Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9481 <draft-ietf-lamps-cmp-algorithms-15> for your review

John Gray <John.Gray@entrust.com> Thu, 19 October 2023 18:37 UTC

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Yes, I agree with the publication of this version.

John Gray


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Subject: RE: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9481 <draft-ietf-lamps-cmp-algorithms-15> for your review

I agree with the publication of this version. This is my first time doing this.

Do I need to do something through Datatracker in conjunction with this page?
https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9481

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Mike Ounsworth

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Subject: [EXTERNAL] AW: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9481 <draft-ietf-lamps-cmp-algorithms-15> for your review

RFC Editor, ADs, LAMPS Chairs Please find attached the result of the AUTH48 review. All feedbacks to [rfced] comments and any additional comments and changes are available in the .xml document. The .txt, .html, and .pdf documents are added


RFC Editor, ADs, LAMPS Chairs



Please find attached the result of the AUTH48 review.

All feedbacks to [rfced] comments and any additional comments and changes are available in the .xml document.

The .txt, .html, and .pdf documents are added just for convenience.

If all these changes are OK, I am fine with this version to be published.

Many thanks to everyone supporting this effort!



@co-authors, can you please confirm if you also agree with the publication of this version.



Hendrik



> -----Ursprüngliche Nachricht-----

> Von: rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org<mailto:rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org> <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org<mailto:rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org>>

> Gesendet: Dienstag, 19. September 2023 08:18

> An: Brockhaus, Hendrik (T CST SEA-DE) <hendrik.brockhaus@siemens.com<mailto:hendrik.brockhaus@siemens.com>>;

> Aschauer, Hans (T CST SES-DE) <hans.aschauer@siemens.com<mailto:hans.aschauer@siemens.com>>; Mike

> Ounsworth <Mike.Ounsworth@entrust.com<mailto:Mike.Ounsworth@entrust.com>>; John Gray

> <John.Gray@entrust.com<mailto:John.Gray@entrust.com>>

> Cc: rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org<mailto:rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org>; lamps-ads@ietf.org<mailto:lamps-ads@ietf.org>; lamps-chairs@ietf.org<mailto:lamps-chairs@ietf.org>;

> housley@vigilsec.com<mailto:housley@vigilsec.com>; auth48archive@rfc-editor.org<mailto:auth48archive@rfc-editor.org>

> Betreff: Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9481 <draft-ietf-lamps-cmp-algorithms-15>

> for your review

>

> Authors,

>

> While reviewing this document during AUTH48, please resolve (as necessary)

> the following questions, which are also in the XML file.

>

> 1) <!-- [rfced] The algorithms must be supported to conform with what?

> Please clarify.

>

> Original:

>    RFC 4210 Appendix D.2 [RFC4210] contains a set of algorithms,

>    mandatory to be supported by conforming implementations.

>

> Perhaps:

>    It is mandatory for implementations conformant with CMP to support the

>    set of algorithms defined in Appendix D.2 of [RFC4210].

> -->

>

>

> 2) <!--[rfced] Should "cryptoanalysis" be updated to be "cryptanalysis"?

>

> Original:

>   In general, new attacks are emerging due to research

>   cryptoanalysis or increase in computing power.

>

> Perhaps:

>   In general, new attacks are emerging due to research

>   cryptanalysis or increase in computing power.

> -->

>

>

> 3) <!-- [rfced] Should "(SHAKEs)" be "(XOF)"?  Or is "SHAKEs" an example of

> an XOF?

>

> Original:

>    The SHA-3 family of hash functions is defined in FIPS Pub 202

>    [NIST.FIPS.202] and includes fixed output length variants SHA3-224,

>    SHA3-256, SHA3-384, and SHA3-512, as well as extendable-output

>    functions (SHAKEs) SHAKE128 and SHAKE256.

>

> Perhaps:

>    The SHA-3 family of hash functions is defined in FIPS Pub 202

>    [NIST_FIPS_202] and includes fixed output length variants SHA3-224,

>    SHA3-256, SHA3-384, and SHA3-512, as well as extendable-output

>    functions (XOFs) such as SHAKE128 and SHAKE256.

> -->

>

>

> 4) <!--[rfced] Should instances of "ECDSA signature algorithm" and "EdDSA

> signature algorithm" be updated to read simply "ECDSA" and "EdDSA" to

> avoid

> redundancy? If expanded, "ECDSA signature algorithm" would read "Elliptic

> Curve Digital Signature Algorithm signature algorithm" and "EdDSA signature

> algorithm" would read "Edwards-curve Digital Signature Algorithm signature

> algorithm". Please review and let us know if any updates are needed.

> -->

>

>

> 5) <!--[rfced] May we expand "SECP" as "Standard for Efficient Cryptography"?

>

> Original:

>    As specified in RFC 5480 [RFC5480] the NIST-recommended SECP curves

>    are identified by the following OIDs:

> -->

>

>

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> --------------------------------------

> RFC9481 (draft-ietf-lamps-cmp-algorithms-15)

>

> Title            : Certificate Management Protocol (CMP) Algorithms

> Author(s)        : H. Brockhaus, H. Aschauer, M. Ounsworth, J. Gray

> WG Chair(s)      : Russ Housley, Tim Hollebeek

> Area Director(s) : Roman Danyliw, Paul Wouters

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