Re: [6lowpan] Working-Group Last Call for draft-ietf-6lowpan-usecases-06

Dear Shoichi,

I appreciate you again for the detail review and correction of my errors.
I just uploaded the new version fixing the editorial errors you commented.
You will find the new version at
http://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-6lowpan-usecases/
Thanks again!

Eunah

On Thu, Aug 5, 2010 at 11:24 AM, Eunsook "Eunah" Kim
<eunah.ietf@gmail.com> wrote:
> Thanks Shoichi,
> I will change the two terminologies as your suggestion. :)
>
> (This specification ==> This document,
>  Multihop ==> Multi-hop)
>
> Thanks for your support,
> Eunah
>
> On Sat, Jul 31, 2010 at 4:23 AM, Shoichi Sakane <sakane@tanu.org> wrote:
>> Hi,
>>
>> I have reviewed this draft.  I think it shows very good example and
>> information to be worth for the implementers and the designers
>> of LoWPAN networks.   I thank the authors.
>>
>> With minor modifications that I listed below, this document must
>> be ready to go.
>>
>> - "This specification" used in section 1.1 sounds unreasonable to me.
>>  It would be better to change into "This document", which is used
>>  many other places.
>>
>> - "Multihop communication" used in section 3.5.1 has any special meaning ?
>>  If not, just use "Multi-hop communication" that is used other places.
>>
>> - I attached a diff file for fixing typos.
>>
>> Shoichi Sakane
>>
>> On 07/28/10 22:52, Carsten Bormann wrote:
>>>
>>> LoWPANners,
>>>
>>> as you know, the working group chairs dropped the ball on the usecases
>>> document.
>>> A version with fixes resulting from the WGLC issued on 2009-01-09 was
>>> submitted on 2009-10-02. We wanted to get some quick feedback on
>>> whether that was fixing the issues and then never actually issued the
>>> second working-group last call.  Indeed, the Internet-Draft expired
>>> after six months...  Then the terminology of the ND draft changed.
>>> Since the usecases draft now has been resubmitted with updated
>>> terminology:
>>>
>>> This is a Working-Group Last-Call for:
>>>
>>> http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-6lowpan-usecases-06
>>>
>>> The document is intended to be submitted by this Working Group to the
>>> IESG for publication as an Informational Document.
>>>
>>> This is a one-week Working-Group Last-Call, ending on 2010-08-09
>>> (Monday, August 09, 2010) at 2359 UTC.
>>>
>>> Please review the document carefully (one last time), and send your
>>> comments to the 6lowpan list.  Please also indicate in your response
>>> whether or not you think this document is ready to go to the IESG.
>>>
>>> Carsten and Geoff
>>>
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