Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9446 <draft-farrell-tenyearsafter-05> for your review

["Independent Submissions Editor (Eliot Lear)" <[e-mail]>]

Thank you, RFC Editor Team, for your thorough and timely editing!  My suggestion is that you NOT revise the draft RFC until all authors have had a chance to comment. 

AUTHORS: please review ALL versions of the draft RFC before you approve. I have already noted at least one edit that will need to be reverted, but you will find that the overwhelming majority of the changes made are appropriate, so give a good look.

As for timing, Stephen will be back over the weekend.  No prize for fastest here. Just be sure you like what you read. 

Eliot

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> RFC9446 (draft-farrell-tenyearsafter-05)
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> Title            : Reflections on Ten Years Past The Snowden Revelations
> Author(s)        : S. Farrell, F. Badii, B. Schneier, S. Bellovin
> WG Chair(s)      : 
> Area Director(s) : 
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