Re: [Asap] I-D Action: draft-ietf-asap-sip-auto-peer-05.txt

"Derek Engi (deengi)" <deengi@cisco.com> Tue, 19 July 2022 16:12 UTC

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From: "Derek Engi (deengi)" <deengi@cisco.com>
To: Marc Petit-Huguenin <marc@petit-huguenin.org>, "asap@ietf.org" <asap@ietf.org>
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Hi Marc,

We really appreciate the time and your review. We have implemented your proposed changes and plan to submit the -01 version of the draft-engi-siptrunkingcapability document once the I-D submission tool reopens on July 24th.

Thanks again for the feedback and support!

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Derek Engi
deengi@cisco.com


From: Asap <asap-bounces@ietf.org> on behalf of Marc Petit-Huguenin <marc@petit-huguenin.org>
Date: Sunday, July 3, 2022 at 9:23 AM
To: asap@ietf.org <asap@ietf.org>
Subject: Re: [Asap] I-D Action: draft-ietf-asap-sip-auto-peer-05.txt
Hi,

I did a review of this drafts and have a few comments;

- Section 2:  Substitute RFC 2119 with BCP 14.

- Section 4, second example: the JSON grammar in RFC 7149  clearly states that commas are only used between elements of an array ("s/],/]/").

- Section 4, last paragraph: Add a reference to and capitalize Oauth2 (s/Oauth2/OAuth 2.0/)

- Section 5: the link relation is not yet registered so until it is actually done, change "IANA has registered..." with "IANA is instructed to register..."

Thanks.

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Marc Petit-Huguenin
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