Re: [auth48] [C381] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9303 <draft-ietf-lisp-sec-29> for your review
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Thread-Topic: [C381] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9303 <draft-ietf-lisp-sec-29> for your review
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Please see in-line... On 9/16/22, 3:59 PM, "rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org" <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org> wrote: Authors, While reviewing this document during AUTH48, please resolve (as necessary) the following questions, which are also in the XML file. 1) <!--[rfced] It appears that text may be missing in this sentence after "defined in". Should this refer to RFC 7835? Please review and let us know how to update. Original: LISP-SEC builds on top of the security mechanisms defined in to address the threats described in Section 4 by leveraging the trust relationships existing among the LISP entities ([I-D.ietf-lisp-rfc6833bis]) participating in the exchange of the Map-Request/Map-Reply messages. --> Section 5 OLD: LISP-SEC builds on top of the security mechanisms defined in NEW: LISP-SEC builds on top of the security mechanisms defined in [I-D.ietf-lisp-rfc6833bis] 2) <!-- [rfced] HMAC is expanded in this document as "Keyed-Hashing for Message Authentication (HMAC)". While the title of RFC 2104 matches this expansion, we have changed it to "Hashed Message Authentication Code (HMAC)" as that is more common. Please let us know if you strongly prefer that this be reverted. o The Map-Server uses the ITR-OTK to compute a Keyed-Hashing for Message Authentication (HMAC) [RFC2104] that protects the integrity of the mapping data known to the Map-Server to prevent overclaiming attacks. --> Ok 3) <!-- [rfced] Should instances of "ECM message" be updated to read simply "ECM" to avoid redundancy (if expanded, "ECM message" would read "Encapsulated Control Message message"). Please review and let us know if we may update the text. Example from Section 5 (original): 2. The Map-Resolver decapsulates the ECM message, decrypts the ITR- OTK, if needed, and forwards through the Mapping System the received Map-Request and the ITR-OTK, as part of a new ECM message. --> Ok. Global OLD: ECM message NEW: ECM 4) <!-- [rfced] We note that RFC 3394 does not include any mention of "msg-key" or "per-msg-key". Please review and let us know how to update the citation. Original: According to [RFC3394] the per-msg-key is used to wrap the OTK with AES-KEY-WRAP-128. --> The per-msg-key is defined in this doc, and wrapped using the OTK defined in this doc using AES-KEY-WRAP-128 that is specified in RFC3394. The following should be more clear: Section 6.5 OLD: According to [RFC3394] the per-msg-key is used to wrap the OTK with AES-KEY-WRAP-128. NEW: The per-msg-key is then used to wrap the OTK with AES-KEY-WRAP-128, as specified in section 2.2.1 of {RFC3394] 5) <!-- [rfced] Should "128 less significant bits" be "128 least significant bits"? Please review. Original: The most significant 64-bit are copied in the One-Time Key Preamble field, while the 128 less significant bits are copied in the One-Time Key field of the LISP-SEC Authentication Data. Perhaps: The most significant 64 bits are copied in the 'One-Time Key Preamble' field, while the 128 least significant bits are copied in the 'One-Time Key' field of the LISP-SEC Authentication Data. --> Ok 6) <!--[rfced] It is unclear if "will be discarded" is referring to "a replayed Map-Reply" or "the incoming Map-Reply". Please review and let us know how this sentence should be updated. Original: If a replayed Map-Reply arrives at the ITR, there is no <nonce,ITR-OTK> that matches the incoming Map-Reply and will be discarded. Perhaps (referring "a replayed Map-Reply": If a replayed Map-Reply arrives at the ITR, there is no <nonce,ITR-OTK> that matches the incoming Map-Reply and the replayed Map-Reply will be discarded. --> Ok 7) <!--[rfced] Throughout the text, the following term appears to be used inconsistently: key wrap vs. Key Wrap vs. key wrapping Please review these occurrences and let us know if/how this may be made consistent. --> Please, change ONLY the following instances: Section 6.5 OLD: as well as the AES-KEY-WRAP-128 Key Wrap algorithm NEW: as well as the AES-KEY-WRAP-128 key wrap algorithm OLD: 1. The KDF and Key Wrap algorithms NEW: 1. The KDF and key wrap algorithms OLD: The output of the AES Key Wrap operation is 192-bit long. NEW: The output of the AES key wrap operation is 192-bit long. OLD: AES Key Wrap decryption operation NEW: AES key wrap decryption operation 8) <!-- [rfced] Please review the "Inclusive Language" portion of the online Style Guide <https://www.rfc-editor.org/styleguide/part2/#inclusive_language> and let us know if any changes are needed. Note that our script did not flag any words in particular, but this should still be reviewed as a best practice. --> I don’t see any occurrence of non-inclusive language. Thanks for another great review! Fabio Thank you. RFC Editor On Sep 16, 2022, at 3:56 PM, rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org wrote: *****IMPORTANT***** Updated 2022/09/16 RFC Author(s): -------------- Instructions for Completing AUTH48 Your document has now entered AUTH48. Once it has been reviewed and approved by you and all coauthors, it will be published as an RFC. If an author is no longer available, there are several remedies available as listed in the FAQ (https://www.rfc-editor.org/faq/). 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Thank you for your cooperation, RFC Editor -------------------------------------- RFC9303 (draft-ietf-lisp-sec-29) Title : LISP-Security (LISP-SEC) Author(s) : F. Maino, V. Ermagan, A. Cabellos, D. Saucez WG Chair(s) : Joel M. Halpern, Luigi Iannone Area Director(s) : Alvaro Retana, John Scudder, Andrew Alston
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