Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9544 <draft-ietf-ippm-pam-09> for your review
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Subject: Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9544 <draft-ietf-ippm-pam-09> for your review
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Thank you Rebecca for your hard work. I also approve this document. best regards, John On Wed, Feb 21, 2024 at 9:04 PM Rebecca VanRheenen <rvanrheenen@amsl.com> wrote: > Hi Greg and Joel, > > We have noted your approvals on the AUTH48 status page for this document > (see https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9544). > > Thank you, > RFC Editor/rv > > > > > On Feb 21, 2024, at 5:24 PM, Joel Halpern <joel.halpern@ericsson.com> > wrote: > > > > Thank you. Looks good to me. > > Yours, > > Joel > > > > -----Original Message----- > > From: Rebecca VanRheenen <rvanrheenen@amsl.com> > > Sent: Wednesday, February 21, 2024 4:57 PM > > To: Greg Mirsky <gregimirsky@gmail.com>; John Strassner < > strazpdj@gmail.com>; Joel Halpern <joel.halpern@ericsson.com>; > xiao.min2@zte.com.cn; ludwig@clemm.org; jerome.francois@inria.fr > > Cc: RFC Editor <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org>; ippm-ads@ietf.org; > ippm-chairs@ietf.org; tpauly@apple.com; martin.h.duke@gmail.com; > auth48archive@rfc-editor.org > > Subject: Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9544 <draft-ietf-ippm-pam-09> for your > review > > > > Hi authors, > > > > Thanks for the quick responses! We have updated the document. All > questions have been resolved. > > > > Please review the document carefully to ensure satisfaction as we do not > make changes once it has been published as an RFC. Contact us with any > further updates or with your approval of the document in its current form. > We will await approvals from each author prior to moving forward in the > publication process. > > > > Updated XML file: > > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9544.xml > > > > Updated output files: > > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9544.txt > > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9544.pdf > > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9544.html > > > > Diff file showing all changes made during AUTH48: > > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9544-auth48diff.html > > > > Diff files showing all changes: > > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9544-diff.html > > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9544-rfcdiff.html (side-by-side > diff) > > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9544-alt-diff.html (diff showing > changes where text is moved or deleted) > > > > Note that it may be necessary for you to refresh your browser to view > the most recent version. > > > > For the AUTH48 status of this document, please see: > > https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9544 > > > > Thank you, > > > > RFC Editor/rv > > > > > > > >> On Feb 20, 2024, at 4:18 PM, Greg Mirsky <gregimirsky@gmail.com> wrote: > >> > >> Hi John, > >> thank you for your prompt response. I like "identified in" and support > your proposal. > >> > >> Regards, > >> Greg > >> > >> On Tue, Feb 20, 2024 at 4:13 PM John Strassner <strazpdj@gmail.com> > wrote: > >> Hi Greg, et al., > >> > >> Greg wrote: > >> John: > >>> #7: I think that "between the elements of the network that are > referred to for > >>> the SLO corresponding to the performance parameter" is incorrect. > >>> The SLO defines both the metric and where the metric is measured. > >>> The SLO does not "refer" to anything. > >>> Hence, I would instead say: "between the elements of the network > that > >>> are defined by the SLO corresponding to the performance > parameter." > >> GIM2>> I agree with "referred to by" suggested by Joel. I think that > "defined by" suggested by John is closer to "identified in" as a > performance metric is firstly defined and then can be used in the SLO. > Similarly, in my opinion, network elements are identified in the SLO. Thus, > I think that "referred to by" most accurately characterizes the > relationship. > >> > >> <jcs> > >> The SLO does define the metric. If you are more comfortable with > identified in, that is fine. > >> I think that "referred to by" is awkward. So how about "between the > elements of the network that are identified in the SLO corresponding to the > performance parameter."