Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9365 <draft-ietf-ipwave-vehicular-networking-30> for your review
"Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong" <jaehoon.paul@gmail.com> Tue, 21 February 2023 04:58 UTC
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Subject: Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9365 <draft-ietf-ipwave-vehicular-networking-30> for your review
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Hi Alice, I will modify the xml file according to your comments and questions this week (by February 24 in KST). I will also provide you with a revision letter to show how I have updated the text. Thanks. Best Regards, Paul On Sun, Feb 19, 2023 at 2:43 AM Alice Russo <arusso@amsl.com> wrote: > Paul, > Thank you for your mail. Yes; please know that you have the time needed > for the review of the edited document and the questions. It's your choice > whether you update the source file yourself or reply via mail (in which > case, we will update the source file). We will check in with you at the > one-week mark if we haven't heard from you. We'll be here for any questions > or followups on the updates for the document. > > Thank you. > RFC Editor/ar > > > On Feb 18, 2023, at 3:34 AM, Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong < > jaehoon.paul@gmail.com> wrote: > > > > Hi RFC Editor, > > I will review your comments and answer them. > > Today and tomorrow are the weekend, so I am busy with my Christianity > worship and fellowship. > > Could you allow me to finish them by noon (12pm) next Tuesday (February > 21) in Korean time? > > > > Thanks. > > > > Best Regards, > > Jaehoon (Paul) Jeong > > > > > > On Sat, Feb 18, 2023 at 4:19 PM <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org> wrote: > > Greetings, > > > > While reviewing this document during AUTH48, please resolve (as > necessary) the following questions, which are also in the XML file. > > > > 1) <!-- [rfced] Please insert any keywords (beyond those that appear in > the > > title) for use on https://www.rfc-editor.org/search. > > --> > > > > > > 2) <!--[rfced] We note that "IPWAVE" has been expanded as "IP" > > (rather than "IPv6") in the past - for example, in the name of > > the IETF working group. Is it intentional to use "IPv6" in > > this document without modifying the acronym? > > > > Title and Section 1 contain: > > IPv6 Wireless Access in Vehicular Environments (IPWAVE) > > > > vs. RFC 8691 (and the IPWAVE WG page) contains: > > IP Wireless Access in Vehicular Environments (IPWAVE) > > --> > > > > > > 3) <!-- [rfced] Would you like the terms in Section 2 to be > alphabetized? > > --> > > > > > > 4) <!-- [rfced] We had difficulty parsing this sentence, specifically "at > > edge". How should it be updated for clarity? Does "at edge" refer to > > "at the edge of the network"? > > > > Original: > > * Edge Computing Device (ECD): It is a computing device (or server) > > at edge for vehicles and vulnerable road users. > > --> > > > > > > 5) <!-- [rfced] If LiDAR is the method used by a "LiDAR sensor" or > > "LiDAR device" (rather than the device itself), may this definition > > be updated as follows, or otherwise? > > > > Original: > > * LiDAR: "Light Detection and Ranging". It is a scanning device to > > measure a distance to an object by emitting pulsed laser light and > > measuring the reflected pulsed light. > > > > Perhaps: > > * Light Detection and Ranging (LiDAR): This is a method > > for measuring a distance to an object by emitting pulsed > > laser light and measuring the reflected pulsed light. > > --> > > > > > > 6) <!-- [rfced] Should "dot11OCBActivited" be "dot11OCBActivated" > > for correct spelling ("i" changed to "a")? > > We note that "dot11OCBActivited" is in Section 2 of RFC 8691. > > > > Original: > > * 802.11-OCB: It refers to the mode specified in IEEE Std > > 802.11-2016 [IEEE-802.11-OCB] when the MIB attribute > > dot11OCBActivited is 'true'. > > > > Suggested: > > * 802.11-OCB: This refers to the mode specified in IEEE Std > > 802.11-2016 [IEEE-802.11-OCB] when the MIB attribute > > dot11OCBActivated is 'true'. > > --> > > > > > > 7) <!-- [rfced] FYI, so that it wouldn't appear that "safe driving" > describes > > "avoidance", we updated "safe driving and collision avoidance" to > > "driving safely and avoiding collisions". Please let us know if this > > isn't agreeable. > > > > Original: > > * Context-aware navigation for safe driving and collision avoidance > > > > Current: > > * Context-aware navigation for driving safely and avoiding collisions > > --> > > > > > > 8) <!-- [rfced] FYI, for clarity concerning "UAM end systems in air", we > > rephrased this sentence. Please review. > > > > Original: > > A collision avoidance service of UAM end systems in air can be > > envisioned as a use case in air vehicular environments > > [I-D.templin-ipwave-uam-its]. > > > > Current: > > A service for collision avoidance of in-air UAM end systems is one > > possible use case in air vehicular environments [UAM-ITS]. > > --> > > > > > > 9) <!