Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9544 <draft-ietf-ippm-pam-09> for your review
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Dear RFC Editor, thank you for your thoughtful proposals helping in improving the document. Please find my responses and notes below tagged GIM>>. Regards, Greg On Thu, Feb 15, 2024 at 5:39 PM <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org> wrote: > Authors, > > While reviewing this document during AUTH48, please resolve (as necessary) > the following questions, which are also in the XML file. > > > 1) <!-- [rfced] FYI - We updated the abbreviated title (appears in the > center of > the running header in the pdf output) to more closely align with the > document title. Please let us know any objections. > > Original: > Framework of PAM > > Current: > PAM for Services Governed by SLOs > GIM>> I agree with the update with a minor modification PAMs for Service Governed by SLOs I've looked at the title itself and wanted to ask you and the co-authors a question. The title introduces the SLO acronym, should the PAM acronym also be introduced in the title as Precision Availability Metrics (PAMs) for Services Governed by Service Level Objectives (SLOs) --> > > > 2) <!-- [rfced] How may we update the text after the comma to improve > clarity? > > Original: > Hence it is not sufficient to measure service levels > per se over time, but to assess the quality of the service being > contextually provided (e.g., with the applicable SLO in mind). > > Perhaps: > Hence, it is not sufficient to measure service levels > per se over time; the quality of the service being > contextually provided (e.g., with the applicable SLO in mind) must be > also assessed. > GIM>> I agree with the proposed update. It makes the text more readable. > --> > > > 3) <!-- [rfced] May we update the text starting with ", and whether their > SLOs..." as follows for to create parallel structure? > > Original: > However, at this point, there are no standard metrics that can be > used to account for the quality with which services are delivered > relative to their SLOs, and whether their SLOs are being met at all > times. > > Perhaps: > However, at this point, there are no standard metrics that can be > used to account for the quality with which services are delivered > relative to their SLOs or to determine whether their SLOs are being met > at all > times. GIM>> I agree with the proposed update that improves the text. I wonder if s/or/nor/ is acceptable in this sentence? > > --> > > > 4) <!-- [rfced] We see the term "Flow Record" in RFC 7011 but not in RFC > 7012 > (though "flow" does appear). Please review the citations and let us know > if any updates are needed. > > Original: > Flow records [RFC7011] and > [RFC7012] maintain statistics about flows, including flow volume and > flow duration, but again, contain very little information about > service levels, let alone whether the service levels delivered meet > their respective targets, i.e., their associated SLOs. > GIM>> Thank you for your thoughtful question. I think that reference to RFC 7012 is justified as it refers, as you've noted, to 'Flow' and 'Flow information'. > --> > > > 5) <!-- [rfced] FYI - We updated the title of Section 2 from "Conventions > and > Terminology" to "Conventions" because "Terminology" is one of the > subsections. Please review and let us know any concerns. > > Original: > 2. Conventions and Terminology > 2.1. Terminology > 2.2. Acronyms > > Current: > 2. Conventions > 2.1. Terminology > 2.2. Acronyms > GIM>> I agree with the update > --> > > > 6) <!-- [rfced] Is "configurable optimal level threshold" correct here? > Should > this read "configurable optimal threshold" (i.e., no "level") or > "configurable > optimal level (i.e., no "threshold")? > > Original: > * VI is a time interval during which at least one of the performance > parameters degraded below its configurable optimal level > threshold. > > Perhaps: > * VI is a time interval during which at least one of the performance > parameters degraded below its configurable optimal > threshold. > GIM>> Thank you for pointing out that "threshold" and "level" are synonyms. I slightly prefer the first option (above), but I can live with the other proposal (below) > > Or: > * VI is a time interval during which at least one of the performance > parameters degraded below its configurable optimal > level. > --> > > > 7) <!-- [rfced] Please confirm that "referred to for" is correct. Or > should this > be updated to "referred to", "referred for", or something else? > > Original: > The monitoring of performance parameters to determine the quality of > an interval is performed between the elements of the network that are > referred to for the SLO corresponding to the performance parameter. > GIM>> I think that it should be "referred to". > --> > > > 8) <!