cheers,
> > > Med
> > >
> > > > -----Message d'origine-----
> > > > De : Martin Björklund via Datatracker <[e-mail]>
> Envoyé :
> > > > mercredi 24 janvier 2024 16:18 À : [e-mail] Cc :
> > > > [e-mail];
> [e-mail]
> > > > Objet : Yangdoctors early review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ac-lxsm-
> > lxnm-
> > > > glue-04
> > > >
> > > > Reviewer: Martin Björklund
> > > > Review result: Ready with Nits
> > > >
> > > > This is a very short, and from a YANG-perspective simple,
> module.
> > It
> > > > looks good, and I also found one nit:
> s/provisionned/provisioned/g
> > > >
> > > > /martin
> > > >
> > >
> > >
> >
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