Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9446 <draft-farrell-tenyearsafter-05> for your review

["Steven M. Bellovin" <[e-mail]>]

Changes requested:

In the abstract, I'm described as a "law professor". It should probably 
be "affiliate law professor"—I don't have a full joint appointment.

Reference Kerr2020 should include the URL 
https://papers.ssrn.com/sol3/papers.cfm?abstract_id=3533069.

Landau1988 is at https://privacyink.org/pdf/Zero_Knowledge.pdf.

Landau2014 is at 
https://jnslp.com/wp-content/uploads/2015/03/NSA’s-Efforts-to-Secure-Private-Sector-Telecommunications-Infrastructure_2.pdf.

Broad1982 is at https://www.science.org/doi/10.1126/science.217.4563.910


For [Curtiz]: Curtis was the director. The screenwriters, who presumably 
crafted that line, were Julius J. Epstein, Philip G. Epstein, and Howard 
Koch. Could they be credited, too? (One reviewer sent that to me as a 
comment, which is why I raise the issue.)



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> RFC9446 (draft-farrell-tenyearsafter-05)
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> Title            : Reflections on Ten Years Past The Snowden 
> Revelations
> Author(s)        : S. Farrell, F. Badii, B. Schneier, S. Bellovin
> WG Chair(s)      :
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         —Steve Bellovin, https://www.cs.columbia.edu/~smb