Re: [auth48] [AD] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9481 <draft-ietf-lamps-cmp-algorithms-15> for your review
Roman Danyliw <rdd@cert.org> Mon, 30 October 2023 15:55 UTC
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From: Roman Danyliw <rdd@cert.org>
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Subject: Re: [auth48] [AD] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9481 <draft-ietf-lamps-cmp-algorithms-15> for your review
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Hi! Approved. Thanks, Roman > -----Original Message----- > From: Alanna Paloma <apaloma@amsl.com> > Sent: Monday, October 30, 2023 11:41 AM > To: Roman Danyliw <rdd@cert.org> > Cc: John Gray <John.Gray=40entrust.com@dmarc.ietf.org>; Mike Ounsworth > <Mike.Ounsworth@entrust.com>; Brockhaus, Hendrik > <hendrik.brockhaus@siemens.com>; rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org; lamps- > ads@ietf.org; lamps-chairs@ietf.org; housley@vigilsec.com; > auth48archive@rfc-editor.org; Aschauer, Hans <hans.aschauer@siemens.com> > Subject: Re: [AD] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9481 <draft-ietf-lamps-cmp-algorithms- > 15> for your review > > Hi Roman (AD), > > This is a friendly reminder that we await you review and approval of the > following changes. The changes can be seen in this diff file: https://www.rfc- > editor.org/authors/rfc9481-auth48diff.html > > -Section 6.2.3: updated sourcecode > -RFCs 8551 and 8692 have moved from the Informative References section to > the Normative References section > > Thank you, > RFC Editor/ap > > > On Oct 26, 2023, at 8:15 AM, Alanna Paloma <apaloma@amsl.com> wrote: > > > > Hi Hans, > > > > We have noted your approval on the AUTH48 status page: > > https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9481 > > > > We will await approval from Roman (AD) prior to moving this document > forward in the publication process. > > > > Thank you, > > RFC Editor/ap > > > >> On Oct 26, 2023, at 1:05 AM, Aschauer, Hans > <hans.aschauer@siemens.com> wrote: > >> > >> Yes -- I agree with the publication of this version Best regards, > >> Hans > >> > >> -----Original Message----- > >> From: Alanna Paloma <apaloma@amsl.com> > >> Sent: Friday, 20 October 2023 18:13 > >> To: John Gray <John.Gray=40entrust.com@dmarc.ietf.org>; Mike > >> Ounsworth <Mike.Ounsworth@entrust.com>; Brockhaus, Hendrik (T CST > >> SEA-DE) <hendrik.brockhaus@siemens.com>; Roman Danyliw > <rdd@cert.org> > >> Cc: rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org; lamps-ads@ietf.org; > >> lamps-chairs@ietf.org; housley@vigilsec.com; Aschauer, Hans (T CST > >> SES-DE) <hans.aschauer@siemens.com>; auth48archive@rfc-editor.org > >> Subject: Re: [AD] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9481 > >> <draft-ietf-lamps-cmp-algorithms-15> for your review > >> > >> Hi Mike, Hendrik, John, and Roman (AD)*, > >> > >> *Roman - As the AD, please review and approve of the following updates in > this document: > >> - Section 6.2.3: updated sourcecode > >> - moving RFCs 8551 and 8692 from the Informative References section > >> to the Normative References section > >> > >> These updates can be see I’m this file: > >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9481-auth48diff.html > >> > >> Mike, Hendrik, and John - Thank you for the updated XML file. We have > updated the other files accordingly and noted your approvals on the AUTH48 > status page: > >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9481 > >> > >> The files have been posted here (please refresh): > >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9481.txt > >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9481.pdf > >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9481.html > >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9481.xml > >> > >> The relevant diff files are posted here: > >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9481-diff.html (comprehensive > >> diff) https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9481-auth48diff.html (all > >> AUTH48 changes) > >> > >> Please review the document carefully as documents do not change once > published as RFCs. > >> > >> We will await any further changes you may have and approvals from Hans > and *Roman prior to moving forward in the publication process. > >> > >> Thank you, > >> RFC Editor/ap > >> > >>> On Oct 19, 2023, at 11:37 AM, John Gray > <John.Gray=40entrust.com@dmarc.ietf.org> wrote: > >>> > >>> Yes, I agree with the publication of this version. > >>> > >>> John Gray > >>> > >>> > >>> From: Mike Ounsworth <Mike.Ounsworth@entrust.com> > >>> Sent: Thursday, October 19, 2023 12:33 PM > >>> To: Brockhaus, Hendrik <hendrik.brockhaus@siemens.com>; > >>> rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org; lamps-ads@ietf.org; > >>> lamps-chairs@ietf.org; housley@vigilsec.com; > >>> hans.aschauer@siemens.com; John Gray <John.Gray@entrust.com> > >>> Cc: auth48archive@rfc-editor.org > >>> Subject: RE: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9481 > >>> <draft-ietf-lamps-cmp-algorithms-15> for your review > >>> > >>> I agree with the publication of this version. This is my first time doing this. > >>> > >>> Do I need to do something through Datatracker in conjunction with this > page? > >>> https://www/. > >>> rfc-editor.org%2Fauth48%2Frfc9481&data=05%7C01%7Cbe7be106-7265- > 4ae1- > >>> 91 > >>> 86- > 0cfdc8d79d7b%40ad011.siemens.com%7C49291846377b4d6307de08dbd1876 > a > >>> 2a > >>> > %7C38ae3bcd95794fd4addab42e1495d55a%7C1%7C0%7C638334152145993 > 697%7CU > >>> nk > >>> > nown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQIjoiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1 > ha > >>> Ww > >>> > iLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C3000%7C%7C%7C&sdata=bUWCPwCU9Dx4l%2B%2Blil > 34G%2Bfy > >>> TV > >>> XaYkcpXzfrW0LvrMU%3D&reserved=0 > >>> > >>> --- > >>> Mike Ounsworth > >>> > >>> From: Brockhaus, Hendrik <hendrik.brockhaus@siemens.com> > >>> Sent: Thursday, October 19, 2023 11:24 AM > >>> To: rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org; lamps-ads@ietf.org; > >>> lamps-chairs@ietf.org; > >>> housley@vigilsec.com;hans.aschauer@siemens.com; > >>> Mike Ounsworth <Mike.Ounsworth@entrust.com>; John Gray > >>> <John.Gray@entrust.com> > >>> Cc: auth48archive@rfc-editor.org > >>> Subject: [EXTERNAL] AW: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9481 > >>> <draft-ietf-lamps-cmp-algorithms-15> for your review > >>> > >>> RFC Editor, ADs, LAMPS Chairs Please find attached the result of the > >>> AUTH48 review. All feedbacks to [rfced] comments and any additional > >>> comments and changes are available in the .xml document. The .txt, > >>> .html, and .pdf documents are added RFC Editor, ADs, LAMPS Chairs > >>> > >>> Please find attached the result of the AUTH48 review. > >>> All feedbacks to [rfced] comments and any additional comments and > changes are available in the .xml document. > >>> The .txt, .html, and .pdf documents are added just for convenience. > >>> If all these changes are OK, I am fine with this version to be published. > >>> Many thanks to everyone supporting this effort! > >>> > >>> @co-authors, can you please confirm if you also agree with the publication > of this version. > >>> > >>> Hendrik > >>> > >>>> -----Ursprüngliche Nachricht----- > >>>> Von: rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org> > >>>> Gesendet: Dienstag, 19. September 2023 08:18 > >>>> An: Brockhaus, Hendrik (T CST SEA-DE) > >>>> <hendrik.brockhaus@siemens.com>; Aschauer, Hans (T CST SES-DE) > >>>> <hans.aschauer@siemens.com>; Mike Ounsworth > >>>> <Mike.Ounsworth@entrust.com>; John Gray <John.Gray@entrust.com> > >>>> Cc: rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org; lamps-ads@ietf.org; > >>>> lamps-chairs@ietf.org; housley@vigilsec.com; > >>>> auth48archive@rfc-editor.org > >>>> Betreff: Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9481 > >>>> <draft-ietf-lamps-cmp-algorithms-15> > >>>> for your review > >>>> > >>>> Authors, > >>>> > >>>> While reviewing this document during AUTH48, please resolve (as > >>>> necessary) the following questions, which are also in the XML file. > >>>> > >>>> 1) <!-- [rfced] The algorithms must be supported to conform with what? > >>>> Please clarify. > >>>> > >>>> Original: > >>>> RFC 4210 Appendix D.2 [RFC4210] contains a set of algorithms, > >>>> mandatory to be supported by conforming implementations. > >>>> > >>>> Perhaps: > >>>> It is mandatory for implementations conformant with CMP to support > >>>> the set of algorithms defined in Appendix D.2 of [RFC4210]. > >>>> --> > >>>> > >>>> > >>>> 2) <!--[rfced] Should "cryptoanalysis" be updated to be "cryptanalysis"? > >>>> > >>>> Original: > >>>> In general, new attacks are emerging due to research cryptoanalysis > >>>> or increase in computing power. > >>>> > >>>> Perhaps: > >>>> In general, new attacks are emerging due to research cryptanalysis > >>>> or increase in computing power. > >>>> --> > >>>> > >>>> > >>>> 3) <!-- [rfced] Should "(SHAKEs)" be "(XOF)"? Or is "SHAKEs" an > >>>> example of an XOF? > >>>> > >>>> Original: > >>>> The SHA-3 family of hash functions is defined in FIPS Pub 202 > >>>> [NIST.FIPS.202] and includes fixed output length variants SHA3-224, > >>>> SHA3-256, SHA3-384, and SHA3-512, as well as extendable-output > >>>> functions (SHAKEs) SHAKE128 and SHAKE256. > >>>> > >>>> Perhaps: > >>>> The SHA-3 family of hash functions is defined in FIPS Pub 202 > >>>> [NIST_FIPS_202] and includes fixed output length variants SHA3-224, > >>>> SHA3-256, SHA3-384, and SHA3-512, as well as extendable-output > >>>> functions (XOFs) such as SHAKE128 and SHAKE256. > >>>> --> > >>>> > >>>> > >>>> 4) <!--[rfced] Should instances of "ECDSA signature algorithm" and > >>>> "EdDSA signature algorithm" be updated to read simply "ECDSA" and > >>>> "EdDSA" to avoid redundancy? If expanded, "ECDSA signature > >>>> algorithm" would read "Elliptic Curve Digital Signature Algorithm > >>>> signature algorithm" and "EdDSA signature algorithm" would read > >>>> "Edwards-curve Digital Signature Algorithm signature algorithm". > >>>> Please review and let us know if any updates are needed. > >>>> --> > >>>> > >>>> > >>>> 5) <!--[rfced] May we expand "SECP" as "Standard for Efficient > Cryptography"? > >>>> > >>>> Original: > >>>> As specified in RFC 5480 [RFC5480] the NIST-recommended SECP > >>>> curves are identified by the following OIDs: > >>>> --> > >>>> > >>>> > >>>> 6) <!-- [rfced] Please review whether any of the notes in this > >>>> document should be in the <aside> element. 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Please review and let us > >>>> know if/how this this citation should be updated. > >>>> > >>>> Original: > >>>> The key transport algorithm is also referred to as PROT_ENC_ALG in > >>>> RFC 4210 Appendix D and E [RFC4210] and as KM_KL_ALG in the > >>>> Lightweight CMP Profile [I-D.ietf-lamps-lightweight-cmp-profile], > >>>> as well as in Section 7. > >>>> --> > >>>> > >>>> > >>>> 8) <!--[rfced] We note that "PROT_ENC_ALG" is defined in Section > >>>> 7.1, not Section 7.2. "KM_KA_ALG", "KM_KT_ALG", and "KM_KD_ALG" are > >>>> defined in Section 7.2, not Section 7.1. "SYM_PENC_ALG" is defined > >>>> in Section 7.1, not Section 7.2. "KM_KW_ALG" and "PROT_SYM_ALG" are > >>>> defined in Section 7.2, not Section 7.2. May we update these > >>>> citations accordingly? > >>>> > >>>> Original: > >>>> - Protection of centrally generated keys: The strength of the > >>>> algorithms used for the key management technique (Section 7.2: > >>>> PROT_ENC_ALG or Section 7.1: KM_KA_ALG, KM_KT_ALG, > KM_KD_ALG) > >>>> and the encryption of the content-encryption key and private > >>>> key (Section 7.2: SYM_PENC_ALG, PROT_SYM_ALG or Section 7.1: > >>>> KM_KW_ALG, PROT_SYM_ALG). > >>>> --> > >>>> > >>>> > >>>> 9) <!-- [rfced] It appears as though you tried to avoid citation > >>>> tags being read as part of the text. This has been altered in some > >>>> places to include links and avoid too much redundancy. 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- Re: [auth48] [EXTERNAL] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 948… Mike Ounsworth
- Re: [auth48] [EXTERNAL] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9481 <d… Alanna Paloma
- Re: [auth48] [EXTERNAL] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9481 <d… Alanna Paloma
- Re: [auth48] [EXTERNAL] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9481 <d… Brockhaus, Hendrik
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- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9481 <draft-ietf-l… Mike Ounsworth
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9481 <draft-ietf-l… John Gray
- Re: [auth48] [AD] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9481 <draft-i… Alanna Paloma
- Re: [auth48] [AD] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9481 <draft-i… Aschauer, Hans
- Re: [auth48] [AD] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9481 <draft-i… Alanna Paloma
- Re: [auth48] [AD] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9481 <draft-i… Alanna Paloma
- Re: [auth48] [AD] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9481 <draft-i… Roman Danyliw
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