[aqm] Benoit Claise's Discuss on draft-ietf-aqm-eval-guidelines-11: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)

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DISCUSS:
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Has a RFC6390 performance directorate review done for the 2.X metrics? It
should.
See http://www.ietf.org/iesg/directorate/performance-metrics.html
I guess that the metrics will be recorded in the future (See
draft-ietf-ippm-metric-registry-06
), right? 
For example, Flow Completion Time and Packet Loss Synchronization are
new, I believe.
And some other metrics are already documented in RFC6390 compliant
documents. Pointers should be provided.
See
https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-xrblock-independent-burst-gap-discard-01#appendix-A
for an example


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COMMENT:
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- Random Early Detection (RED), BLUE, and Proportional Integral
controller (PI)
Would you have references?

- BDP is mentioned a few times. Please expand.

- Glossary section = terminology section, right? If we want to be
consistent across documents

- section 12.2. Why not a MUST below?
   In order to understand an AQM's deployment considerations and
   performance under a specific environment, AQM proposals SHOULD
   describe the parameters that control the macroscopic AQM behavior,
   and identify any parameters that require tuning to operational
   conditions.