-- [rfced] Can only trucks or any type of vehicle use V2V > communication > > in this case? If the latter, we suggest replacing "Trucks" with > "Vehicles". > > (The preceding sentence is included for context.) > > > > Original: > > Platooning [Truck-Platooning] allows a series (or group) of vehicles > > (e.g., trucks) to follow each other very closely. Trucks can use V2V > > communication in addition to forward sensors in order to maintain > > constant clearance between two consecutive vehicles at very short > > gaps (from 3 meters to 10 meters). > > > > Perhaps: > > Platooning [Truck-Platooning] allows a series (or group) of vehicles > > (e.g., trucks) to follow each other very closely. Vehicles can use > V2V > > communication in addition to forward sensors in order to maintain > > constant clearance between two consecutive vehicles at very short > > gaps (from 3 to 10 meters). > > --> > > > > > > 10) <!-- [rfced] Please clarify "accident vehicles"; does it refer to > > vehicles in a collision, rather than vehicles responding to a collision? > > > > Also, since "IP-RSU" is not a type of network, we suggest rephrasing > > the final list. Should it be via "an IP-RSU" or "IP-RSUs" (plural)? > > > > How may we update this sentence for clarity? > > > > Original: > > The emergency communication between accident vehicles (or emergency > > vehicles) and a TCC can be performed via either IP-RSU, 4G-LTE or 5G > > networks. > > > > Perhaps: > > The emergency communication between vehicles in an accident (or > > emergency-response vehicles) and a TCC can be performed via either > > an IP-RSU or 4G-LTE or 5G networks. > > --> > > > > > > 11) <!-- [rfced] How may this sentence be updated to make the list > > items parallel? Also, what does "a used approach" refer to? > > For the reader, is there some context to provide for citing > > HIP certificates [RFC8002]? > > > > Original: > > These extra means can be certificate-based, > > biometric, credit-based, and one-time passcode (OTP) approaches in > > addition to a used approach [RFC8002]. > > > > Perhaps: > > These extra means could include approaches based on certificates, > > biometrics, credit, or One-Time Passwords (OTPs) > > in addition to Host Identity Protocol certificates [RFC8002]. > > --> > > > > > > 12) <!--[rfced] Please clarify this sentence, in particular the phrase > > "classify to different severity levels for driving safety". Does it > > mean the messages are classified into severity levels based > > on their potential significance to driving safety, or otherwise? > > Also, does "credit for the sender" refer to the "credit of the sender"? > > > > Original: > > First, a credit- > > based means is to let a vehicle classify the received messages sent > > by another host to different severity levels for driving safety in > > order to calculate the credit for the sender. > > > > Perhaps: > > First, a credit- > > based method is when a vehicle classifies the messages it received > > from another host into various levels based on their potential > > effects on driving safety in order to calculate the credit of that > sender. > > --> > > > > > > 13) <!-- [rfced] This sentence is quite complex, making it difficult to > parse. > > May we replace "which" with "This improvement" to split this into two > > sentences? > > > > Original: > > For the reliability required in V2V networking, the ND optimization > > defined in MANET [RFC6130] [RFC7466] improves the classical IPv6 ND > > in terms of tracking neighbor information with up to two hops and > > introducing several extensible Information Bases, which serves the > > MANET routing protocols such as the different versions of Optimized > > Link State Routing Protocol (OLSR) [RFC3626] [RFC7181], Open Shortest > > Path First (OSPF) derivatives (e.g., [RFC5614]), and Dynamic Link > > Exchange Protocol (DLEP) [RFC8175] with its extensions [RFC8629] > > [RFC8757]. > > > > Perhaps: > > For the reliability required in V2V networking, the ND optimization > > defined in the Mobile Ad Hoc Network (MANET) [RFC6130] [RFC7466] > > improves the classical IPv6 ND in terms of tracking neighbor > > information with up to two hops and introducing several extensible > > Information Bases. This improvement serves the MANET routing > > protocols, such as the different versions of Optimized Link State > > Routing Protocol (OLSR) [RFC3626] [RFC7181], Open Shortest Path > > First (OSPF) derivatives (e.g., [RFC5614]), and Dynamic Link > > Exchange Protocol (DLEP) [RFC8175] with its extensions [RFC8629] > > [RFC8757]. > > --> > > > > > > 14) <!--[rfced] Please clarify this sentence, in particular "leads the > half > > of the link lifetime". > > > > Original: > > This relative speed leads the half of the link lifetime between the > > vehicle and the IP-RSU. > > --> > > > > > > 15) <!--[rfced] Please review how "not-onlink" has been rephrased > > and let us know any updates. That term has been avoided because it > > has not appeared in other RFCs and is not consistent with the hyphen > > in the term "on-link". Please note that RFC 8691 uses the phrase > > "advertised as not on-link". For example: > > > > Original: > > a destination vehicle [..] needs to be distinguished as either > > an on-link host or a not-onlink host > > > > Current: > > a destination vehicle [..] needs to be distinguished as either > > as a host that is either on-link or not on-link > > > > In Section 5.1.1, three instances were updated as follows (please > > see the diff file for context). > > - a prefix that is not on-link > > - the prefix should be not on-link. > > - prefixes that are not on-link > > --> > > > > > > 16) <!