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Re: [auth48] [AD] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9333 <draft-ietf-lwig-minimal-esp-12> for your review

Rebecca VanRheenen <rvanrheenen@amsl.com> Mon, 19 December 2022 21:47 UTC

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Subject: Re: [auth48] [AD] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9333 <draft-ietf-lwig-minimal-esp-12> for your review
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Hi Erik,

Thank you for the reply. We added quotation marks around all instances of “dummy” and added the following sentence to the end of the first paragraph of Section 6:

   (Note that this document uses the term "dummy" for consistency
   with [RFC4303].)

Please let us know if you approve this or if you prefer different text or placement. These changes are best viewed in this diff file (shows all changes made during AUTH48):  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9333-auth48diff.html.

Once this has been approved, we can move this document forward in the publication process.

Updated XML file:
   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9333.xml

Updated output files:
   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9333.txt
   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9333.pdf
   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9333.html

Diff file showing all changes made during AUTH48:
   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9333-auth48diff.html

Diff files showing all changes:
   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9333-diff.html
   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9333-rfcdiff.html (side-by-side diff)
   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9333-alt-diff.html (diff to see changes in moved/deleted text)

AUTH48 status page:
   https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9333


Thank you,
RFC Editor/rv


> On Dec 18, 2022, at 6:43 PM, Erik Kline <ek.ietf@gmail.com> wrote:
> 
> I think option (3) (quotation marks + disclaimer statement) is probably simplest.
> 
> Thanks!

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