Re: [auth48] [AD] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9333 <draft-ietf-lwig-minimal-esp-12> for your review

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From: Daniel Migault <daniel.migault@ericsson.com>
To: Rebecca VanRheenen <rvanrheenen@amsl.com>, Erik Kline <ek.ietf@gmail.com>, "guggemos@mnm-team.org" <guggemos@mnm-team.org>, Tobias Guggemos <tobias.guggemos@outlook.com>
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Subject: Re: [auth48] [AD] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9333 <draft-ietf-lwig-minimal-esp-12> for your review
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Thank you very much everyone for the effort!

I wish you a nice Christmas break,

Yours,
Daniel

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From: Rebecca VanRheenen <rvanrheenen@amsl.com>
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Subject: Re: [AD] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9333 <draft-ietf-lwig-minimal-esp-12> for your review

Hi Erik and authors,

Great! This was the last issue remaining; now that it has been fully addressed, we will move this document forward in the publication process.

Thank you!
RFC Editor/rv



> On Dec 21, 2022, at 12:43 AM, Erik Kline <ek.ietf@gmail.com> wrote:
>
> LGTM, thank you!
>
> On Mon, Dec 19, 2022 at 1:46 PM Rebecca VanRheenen <rvanrheenen@amsl.com> wrote:
> Hi Erik,
>
> Thank you for the reply. We added quotation marks around all instances of “dummy” and added the following sentence to the end of the first paragraph of Section 6:
>
>    (Note that this document uses the term "dummy" for consistency
>    with [RFC4303].)
>
> Please let us know if you approve this or if you prefer different text or placement. These changes are best viewed in this diff file (shows all changes made during AUTH48):  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9333-auth48diff.html.
>
> Once this has been approved, we can move this document forward in the publication process.
>
> Updated XML file:
>    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9333.xml
>
> Updated output files:
>    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9333.txt
>    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9333.pdf
>    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9333.html
>
> Diff file showing all changes made during AUTH48:
>    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9333-auth48diff.html
>
> Diff files showing all changes:
>    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9333-diff.html
>    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9333-rfcdiff.html (side-by-side diff)
>    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9333-alt-diff.html (diff to see changes in moved/deleted text)
>
> AUTH48 status page:
>    https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9333
>
>
> Thank you,
> RFC Editor/rv
>
>
> > On Dec 18, 2022, at 6:43 PM, Erik Kline <ek.ietf@gmail.com> wrote:
> >
> > I think option (3) (quotation marks + disclaimer statement) is probably simplest.
> >
> > Thanks!
>