--[rfced] Please clarify this sentence, in particular "can > maintain its > > neighboring vehicles in a stable way". > > > > Original: > > For example, the NA interval needs to be > > dynamically adjusted according to a vehicle's speed so that the > > vehicle can maintain its neighboring vehicles in a stable way, ... > > > > Perhaps: > > For example, the NA interval needs to be > > dynamically adjusted according to a vehicle's speed so that the > > vehicle can maintain its position relative to its neighboring > > vehicles in a stable way, ... > > --> > > > > > > 17) <!-- [rfced] How may this text be rephrased to clarify it? The > > original reads as though the RFC "installs the ND cache entries". > > > > Original: > > [RFC8505], as > > opposed to [RFC4861], is stateful and proactively installs the ND > > cache entries, which saves broadcasts and provides deterministic > > presence information for IPv6 addresses. Mainly it updates the > > Address Registration Option (ARO) of ND defined in [RFC6775] to > > include a status field that can indicate the movement of a node and > > optionally a Transaction ID (TID) field, i.e., a sequence number that > > can be used to determine the most recent location of a node. > > > > Perhaps: > > (Option A) > > [RFC8505], as > > opposed to [RFC4861], states how to proactively install the ND > > cache entries. This saves broadcasts and provides deterministic > > presence information for IPv6 addresses. The installation then > > updates the Address Registration Option (ARO) of ND defined in > > [RFC6775] to include a status field that can indicate the movement > > of a node and optionally a Transaction ID (TID) field, i.e., a > > sequence number that can be used to determine the most recent > > location of a node. > > > > (Option B) > > The extension described in [RFC8505] is stateful > > and proactively installs the ND cache entries; this saves broadcasts > > and provides deterministic presence information for IPv6 addresses. > > Mainly, it updates the Address Registration Option (ARO) of ND > > defined in [RFC6775] to include a status field (which can indicate > > the movement of a node) and optionally a Transaction ID (TID) field > > (which is a sequence number that can be used to determine the most > > recent location of a node). > > --> > > > > > > 18) <!-- [rfced] Please clarify "the SLAAC with [RFC8505]". Does it > > mean "SLAAC with the registration extension specified in > > [RFC8505]" or otherwise? > > > > Also, will the phrase "costs a DAD" be clear to the reader? > > Does it mean "costs DAD overhead" or otherwise? > > > > Original: > > Even though the SLAAC with classic ND costs a DAD during mobility > > management, the SLAAC with [RFC8505] and/or AERO/OMNI do not cost a > > DAD. > > > > Perhaps: > > Even though SLAAC with classic ND costs DAD overhead during > > mobility management, SLAAC with the registration extension > > specified in [RFC8505] and/or with AERO/OMNI does not cost DAD > overhead. > > --> > > > > > > 19) <!--[rfced] Please clarify "among them"; does it mean mutual > > authentication of the vehicles? > > > > Original: > > In addition, > > to prevent bogus IP-RSUs and MA from interfering with the IPv6 > > mobility of vehicles, mutual authentication among them needs to be > > performed by certificates (e.g., TLS certificate). > > > > Perhaps: > > In addition, > > to prevent bogus IP-RSUs and MA from interfering with the IPv6 > > mobility of vehicles, mutual authentication of the vehicles needs > > to be performed by certificates (e.g., TLS certificate). > > > > Or simply cut "among them": > > In addition, > > to prevent bogus IP-RSUs and MA from interfering with the IPv6 > > mobility of vehicles, mutual authentication needs to be > > performed by certificates (e.g., TLS certificate). > > --> > > > > > > 20) <!-- [rfced] Would you like the references to be alphabetized > > or left in their current order? (This would be done by setting > > the rfc element's sortRefs attribute to true.) > > --> > > > > > > 21) <!-- [rfced] The title in this reference does not match the title of > the > > document available from the provided URL. So would you like to keep > > the URL and update the title? Or, perhaps a different URL was intended? > > > > Original: > > [FCC-ITS-Modification] > > Federal Communications Commission, "Use of the 5.850-5.925 > > GHz Band, First Report and Order, Further Notice of > > Proposed Rulemaking, and Order of Proposed Modification, > > FCC 19-138", Available: https://www.fcc.gov/document/fcc- > > modernizes-59-ghz-band-improve-wi-fi-and-automotive- > > safety-0, November 2020. > > > > Perhaps: > > [FCC-ITS-Modification] > > Federal Communications Commission, "FCC Modernizes 5.9 GHz > > Band to Improve Wi-Fi and Automotive Safety", November > 2020, > > <https://www.fcc.gov/document/fcc-modernizes-59- > > ghz-band-improve-wi-fi-and-automotive-safety-0>. > > --> > > > > > > 22) <!