Re: [Asdf] I-D Action: draft-ietf-asdf-sdf-16.txt

[David Navarro <[e-mail]>]

Hi,

Sorry for the late comments.

On the substance:
The draft looks good to me.
Personally, I would have preferred for the sdfThing and sdfObject concepts to be merged, but this ship has sailed a long time ago.

On the form:
I share most of the editorial concerns expressed by Christer Holmberg, especially on the confusion between Things and sdfThings, or the various objects and sdfObjects.
More generally it looks like the scope of the draft is not clearly defined. For instance there are discussions of future drafts, or the discussion on the interaction with sdfAction already pointed by Christer. IMHO, this draft should contain only the definition of the SDF Model and the structure of an SDF Document.

I also entered an issue in the repo for some small editorial comments: https://github.com/ietf-wg-asdf/SDF/issues/136

Regards,
David Navarro

-----Original Message-----
From: ASDF <[e-mail]> On Behalf Of Carsten Bormann
Sent: Monday, October 2, 2023 7:07 AM
To: [e-mail]
Subject: Re: [Asdf] I-D Action: draft-ietf-asdf-sdf-16.txt

As the abstract says, revision –16 should address the Working Group Last Call comments.
Please see the HTML and diff links below.

We are now soliciting a round of final reviews, intended to complete 2023-10-12.

Please record any issues here in the mailing list and/or at:
https://github.com/ietf-wg-asdf/SDF/issues

There already is one new issue there, so expect us to forge a -17 at the end of next week.
(Please ignore the two-digit issues, which are really reminding us of work that is going on outside the draft.
The new issue #134 is about a “description” entry in the info block, which we have strangely not noticed as missing so far…)

Grüße, Carsten


> On 2. Oct 2023, at 06:57, [e-mail] wrote:
>
> Internet-Draft draft-ietf-asdf-sdf-16.txt is now available. It is a
> work item of the A Semantic Definition Format for Data and
> Interactions of Things (ASDF) WG of the IETF.
>
>   Title:   Semantic Definition Format (SDF) for Data and Interactions of Things
>   Authors: Michael Koster
>            Carsten Bormann
>            Ari Keränen
>   Name:    draft-ietf-asdf-sdf-16.txt
>   Pages:   98
>   Dates:   2023-10-01
>
> Abstract:
>
>   The Semantic Definition Format (SDF) is a format for domain experts
>   to use in the creation and maintenance of data and interaction models
>   that describe Things, i.e., physical objects that are available for
>   interaction over a network.  An SDF specification describes
>   definitions of SDF Objects and their associated interactions (Events,
>   Actions, Properties), as well as the Data types for the information
>   exchanged in those interactions.  Tools convert this format to
>   database formats and other serializations as needed.
>
>
>   // The present revision (-16) addresses the Working Group Last Call
>   // comments.
>
> The IETF datatracker status page for this Internet-Draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-asdf-sdf/
>
> There is also an HTML version available at:
> https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-asdf-sdf-16.html
>
> A diff from the previous version is available at:
> https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url2=draft-ietf-asdf-sdf-16

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