? > >> > >> best regards, > >> John > >> > >> On Tue, Feb 20, 2024 at 3:11 PM Greg Mirsky <gregimirsky@gmail.com> > wrote: > >> Hi Rebecca, > >> thank you for careful consolidation of our proposals. Please find my > responses to the outstanding questions below tagged GIM2>>. > >> > >> Kind regards, > >> Greg > >> > >> On Tue, Feb 20, 2024 at 2:24 PM Rebecca VanRheenen < > rvanrheenen@amsl.com> wrote: > >> Hi authors, > >> > >> Thank you all for your replies! We have updated the document > accordingly (see list of updated files below) and have a few followup > questions: > >> > >> > >> 1) There were several suggestions in response to this question (listed > below). Please discuss and let us know how to update. > >> > >>>> 7) <!-- [rfced] Please confirm that "referred to for" is correct. > >>>> Or should this be updated to "referred to", "referred for", or > something else? > >>>> > >>>> Original: > >>>> The monitoring of performance parameters to determine the quality of > >>>> an interval is performed between the elements of the network that > are > >>>> referred to for the SLO corresponding to the performance parameter. > >> > >> Greg: > >>> I think that it should be "referred to". > >> > >> Joel: > >>> If I am reading item 7 correctly, I think that is “referred to by”. I > can live with many forms, but I think “between the elements of the network > that are referred to the SLO” will cause many people reading difficulty. > >> > >> John: > >>> #7: I think that "between the elements of the network that are > referred to for > >>> the SLO corresponding to the performance parameter" is incorrect. > >>> The SLO defines both the metric and where the metric is measured. > >>> The SLO does not "refer" to anything. > >>> Hence, I would instead say: "between the elements of the network > that > >>> are defined by the SLO corresponding to the performance > parameter." > >> GIM2>> I agree with "referred to by" suggested by Joel. I think that > "defined by" suggested by John is closer to "identified in" as a > performance metric is firstly defined and then can be used in the SLO. > Similarly, in my opinion, network elements are identified in the SLO. Thus, > I think that "referred to by" most accurately characterizes the > relationship. > >> > >> > >> 2) > >> > >>>> 11) <!-- [rfced] May we change the first bulleted list in Sections > >>>> 3.1 and all the bulleted lists in Section 3.2 to definition lists? > >>>> See https://authors.ietf.org/en/rfcxml-vocabulary#dl. > >>>> > >>>> One example: > >>>> > >>>> Current: > >>>> * VI is a time interval during which at least one of the > performance > >>>> parameters degraded below its configurable optimal level > >>>> threshold. > >>>> > >>>> * SVI is a time interval during which at least one of the > >>>> performance parameters degraded below its configurable critical > >>>> threshold. > >>>> > >>>> * Consequently, VFI is a time interval during which all performance > >>>> parameters are at or better than their respective pre-defined > >>>> optimal levels. > >>>> > >>>> Perhaps: > >>>> VI: A time interval during which at least one of the performance > >>>> parameters degraded below its configurable optimal level > >>>> threshold. > >>>> > >>>> SVI: A time interval during which at least one of the > >>>> performance parameters degraded below its configurable critical > >>>> threshold. > >>>> > >>>> VFI: A time interval during which all performance > >>>> parameters are at or better than their respective pre-defined > >>>> optimal levels. > >>> > >>> GIM>> I slightly prefer the current format, but I can live with the > update. > >>> —> > >> > >> We did not make any changes here, per your preference. > >> GIM2>> Thank you > >> > >> > >> 3) > >> > >>>> a) We see both of the following as the expansion for PAM. > >>>> > >>>> Precision Availability Metric (1 instance) > >>>> Precision Availability Metrics (8 instances) > >>>> > >>>> We updated to use the latter form (i.e., the form with "Metrics"). > >>>> Please let us know any objections. > >>> GIM>> Thank you for the question. I think that the use of singular, > i.e., "Metric", in Acronyms is valid. Consequently, all acronyms in the > document, in my opinion, should be changed to "PAMs". > >> > >> We updated PAM to PAMs in all instances except the following (when used > as an adjective). In a few instances, we also updated verbs from singular > to plural when “PAMs" is used as a subject, so please review those for > correctness. > >> > >> Current (“PAM” as adjective): > >> 3.3. PAM Configuration Settings and Service Availability > >> > >> 5. Other Expected PAM Benefits > >> > >> … per some predefined PAM settings. > >> > >> … of PAM-related settings. > >> > >> GIM2>> Thank you for your thoughtful handling of the use of this > acronym in the document. > >> > >> > >> 4) > >> > >>>> d) FYI - We have added an expansion for the following abbreviation > >>>> per Section 3.6 of RFC 7322 ("RFC Style Guide"). Please review each > >>>> expansion in the document carefully to ensure correctness. > >>>> > >>>> IP Flow Information Export (IPFIX) > >> > >> Greg: > >>> It seems that IPFIX is used only one time in the document. Do you > think that the expanded form without the acronym is sufficient? I'm okay > with any form. > >> > >> John: > >>> #17d: I would rather spell out IPFIX (since it is only used once) but > am also ok with adding it to the list of abbreviations. > >> > >> We chose to add this to the list of abbreviations as suggested by John. > Omitting the acronym might make the sentence a bit harder to read because > of the two instances of “Information”. Please let us know any concerns. > >> > >> Text without acronym: > >> * A set of IP Flow Information Export Information Elements > >> will allow PAM ... > >> GIM2>> I agree with John's proposal to add IPFIX to the list of > acronyms and use the abbreviated form in the body of the document. > >> > >> > >> 5) Would you like to alphabetize the acronyms in Section 2.2, or do you > prefer the current order? The current ordering seems to be intentional > (similar terms grouped together), but we want to check after adding IPFIX > to the end of the list. > >> GIM2>> I find the alphabetical order to be more reader-friendly. > >> _______________ > >> > >> Updated XML file: > >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9544.xml > >> > >> Updated output files: > >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9544.txt > >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9544.pdf > >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9544.html > >> > >> Diff file showing all changes made during AUTH48: > >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9544-auth48diff.html > >> > >> Diff files showing all changes: > >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9544-diff.html > >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9544-rfcdiff.html > (side-by-side diff) > >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9544-alt-diff.html(diff > >> showing changes where text is moved or deleted) > >> > >> Note that it may be necessary for you to refresh your browser to view > the most recent version. > >> > >> For the AUTH48 status of this document, please see: > >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9544 > >> > >> Thank you, > >> > >> RFC Editor/rv > >> > >> > >> > >>> On Feb 19, 2024, at 9:44 PM, John Strassner <strazpdj@gmail.com> > wrote: > >>> > >>> Hi all, > >>> > >>> MY comments are as follows: > >>> YES with no additional comments to what Greg made: 1, 2, 4, 5, 6, 8, > >>> 9, 10, 11,12, 13, 14, 15, 16, 17 (a and b and c), 18, 19 > >>> > >>> #3: YES, but I do not like changing "or" to "nor" > >>> > >>> #17d: I would rather spell out IPFIX (since it is only used once) but > am also ok with adding it to the list of abbreviations. > >>> > >>> #7: I think that "between the elements of the network that are > referred to for > >>> the SLO corresponding to the performance parameter" is incorrect. > >>> The SLO defines both the metric and where the metric is measured. > >>> The SLO does not "refer" to anything. > >>> Hence, I would instead say: "between the elements of the network > that > >>> are defined by the SLO corresponding to the performance > parameter." > >>> > >>> On Feb 15, 2024, at 5:34 PM, rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org wrote: > >>> > >>> > >>> *****IMPORTANT***** > >>> > >>> Updated 2024/02/15 > >>> > >>> RFC Author(s): > >>> -------------- > >>> > >>> Instructions for Completing AUTH48 > >>> > >>> Your document has now entered AUTH48. 