Re: [auth48] [AD] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9481 <draft-ietf-lamps-cmp-algorithms-15> for your review

Roman Danyliw <rdd@cert.org> Mon, 30 October 2023 15:55 UTC

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From: Roman Danyliw <rdd@cert.org>
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Subject: Re: [auth48] [AD] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9481 <draft-ietf-lamps-cmp-algorithms-15> for your review
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Hi!

Approved.

Thanks,
Roman

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Alanna Paloma <apaloma@amsl.com>
> Sent: Monday, October 30, 2023 11:41 AM
> To: Roman Danyliw <rdd@cert.org>
> Cc: John Gray <John.Gray=40entrust.com@dmarc.ietf.org>; Mike Ounsworth
> <Mike.Ounsworth@entrust.com>; Brockhaus, Hendrik
> <hendrik.brockhaus@siemens.com>; rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org; lamps-
> ads@ietf.org; lamps-chairs@ietf.org; housley@vigilsec.com;
> auth48archive@rfc-editor.org; Aschauer, Hans <hans.aschauer@siemens.com>
> Subject: Re: [AD] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9481 <draft-ietf-lamps-cmp-algorithms-
> 15> for your review
> 
> Hi Roman (AD),
> 
> This is a friendly reminder that we await you review and approval of the
> following changes. The changes can be seen in this diff file: https://www.rfc-
> editor.org/authors/rfc9481-auth48diff.html
> 
>  -Section 6.2.3: updated sourcecode
>  -RFCs 8551 and 8692 have moved from the Informative References section to
> the Normative References section
> 
> Thank you,
> RFC Editor/ap
> 
> > On Oct 26, 2023, at 8:15 AM, Alanna Paloma <apaloma@amsl.com> wrote:
> >
> > Hi Hans,
> >
> > We have noted your approval on the AUTH48 status page:
> > https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9481
> >
> > We will await approval from Roman (AD) prior to moving this document
> forward in the publication process.
> >
> > Thank you,
> > RFC Editor/ap
> >
> >> On Oct 26, 2023, at 1:05 AM, Aschauer, Hans
> <hans.aschauer@siemens.com> wrote:
> >>
> >> Yes --  I agree with the publication of this version Best regards,
> >> Hans
> >>
> >> -----Original Message-----
> >> From: Alanna Paloma <apaloma@amsl.com>
> >> Sent: Friday, 20 October 2023 18:13
> >> To: John Gray <John.Gray=40entrust.com@dmarc.ietf.org>; Mike
> >> Ounsworth <Mike.Ounsworth@entrust.com>; Brockhaus, Hendrik (T CST
> >> SEA-DE) <hendrik.brockhaus@siemens.com>; Roman Danyliw
> <rdd@cert.org>
> >> Cc: rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org; lamps-ads@ietf.org;
> >> lamps-chairs@ietf.org; housley@vigilsec.com; Aschauer, Hans (T CST
> >> SES-DE) <hans.aschauer@siemens.com>; auth48archive@rfc-editor.org
> >> Subject: Re: [AD] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9481
> >> <draft-ietf-lamps-cmp-algorithms-15> for your review
> >>
> >> Hi Mike, Hendrik, John, and Roman (AD)*,
> >>
> >> *Roman - As the AD, please review and approve of the following updates in
> this document:
> >> - Section 6.2.3: updated sourcecode
> >> - moving RFCs 8551 and 8692 from the Informative References section
> >> to the Normative References section
> >>
> >> These updates can be see I’m this file:
> >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9481-auth48diff.html
> >>
> >> Mike, Hendrik, and John - Thank you for the updated XML file. We have
> updated the other files accordingly and noted your approvals on the AUTH48
> status page:
> >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9481
> >>
> >> The files have been posted here (please refresh):
> >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9481.txt
> >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9481.pdf
> >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9481.html
> >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9481.xml
> >>
> >> The relevant diff files are posted here:
> >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9481-diff.html (comprehensive
> >> diff) https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9481-auth48diff.html (all
> >> AUTH48 changes)
> >>
> >> Please review the document carefully as documents do not change once
> published as RFCs.
> >>
> >> We will await any further changes you may have and approvals from Hans
> and *Roman prior to moving forward in the publication process.
> >>
> >> Thank you,
> >> RFC Editor/ap
> >>
> >>> On Oct 19, 2023, at 11:37 AM, John Gray
> <John.Gray=40entrust.com@dmarc.ietf.org> wrote:
> >>>
> >>> Yes, I agree with the publication of this version.
> >>>
> >>> John Gray
> >>>
> >>>
> >>> From: Mike Ounsworth <Mike.Ounsworth@entrust.com>
> >>> Sent: Thursday, October 19, 2023 12:33 PM
> >>> To: Brockhaus, Hendrik <hendrik.brockhaus@siemens.com>;
> >>> rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org; lamps-ads@ietf.org;
> >>> lamps-chairs@ietf.org; housley@vigilsec.com;
> >>> hans.aschauer@siemens.com; John Gray <John.Gray@entrust.com>
> >>> Cc: auth48archive@rfc-editor.org
> >>> Subject: RE: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9481
> >>> <draft-ietf-lamps-cmp-algorithms-15> for your review
> >>>
> >>> I agree with the publication of this version. This is my first time doing this.
> >>>
> >>> Do I need to do something through Datatracker in conjunction with this
> page?
> >>> https://www/.
> >>> rfc-editor.org%2Fauth48%2Frfc9481&data=05%7C01%7Cbe7be106-7265-
> 4ae1-
> >>> 91
> >>> 86-
> 0cfdc8d79d7b%40ad011.siemens.com%7C49291846377b4d6307de08dbd1876
> a
> >>> 2a
> >>>
> %7C38ae3bcd95794fd4addab42e1495d55a%7C1%7C0%7C638334152145993
> 697%7CU
> >>> nk
> >>>
> nown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQIjoiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1
> ha
> >>> Ww
> >>>
> iLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C3000%7C%7C%7C&sdata=bUWCPwCU9Dx4l%2B%2Blil
> 34G%2Bfy
> >>> TV
> >>> XaYkcpXzfrW0LvrMU%3D&reserved=0
> >>>
> >>> ---
> >>> Mike Ounsworth
> >>>
> >>> From: Brockhaus, Hendrik <hendrik.brockhaus@siemens.com>
> >>> Sent: Thursday, October 19, 2023 11:24 AM
> >>> To: rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org; lamps-ads@ietf.org;
> >>> lamps-chairs@ietf.org;
> >>> housley@vigilsec.com;hans.aschauer@siemens.com;
> >>> Mike Ounsworth <Mike.Ounsworth@entrust.com>; John Gray
> >>> <John.Gray@entrust.com>
> >>> Cc: auth48archive@rfc-editor.org
> >>> Subject: [EXTERNAL] AW: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9481
> >>> <draft-ietf-lamps-cmp-algorithms-15> for your review
> >>>
> >>> RFC Editor, ADs, LAMPS Chairs Please find attached the result of the
> >>> AUTH48 review. All feedbacks to [rfced] comments and any additional
> >>> comments and changes are available in the .xml document. The .txt,
> >>> .html, and .pdf documents are added RFC Editor, ADs, LAMPS Chairs
> >>>
> >>> Please find attached the result of the AUTH48 review.
> >>> All feedbacks to [rfced] comments and any additional comments and
> changes are available in the .xml document.
> >>> The .txt, .html, and .pdf documents are added just for convenience.
> >>> If all these changes are OK, I am fine with this version to be published.
> >>> Many thanks to everyone supporting this effort!
> >>>
> >>> @co-authors, can you please confirm if you also agree with the publication
> of this version.
> >>>
> >>> Hendrik
> >>>
> >>>> -----Ursprüngliche Nachricht-----
> >>>> Von: rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org>
> >>>> Gesendet: Dienstag, 19. September 2023 08:18
> >>>> An: Brockhaus, Hendrik (T CST SEA-DE)
> >>>> <hendrik.brockhaus@siemens.com>; Aschauer, Hans (T CST SES-DE)
> >>>> <hans.aschauer@siemens.com>; Mike Ounsworth
> >>>> <Mike.Ounsworth@entrust.com>; John Gray <John.Gray@entrust.com>
> >>>> Cc: rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org; lamps-ads@ietf.org;
> >>>> lamps-chairs@ietf.org; housley@vigilsec.com;
> >>>> auth48archive@rfc-editor.org
> >>>> Betreff: Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9481
> >>>> <draft-ietf-lamps-cmp-algorithms-15>
> >>>> for your review
> >>>>
> >>>> Authors,
> >>>>
> >>>> While reviewing this document during AUTH48, please resolve (as
> >>>> necessary) the following questions, which are also in the XML file.
> >>>>
> >>>> 1) <!-- [rfced] The algorithms must be supported to conform with what?
> >>>> Please clarify.
> >>>>
> >>>> Original:
> >>>>  RFC 4210 Appendix D.2 [RFC4210] contains a set of algorithms,
> >>>> mandatory to be supported by conforming implementations.
> >>>>
> >>>> Perhaps:
> >>>>  It is mandatory for implementations conformant with CMP to support
> >>>> the  set of algorithms defined in Appendix D.2 of [RFC4210].
> >>>> -->
> >>>>
> >>>>
> >>>> 2) <!--[rfced] Should "cryptoanalysis" be updated to be "cryptanalysis"?
> >>>>
> >>>> Original:
> >>>> In general, new attacks are emerging due to research cryptoanalysis
> >>>> or increase in computing power.
> >>>>
> >>>> Perhaps:
> >>>> In general, new attacks are emerging due to research cryptanalysis
> >>>> or increase in computing power.
> >>>> -->
> >>>>
> >>>>
> >>>> 3) <!-- [rfced] Should "(SHAKEs)" be "(XOF)"?  Or is "SHAKEs" an
> >>>> example of an XOF?
> >>>>
> >>>> Original:
> >>>>  The SHA-3 family of hash functions is defined in FIPS Pub 202
> >>>> [NIST.FIPS.202] and includes fixed output length variants SHA3-224,
> >>>> SHA3-256, SHA3-384, and SHA3-512, as well as extendable-output
> >>>> functions (SHAKEs) SHAKE128 and SHAKE256.
> >>>>
> >>>> Perhaps:
> >>>>  The SHA-3 family of hash functions is defined in FIPS Pub 202
> >>>> [NIST_FIPS_202] and includes fixed output length variants SHA3-224,
> >>>> SHA3-256, SHA3-384, and SHA3-512, as well as extendable-output
> >>>> functions (XOFs) such as SHAKE128 and SHAKE256.
> >>>> -->
> >>>>
> >>>>
> >>>> 4) <!--[rfced] Should instances of "ECDSA signature algorithm" and
> >>>> "EdDSA signature algorithm" be updated to read simply "ECDSA" and
> >>>> "EdDSA" to avoid redundancy? If expanded, "ECDSA signature
> >>>> algorithm" would read "Elliptic Curve Digital Signature Algorithm
> >>>> signature algorithm" and "EdDSA signature algorithm" would read
> >>>> "Edwards-curve Digital Signature Algorithm signature algorithm".
> >>>> Please review and let us know if any updates are needed.
> >>>> -->
> >>>>
> >>>>
> >>>> 5) <!--[rfced] May we expand "SECP" as "Standard for Efficient
> Cryptography"?
> >>>>
> >>>> Original:
> >>>>  As specified in RFC 5480 [RFC5480] the NIST-recommended SECP
> >>>> curves  are identified by the following OIDs:
> >>>> -->
> >>>>
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> >>>> know if/how this this citation should be updated.
> >>>>
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> >>>> RFC 4210 Appendix D and E [RFC4210] and as KM_KL_ALG in the
> >>>> Lightweight CMP Profile [I-D.ietf-lamps-lightweight-cmp-profile],
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> >>>> in Section 7.1, not Section 7.2. "KM_KW_ALG" and "PROT_SYM_ALG" are
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> KM_KD_ALG)
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> >>>>
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> >>>>
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> 7%7CU
> >>>> n
> >>>>
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> GnTzkl7
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> >>>>
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> >>>>
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> >>>>
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> 7%7CU
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> >>>>
> d4addab42e1495d55a%7C1%7C0%7C638307011095161494%7CUnknown%7
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> GnTzkl7
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> >>>>
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> >>>>
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> >>>>
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> >>>>
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> 7%7CU
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> >>>>
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> GnTzkl7
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> >>>> c-
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> >>>> k
> haus%40siemens.com%7C0bfb160ff5cc4a029a6208dbb8d839f2%7C38ae3bcd
> >>>>
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> >>>>
> >>>>
> >>>> Tracking progress
> >>>> -----------------
> >>>>
> >>>> The details of the AUTH48 status of your document are here:
> >>>>
> >>>> https://ur/
> >>>> ldefense.com%2Fv3%2F__https%3A%2F%2Fwww.rf%2F__%3B!!FJ-
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> >>>> j
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> WpCmlJkAud9LzM
> >>>> L
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> >>>> -
> >>>>
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> a2a
> >>>> %
> >>>>
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> >>>> n
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> >>>> 7
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> >>>> c-
> >>>>
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> >>>>
> emens.com%7C0bfb160ff5cc4a029a6208dbb8d839f2%7C38ae3bcd95794fd4a
> >>>>
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> >>>>
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> >>>> FLrdJDXIC0PZXDD%2Ftn34%3D&reserved=0
> >>>>
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