-- [rfced] How may we update "this allows distinguishing" here? > > Original: > For example, this allows distinguishing between cases in > which violated intervals are caused by isolated violation occurrences > (such as, a sporadic issue that may be caused by a temporary spike in > a queue depth along the packet's path) or by broad violations across > multiple packets (such as a problem with slow route convergence > across the network or more foundational issues such as insufficient > network resources). > > Perhaps ("this allows a service provider to distinguish"): > For example, this allows a service provider to distinguish between > cases in > which violated intervals are caused by isolated violation occurrences > (such as a sporadic issue that may be caused by a temporary spike in > a queue depth along the packet's path) or by broad violations across > multiple packets (such as a problem with slow route convergence > across the network or more foundational issues such as insufficient > network resources). > > Or ("this allows for distinguishing"): > For example, this allows for distinguishing between cases in > which violated intervals are caused by isolated violation occurrences > (such as a sporadic issue that may be caused by a temporary spike in > a queue depth along the packet's path) or by broad violations across > multiple packets (such as a problem with slow route convergence > across the network or more foundational issues such as insufficient > network resources). GIM>> I slightly prefer the latter option as the act of attributing degradation to a cause could be performed by a function, not an operator. But I can live with the former option. > > --> > > > 9) <!-- [rfced] This sentence appears in Section 3.2 and points to Section > 3. Should "introduced in Section 3" either be removed or updated to > "introduced > in this document"? Also, is this sentence introducing the bulleted list > that appear after the paragraph? If so, would adding "The following" be > helpful? > > Original: > A set of metrics can be created based on PAM introduced in Section 3. > > Perhaps (omit section pointer): > The following set of metrics can be created based on PAM. > > Or (use "in this document" instead of section pointer): > The following set of metrics can be created based on PAM as introduced > in this document. > GIM>> I slightly prefer the latter option, but I can live with the first one. > --> > > > 10) <!-- [rfced] We updated the first two bulleted lists in Section 3.2 > (created > parallel structure and removed the parentheses around sentences). Please > review these changes in the diff file and let us know any concerns. > GIM>> I agree with the update that makes looks of lists in the document consistent. > --> > > > 11) <!-- [rfced] May we change the first bulleted list in Sections 3.1 and > all > the bulleted lists in Section 3.2 to definition lists? See > https://authors.ietf.org/en/rfcxml-vocabulary#dl. > > One example: > > Current: > * VI is a time interval during which at least one of the performance > parameters degraded below its configurable optimal level > threshold. > > * SVI is a time interval during which at least one of the > performance parameters degraded below its configurable critical > threshold. > > * Consequently, VFI is a time interval during which all performance > parameters are at or better than their respective pre-defined > optimal levels. > > Perhaps: > VI: A time interval during which at least one of the performance > parameters degraded below its configurable optimal level > threshold. > > SVI: A time interval during which at least one of the > performance parameters degraded below its configurable critical > threshold. > > VFI: A time interval during which all performance > parameters are at or better than their respective pre-defined > optimal levels. > GIM>> I slightly prefer the current format, but I can live with the update. > --> > > > 12) <!-- [rfced] Should "the following section" here read "this section"? > This > sentence appears in Section 3.3; the following section is Section 4, > which does not mention a state model. > > Original: > While the definition of a service state model is outside the scope of > this document, the following section provides some considerations for > how such a state model and accompanying configuration settings could > be defined. > > Perhaps: > While the definition of a service state model is outside the scope of > this document, this section provides some considerations for > how such a state model and accompanying configuration settings could > be defined. > GIM>> Thank you for your thoughtful consideration of the text. I agree with the proposed update. > --> > > > 13) <!-- [rfced] Would it be helpful to update "YANG/NETCONF/RESTCONF > framework" > as follows? Or do you prefer the current? > > Original: > * A YANG data model will allow PAM to be incorporated into > monitoring applications based on the YANG/NETCONF/RESTCONF > framework. > > Perhaps: > * A YANG data model will allow PAM to be incorporated into > monitoring applications based on the YANG, NETCONF, > and RESTCONF frameworks. GIM>> I agree with the proposed update. > > --> > > > 14) <!-- [rfced] FYI - We rephrased this as follows to form a complete > sentence. The other items in the list are complete sentences. Please > review. > > Original: > * The definition of the metrics that represent histograms for > service level parameters with buckets corresponding to individual > service level objectives, > > Updated: > * Metrics can be defined to represent histograms for > service-level parameters with buckets corresponding to individual > SLOs.. > GIM>> I agree with the proposed update. > --> > > > 15) <!-- [rfced] Please review "that should be maintained". Should this > read "and > should be maintained", or is the current okay? Also, please confirm that > "violated time units" is correct here. We do not see this mentioned > elsewhere in the document. > > Original: > The same service levels that > constitute SLO violations for one flow that should be maintained as > part of the "violated time units" and related metrics, may be > compliant for another flow. > > Perhaps: > The same service levels that > constitute SLO violations for one flow and should be maintained as > part of the "violated time units" and related metrics may be > compliant for another flow. GIM>> I agree with the updated version. > > --> > > > 16) <!-- [rfced] FYI - We updated this fragment as follows to create a > complete > sentence. > > Original: > By the same token, where the definition of what constitutes a > "severe" or a "significant" violation depends on configuration > settings or context. > > Perhaps: > By the same token, the definition of what constitutes a > "severe" or a "significant" violation depends on configuration > settings or context. GIM>> I agree with the proposed update. > > --> > > > 17) <!-- [rfced] Abbreviations > > a) We see both of the following as the expansion for PAM. > > Precision Availability Metric (1 instance) > Precision Availability Metrics (8 instances) > > We updated to use the latter form (i.e., the form with "Metrics"). Please > let > us know any objections. > GIM>> Thank you for the question. I think that the use of singular, i.e., "Metric", in Acronyms is valid. Consequently, all acronyms in the document, in my opinion, should be changed to "PAMs". > > > b) We see two instances of "PAMs" in the document (see below). Since > "Metrics" > in the expansion is already plural, is the "s" needed in "PAMs"? Please > review. > > Original: > To indicate a historic degree of precision availability, additional > derived PAMs can be defined as follows: > ... > It might be useful for a service provider to determine the current > condition of the service for which PAMs are maintained. GIM>> If we agree that the acronym is expanded as "Precision Availability Metric", then "PAMs" is the right form. > > > > c) OAM appears in the list of acronyms in Section 2.2 but is not mentioned > elsewhere in the document. May we delete this term from the list? > GIM>> Yes, please remove it. > > > d) FYI - We have added an expansion for the following abbreviation > per Section 3.6 of RFC 7322 ("RFC Style Guide"). Please review each > expansion in the document carefully to ensure correctness. > > IP Flow Information Export (IPFIX) > GIM>> It seems that IPFIX is used only one time in the document. Do you think that the expanded form without the acronym is sufficient? I'm okay with any form. > --> > > > 18) <!-- [rfced] Please review the "Inclusive Language" portion of the > online > Style Guide < > https://www.rfc-editor.org/styleguide/part2/#inclusive_language> > and let us know if any changes are needed. > > Note that our script did not flag any words in particular, but this should > still be reviewed as a best practice. > GIM>> I agree, don't find anything that requires rewording. > --> > > > 19) <!-- [rfced] We see a number of author-inserted comments in the .xml > file for > this document. We are unsure if these have been resolved. Please review > and let us know if these can be deleted or if they need to be addressed. > GIM>> :-) My apologies for not cleaning our workspace properly. 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- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9544 <draft-ietf-i… Greg Mirsky
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- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9544 <draft-ietf-i… Greg Mirsky
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- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9544 <draft-ietf-i… xiao.min2
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9544 <draft-ietf-i… Greg Mirsky
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9544 <draft-ietf-i… Joel Halpern
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9544 <draft-ietf-i… Rebecca VanRheenen
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- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9544 <draft-ietf-i… Rebecca VanRheenen
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9544 <draft-ietf-i… Alexander L Clemm
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9544 <draft-ietf-i… Rebecca VanRheenen
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9544 <draft-ietf-i… Alexander L Clemm
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9544 <draft-ietf-i… Rebecca VanRheenen
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9544 <draft-ietf-i… Rebecca VanRheenen
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9544 <draft-ietf-i… Rebecca VanRheenen
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9544 <draft-ietf-i… Martin Duke
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9544 <draft-ietf-i… Alexander L Clemm
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9544 <draft-ietf-i… Rebecca VanRheenen