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Editorial changes do not require > approval from a stream manager. > >>> > >>> > >>> best regards, > >>> John > >>> > >>> On Sun, Feb 18, 2024 at 8:04 PM Joel Halpern < > joel.halpern@ericsson.com> wrote: > >>> I can live with all the changes as proposed. > >>> > >>> > >>> > >>> If I am reading item 7 correctly, I think that is “referred to by”. I > can live with many forms, but I think “between the elements of the network > that are referred to the SLO” will cause many people reading difficulty. > >>> > >>> Yours, > >>> Joel > >>> > >>> > >>> > >>> From: Greg Mirsky <gregimirsky@gmail.com> > >>> Sent: Friday, February 16, 2024 8:45 PM > >>> To: rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org > >>> Cc: Joel Halpern <joel.halpern@ericsson.com>; xiao.min2@zte.com.cn; > >>> ludwig@clemm.org; strazpdj@gmail.com; jerome.francois@inria.fr; > >>> ippm-ads@ietf.org; ippm-chairs@ietf.org; tpauly@apple.com; > >>> martin.h.duke@gmail.com; auth48archive@rfc-editor.org > >>> Subject: Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9544 <draft-ietf-ippm-pam-09> for > >>> your review > >>> > >>> > >>> > >>> Dear RFC Editor, > >>> > >>> thank you for your thoughtful proposals helping in improving the > document. Please find my responses and notes below tagged GIM>>. > >>> > >>> > >>> > >>> Regards, > >>> > >>> Greg > >>> > >>> > >>> > >>> On Thu, Feb 15, 2024 at 5:39 PM <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org> wrote: > >>> > >>> Authors, > >>> > >>> While reviewing this document during AUTH48, please resolve (as > necessary) the following questions, which are also in the XML file. > >>> > >>> > >>> 1) <!-- [rfced] FYI - We updated the abbreviated title (appears in > >>> the center of the running header in the pdf output) to more closely > >>> align with the document title. Please let us know any objections. > >>> > >>> Original: > >>> Framework of PAM > >>> > >>> Current: > >>> PAM for Services Governed by SLOs > >>> > >>> GIM>> I agree with the update with a minor modification > >>> > >>> PAMs for Service Governed by SLOs > >>> > >>> I've looked at the title itself and wanted to ask you and the > >>> co-authors a question. The title introduces the SLO acronym, should > >>> the PAM acronym also be introduced in the title as > >>> > >>> > >>> > >>> Precision Availability Metrics (PAMs) for Services Governed by > >>> Service Level Objectives (SLOs) > >>> > >>> --> > >>> > >>> > >>> 2) <!-- [rfced] How may we update the text after the comma to improve > clarity? > >>> > >>> Original: > >>> Hence it is not sufficient to measure service levels > >>> per se over time, but to assess the quality of the service being > >>> contextually provided (e.g., with the applicable SLO in mind). > >>> > >>> Perhaps: > >>> Hence, it is not sufficient to measure service levels > >>> per se over time; the quality of the service being > >>> contextually provided (e.g., with the applicable SLO in mind) must > be also assessed. > >>> > >>> GIM>> I agree with the proposed update. It makes the text more > readable. > >>> > >>> --> > >>> > >>> > >>> 3) <!-- [rfced] May we update the text starting with ", and whether > >>> their SLOs..." as follows for to create parallel structure? > >>> > >>> Original: > >>> However, at this point, there are no standard metrics that can be > >>> used to account for the quality with which services are delivered > >>> relative to their SLOs, and whether their SLOs are being met at all > >>> times. > >>> > >>> Perhaps: > >>> However, at this point, there are no standard metrics that can be > >>> used to account for the quality with which services are delivered > >>> relative to their SLOs or to determine whether their SLOs are being > met at all > >>> times. > >>> > >>> GIM>> I agree with the proposed update that improves the text. I > wonder if s/or/nor/ is acceptable in this sentence? > >>> > >>> > >>> --> > >>> > >>> > >>> 4) <!