-- [rfced] Are there exactly two modes for routing in RPL? > > If so, may we update the sentence as follows? > > > > Original: > > There are two modes for routing in RPL > > such as non-storing mode and storing mode. > > > > Perhaps (remove "such as"): > > There are two modes for routing in RPL: > > non-storing mode and storing mode. > > --> > > > > > > 23) <!-- [rfced] Some author comments are present in the XML. Please > confirm > > that no updates related to these comments are outstanding. Note that the > > comments will be deleted prior to publication. > > --> > > > > > > 24) <!-- [rfced] Terminology and Capitalization > > > > a) Will it be clear to readers what the following terms are? If not, > > please let us know if definitions should be added to Section 2. > > > > gNodeB > > eNodeB > > > > We note that RFC 9269 contains: > > eNodeB: The eNodeB is a base station entity that supports the Long > > Term Evolution (LTE) air interface. > > > > > > b) In this definition, "Vehicle" is capitalized but throughout the > > document it isn't. Would you like to make this instance lowercase or, > > would you like any other instances of "vehicle" to be capitalized? > > > > Original: > > * Vehicle: A Vehicle in this document is a node that has an IP-OBU > > for wireless communication with other vehicles and IP-RSUs. > > > > > > c) In this definition, "Vehicular Cloud” is capitalized but throughout > the > > document it is sometimes capitalized and sometimes not. How may we > update > > for consistency? > > > > Original: > > * Vehicular Cloud: A cloud infrastructure for vehicular networks, > > having compute nodes, storage nodes, and network forwarding > > elements (e.g., switch and router). > > --> > > > > > > 25) <!-- [rfced] Please review the "Inclusive Language" portion of the > online > > Style Guide < > https://www.rfc-editor.org/styleguide/part2/#inclusive_language> > > and let us know if any changes are needed. > > > > Note that our script did not flag any words in particular, but this > should > > still be reviewed as a best practice. > > > > In addition, please consider whether "traditional helicopter" should be > > updated for clarity. 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- [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9365 <draft-ietf-ipwav… rfc-editor
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9365 <draft-ietf-i… rfc-editor
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9365 <draft-ietf-i… Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9365 <draft-ietf-i… Alice Russo
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9365 <draft-ietf-i… Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9365 <draft-ietf-i… Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9365 <draft-ietf-i… Alice Russo
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9365 <draft-ietf-i… Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9365 <draft-ietf-i… Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9365 <draft-ietf-i… Alice Russo
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9365 <draft-ietf-i… Alice Russo
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9365 <draft-ietf-i… Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9365 <draft-ietf-i… Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9365 <draft-ietf-i… Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9365 <draft-ietf-i… Alice Russo
- [auth48] [AD] - Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9365 <draft… Alice Russo
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9365 <draft-ietf-i… Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9365 <draft-ietf-i… Alice Russo
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9365 <draft-ietf-i… Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9365 <draft-ietf-i… Alice Russo
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9365 <draft-ietf-i… Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9365 <draft-ietf-i… Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9365 <draft-ietf-i… Alice Russo
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9365 <draft-ietf-i… Erik Kline
- Re: [auth48] [AD] - Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9365 <d… Erik Kline
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9365 <draft-ietf-i… Alice Russo
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9365 <draft-ietf-i… Alice Russo
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9365 <draft-ietf-i… Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9365 <draft-ietf-i… Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9365 <draft-ietf-i… Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9365 <draft-ietf-i… Alice Russo
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9365 <draft-ietf-i… Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9365 <draft-ietf-i… Alice Russo
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9365 <draft-ietf-i… Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong