Re: [auth48] [ISE] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9446 <draft-farrell-tenyearsafter-05> for your review
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See my answers in line for section 4 and my comment on how my name can be cited. Farzaneh On Tue, Jul 11, 2023 at 7:00 PM <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org> wrote: > Authors, > > While reviewing this document during AUTH48, please resolve (as necessary) > the following questions, which are also in the XML file. > > * Eliot (as ISE), please see #3 below. > > 1) <!-- [rfced] Steven, do you prefer your initials to be displayed as > "S." or "S. M." in the header of the document? > > --> > > > 2) <!-- [rfced] Please insert any keywords (beyond those that appear in > the title) for use on https://www.rfc-editor.org/search. --> > > > 3) <!-- [rfced] Abstract. Elliot, given the following in the > Acknowledgments section: "that of course doesn't mean that they necessarily > agree with the text", should the Abstract or the Introduction have a > disclaimer such as "The views expressed in this memo are those of the > authors"? > --> > > > 4) <!-- [rfced] Introduction. Does clarifying what caused the sea change > in the suggested text below improve the readability of the following > sentence? > > Original: > The breathtaking scope of the operations > shocked the Internet technical community that was reflected in a sea > change within the IETF, IAB, and other standards organizations. > > Perhaps: > The breathtaking scope of the operations > shocked the Internet technical community, and this shock caused a sea > change within the IETF, IAB, and other standards organizations. > --> > > > 5) <!--[rfced] Section 2. Please consider how the passage regarding Jacob > Appelbaum could be improved by providing more details. Was Appelbaum's > work with Poitras the films, "Citizenfour" and "Risk"? The clause "who had > not yet been accused of sexual assault by multiple women" seems unnecessary > here. Should it be dropped? > > Is there a reference that can be added to support the claim that Appelbaum > received the implant catalog from someone besides Snowden? If no supporting > references can be added, could the passage instead focus on Appelbaum's > reporting and the impact it had? Perhaps add a reference to < > https://www.spiegel.de/international/world/the-nsa-uses-powerful-toolbox-in-effort-to-spy-on-global-networks-a-940969.html> > or < > https://www.spiegel.de/international/world/nsa-secret-toolbox-ant-unit-offers-spy-gadgets-for-every-need-a-941006.html>. > Or perhaps the focus should be on the implant catalog and your analysis < > https://www.schneier.com/tag/exploit-of-the-day/>? > > Original: > > Jake Appelbaum, who > had not yet been accused of sexual assault by multiple women, was > working with Poitras. He partnered with Spiegel to release an > implant catalog from the NSA’s Tailored Access Operations group. To > this day, I am convinced that that document was not in the Snowden > archives: that Jake got it somehow, and it was released with the > implication that it was from Edward Snowden. > --> > > > 6) <!-- [rfced] Section 2. Please provide expansions for the conference > acronyms in the sentence below: > > Current: > When I got back from Rio, I gave talks at a private conference in > Woods Hole, the Berkman Center at Harvard, something called the > Congress and Privacy and Surveillance in Geneva, events at both CATO > and New America in DC, an event at the University of Pennsylvania, an > event at EPIC, a "Stop Watching Us" rally in DC, the RISCS conference > in London, the ISF in Paris > --> > > > 7) <!-- [rfced] Section 2. Would you like to provide a short list of > examples here, or should the phrase "for example" be removed from the last > sentence of the paragraph? > > Original: > What struck me at the IETF was the indignation in the room, and the > calls to action. And there was action, across many fronts. We > technologists did a lot to help secure the Internet, for example. > --> > > > 8) <!-- [rfced] Section 3. Does rewording the following to focus on IETF > participants improve the readability of the sentence? > > Original: > As for the IETF's reaction, informal meetings during the July 2013 > IETF meeting in Berlin indicated that IETF participants considered > that these revelations showed that we needed to do more to improve > the security and privacy properties of IETF protocols ... > > Perhaps: > As for the IETF's reaction, IETF participants met informally during > the July 2013 IETF meeting in Berlin to discuss these revelations, > which showed that we needed to do more to improve the security and > privacy properties of IETF protocols ... > --> > > > 9) <!-- [rfced] Section 4. Does the following sentence say that policies > and technical means have not been used to positively impact human rights > and that the Snowden revelations didn't revolutionize the use of policies > and technical means to do so? To whom does "our" refer to? > > Original: > Snowden revelations did not have a > revolutionary effect on our approach towards not using policies and > technical means that have an effect on human rights, such as freedom > of expression, freedom of association and assembly and privacy. > > Possibly: > The Snowden revelations did not revolutionize the use of policies > a technical means to support human rights such as freedom > of expression, freedom of association and assembly, and privacy. > --> > Maybe: The Snowden revelations did not revolutionize the Internet governance and technical approaches to support human rights such as freedom of expression, freedom of association and assembly, and privacy. > > > 10) <!-- [rfced] Section 4. FYI, the first sentence below is a fragment. Please let us know how to update it. Original: A range of European Union laws that aims to address online safety or concentration of data. There are many more regulations that have an impact on the Internet. Perhaps: A range of European Union laws aims to address online safety or concentration of data. There are many more regulations that have an impact on the Internet. --> That's good thanks. > > > 11) <!-- [rfced] Section 4. Does the following suggestion improve the > readability of the passage? > > Original: > It might have also expedited and helped with > more easily convening the Human Rights Protocol Considerations > research group in the Internet Research Task Force (IRTF). Co- > chaired by Niels ten Oever (who worked at Article 19 at the time) and > Internet governance activist Avri Doria, the Internet Research Task > Force in July 2015 chartered a Research Group on "Human Rights > Protocol Considerations" (the HRPC RG). The charter of the HRPC RG > stated that the group was established: "to research whether standards > and protocols can enable, strengthen or threaten human rights, as > defined in the UDHR and the International Covenant on Civil and > Political Rights (ICCPR)." > > Perhaps (removing some redundant text, clarifying that ten Oever and > Doria co-chaired the RG originally, and expanding UDHR): > It might have also expedited and helped with > more easily convening the Human Rights Protocol Considerations > Research Group (HRPC RG) in the Internet Research Task Force (IRTF) > in July 2015. The HRPC RG was originally co-chaired by Niels ten > Oever (who worked at Article 19 at the time) and Internet governance > activist Avri Doria. The charter of the HRPC RG states that the group > was established: "to research whether standards and protocols can > enable, strengthen, or threaten human rights, as defined in the > Universal Declaration of Human Rights (UDHR) and the International > Covenant on Civil and Political Rights (ICCPR)." > --> > Great change > > > 12) <!-- [rfced] Section 4. Please help us clarify the following > sentence. Does DoH contribute to the fight against censorship? > > Original: > For instance, we still have doubts about implementing DNS over HTTPS > without seriously considering its contributions to fight with > censorship and bring encryption to DNS queries. > --> For instance, the technical community and some network operators > still have doubts about implementation of DNS over HTTPS, despite its > potential to circumvent censorship and its ability to encrypt DNS queries. > > > 13) <!-- [rfced] Section 5.1. Regarding the following note to the RFC > Editor: > > Also, the authors have requested that you provide specific guidance on > the spelling of arabic names, specifically those in the following > sentence: > > In the 9th century, Abu Yusuf Ya’qub ibn ‘Ishaq aṣ-Ṣabbah al- > Kindh developed and wrote about frequency analysis as a way to crack > ciphers [Borda2011],[Kahn1996]. > > Our research indicates that the following is the more typical spelling > found in English, and we have updated the document accordingly: > > Abū Yūsuf Yaʻqūb ibn ʼIsḥāq aṣ-Ṣabbāḥ al-Kindī > --> > > > 14) <!-- [rfced] Section 5.2. Does the following update to reword "that > that" improve the readability of the sentence? > > Original: > NSA denied tampering with the design; a > Senate investigating committee found that that was correct... > > Perhaps: > NSA denied tampering with the design; a > Senate investigating committee found that assertion to be > correct... > --> > > > 15) <!-- [rfced] Informative References. FYI, we have provided proceedings > information for the following. Please let us know if any updates are > necessary. > > Original: > [LE] Aas, J., Barnes, R., Case, B., Durumeric, Z., Eckersley, > P., Flores-López, A., Halderman, A., Hoffman-Andrews, J., > Kasten, J., Rescorla, E., Schoen, S. D., and B. Warren, > "Let's Encrypt - an automated certificate authority to > encrypt the entire web", 2019, > <https://dl.acm.org/doi/pdf/10.1145/3319535.3363192>. > > Current: > [LE] Aas, J., Barnes, R., Case, B., Durumeric, Z., Eckersley, > P., Flores-López, A., Halderman, A., Hoffman-Andrews, J., > Kasten, J., Rescorla, E., Schoen, S. D., and B. Warren, > "Let's Encrypt: An Automated Certificate Authority to > Encrypt the Entire Web", CCS '19: Proceedings of the 2019 > ACM SIGSAC Conference on Computer and Communications > Security, November 2019, > <https://dl.acm.org/doi/pdf/10.1145/3319535.3363192>. > --> > > > 16) <!-- [rfced] Informative References. We note that the URLs provided > for ACM publications are inconsistent. Some point to acm.org; others > point to personal websites. May be update the URLs to point to acm.org? > The PDFs are freely available from that site. > > Original: > [Adrian2015] > Adrian, D., Bhargavan, K., Durumeric, Z., Gaudry, P., > Green, M., Halderman, J. A., and N. Heninger, "Imperfect > Forward Secrecy: How Diffie-Hellman Fails in Practice.", > Proceedings of the 22th ACM Conference on Computer and > Communications Security (CCS), 2015, > <https://weakdh.org/imperfect-forward-secrecy.pdf>. > > [Blaze1994] > Blaze, M., "Protocol Failures in the Escrowed Encryption > Standard", Proceedings of Second ACM Conference on > Computer and Communications Security, 1994, > <http://www.mattblaze.org/papers/eesproto.pdf>. > > [Checkoway2016] > Checkoway, S., Maskiewicz, J., Garman, C., Fried, J., > Cohney, S., Green, M., Heninger, N., Weinmann, R. P., > Rescorla, E., and Hovav Shacham, "A Systematic Analysis of > the Juniper Dual EC Incident", Proceedings of the 2016 ACM > SIGSAC Conference on Computer and Communications > Security 468-79, 2016, > <https://dl.acm.org/citation.cfm?id=2978395>. > > [LE] Aas, J., Barnes, R., Case, B., Durumeric, Z., Eckersley, > P., Flores-López, A., Halderman, A., Hoffman-Andrews, J., > Kasten, J., Rescorla, E., Schoen, S. D., and B. Warren, > "Let's Encrypt - an automated certificate authority to > encrypt the entire web", 2019, > <https://dl.acm.org/doi/pdf/10.1145/3319535.3363192>. > --> > > > 17) <!-- [rfced] Informative References. We note that the author's name > for "Sanctions and the Internet" is given as Farzaneh Badiei. We have > updated the author information to match the document, but have left the > cite tag as [Badii2023]. Please let us know if any updates are necessary. > > Original: > [Badii2023] > Badii, F., "Sanctions and the Internet", 2023, > <https://digitalmedusa.org/wp-content/uploads/2023/05/ > SanctionsandtheInternet-DigitalMedusa.pdf>. > > Current: > [Badii2023] > Badiei, F., "Sanctions and the Internet", Digital Medusa, > 2023, <https://digitalmedusa.org/wp- > content/uploads/2023/05/SanctionsandtheInternet- > DigitalMedusa.pdf>. > --> > No update is necessary. I prefer Badii but legally I have to use Badiei as they transliterated my name wrong in my passport. > > > 18) <!-- [rfced] Normative References. FYI, RFC 7540 has been obsoleted by > RFC 9113. We have updated the reference. Please let us know if any changes > are necessary. > > Original: > [RFC7540] Belshe, M., Peon, R., and M. Thomson, Ed., "Hypertext > Transfer Protocol Version 2 (HTTP/2)", RFC 7540, > DOI 10.17487/RFC7540, May 2015, > <https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/rfc7540>. > > Current: > [RFC9113] Thomson, M., Ed. and C. Benfield, Ed., "HTTP/2", RFC 9113, > DOI 10.17487/RFC9113, June 2022, > <https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/rfc9113>. > --> > > > 19) <!-- [rfced] Normative References. The I-D > draft-farrelll-mpls-opportunistic-encrypt was replaced by > draft-ietf-mpls-opportunistic-encrypt (also expired). Would you like to > update the reference? > > Original: > Of course, not all such initiatives bore fruit, for example attempts > to define a new MPLS encryption mechanism > [I-D.farrelll-mpls-opportunistic-encrypt] foundered due to a lack of > interest and the existence of the already deployed IEEE MACSEC > scheme. > > [I-D.farrelll-mpls-opportunistic-encrypt] > Farrel, A. and S. Farrell, "Opportunistic Security in MPLS > Networks", Work in Progress, Internet-Draft, draft- > farrelll-mpls-opportunistic-encrypt-05, 17 June 2015, > <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-farrelll- > mpls-opportunistic-encrypt-05>. > --> > > > 20) <!-- [rfced] Informative References. 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- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9446 <draft-farrel… Jean Mahoney
- Re: [auth48] [ISE] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9446 <dr… farzaneh badii
- Re: [auth48] [ISE] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9446 <dr… Bruce Schneier
- Re: [auth48] [ISE] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9446 <dr… Independent Submissions Editor (Eliot Lear)
- Re: [auth48] [ISE] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9446 <dr… Stephen Farrell
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9446 <draft-farrel… Steven M. Bellovin
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9446 <draft-farrel… Bruce Schneier
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9446 <draft-farrel… Stephen Farrell
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9446 <draft-farrel… Bruce Schneier
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9446 <draft-farrel… Independent Submissions Editor (Eliot Lear)
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9446 <draft-farrel… Stephen Farrell
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9446 <draft-farrel… Independent Submissions Editor (Eliot Lear)
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9446 <draft-farrel… Jean Mahoney
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9446 <draft-farrel… farzaneh badii
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9446 <draft-farrel… Jean Mahoney
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9446 <draft-farrel… Stephen Farrell
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9446 <draft-farrel… Jean Mahoney
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9446 <draft-farrel… Steven M. Bellovin
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9446 <draft-farrel… Independent Submissions Editor (Eliot Lear)
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9446 <draft-farrel… Bruce Schneier
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9446 <draft-farrel… Independent Submissions Editor (Eliot Lear)
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9446 <draft-farrel… Bruce Schneier
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9446 <draft-farrel… Jean Mahoney
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9446 <draft-farrel… farzaneh badii
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9446 <draft-farrel… Jean Mahoney
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9446 <draft-farrel… Independent Submissions Editor (Eliot Lear)
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9446 <draft-farrel… Steven M. Bellovin
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9446 <draft-farrel… Jean Mahoney