-- [rfced] We see the term "Flow Record" in RFC 7011 but not in > >>> RFC 7012 (though "flow" does appear). Please review the citations > >>> and let us know if any updates are needed. > >>> > >>> Original: > >>> Flow records [RFC7011] and > >>> [RFC7012] maintain statistics about flows, including flow volume and > >>> flow duration, but again, contain very little information about > >>> service levels, let alone whether the service levels delivered meet > >>> their respective targets, i.e., their associated SLOs. > >>> > >>> GIM>> Thank you for your thoughtful question. I think that reference > to RFC 7012 is justified as it refers, as you've noted, to 'Flow' and 'Flow > information'. > >>> > >>> --> > >>> > >>> > >>> 5) <!-- [rfced] FYI - We updated the title of Section 2 from > >>> "Conventions and Terminology" to "Conventions" because "Terminology" > >>> is one of the subsections. Please review and let us know any concerns. > >>> > >>> Original: > >>> 2. Conventions and Terminology > >>> 2.1. Terminology > >>> 2.2. Acronyms > >>> > >>> Current: > >>> 2. Conventions > >>> 2.1. Terminology > >>> 2.2. Acronyms > >>> > >>> GIM>> I agree with the update > >>> > >>> --> > >>> > >>> > >>> 6) <!-- [rfced] Is "configurable optimal level threshold" correct > >>> here? Should this read "configurable optimal threshold" (i.e., no > >>> "level") or "configurable optimal level (i.e., no "threshold")? > >>> > >>> Original: > >>> * VI is a time interval during which at least one of the performance > >>> parameters degraded below its configurable optimal level > >>> threshold. > >>> > >>> Perhaps: > >>> * VI is a time interval during which at least one of the performance > >>> parameters degraded below its configurable optimal > >>> threshold. > >>> > >>> GIM>> Thank you for pointing out that "threshold" and "level" are > >>> GIM>> synonyms. I slightly prefer the first option (above), but I > >>> GIM>> can live with the other proposal (below) > >>> > >>> > >>> Or: > >>> * VI is a time interval during which at least one of the performance > >>> parameters degraded below its configurable optimal > >>> level. > >>> --> > >>> > >>> > >>> 7) <!-- [rfced] Please confirm that "referred to for" is correct. Or > >>> should this be updated to "referred to", "referred for", or something > else? > >>> > >>> Original: > >>> The monitoring of performance parameters to determine the quality of > >>> an interval is performed between the elements of the network that are > >>> referred to for the SLO corresponding to the performance parameter. > >>> > >>> GIM>> I think that it should be "referred to". > >>> > >>> --> > >>> > >>> > >>> 8) <!-- [rfced] How may we update "this allows distinguishing" here? > >>> > >>> Original: > >>> For example, this allows distinguishing between cases in > >>> which violated intervals are caused by isolated violation occurrences > >>> (such as, a sporadic issue that may be caused by a temporary spike in > >>> a queue depth along the packet's path) or by broad violations across > >>> multiple packets (such as a problem with slow route convergence > >>> across the network or more foundational issues such as insufficient > >>> network resources). > >>> > >>> Perhaps ("this allows a service provider to distinguish"): > >>> For example, this allows a service provider to distinguish between > cases in > >>> which violated intervals are caused by isolated violation occurrences > >>> (such as a sporadic issue that may be caused by a temporary spike in > >>> a queue depth along the packet's path) or by broad violations across > >>> multiple packets (such as a problem with slow route convergence > >>> across the network or more foundational issues such as insufficient > >>> network resources). > >>> > >>> Or ("this allows for distinguishing"): > >>> For example, this allows for distinguishing between cases in > >>> which violated intervals are caused by isolated violation occurrences > >>> (such as a sporadic issue that may be caused by a temporary spike in > >>> a queue depth along the packet's path) or by broad violations across > >>> multiple packets (such as a problem with slow route convergence > >>> across the network or more foundational issues such as insufficient > >>> network resources). > >>> > >>> GIM>> I slightly prefer the latter option as the act of attributing > degradation to a cause could be performed by a function, not an operator. > But I can live with the former option. > >>> > >>> > >>> --> > >>> > >>> > >>> 9) <!-- [rfced] This sentence appears in Section 3.2 and points to > >>> Section 3. Should "introduced in Section 3" either be removed or > >>> updated to "introduced in this document"? Also, is this sentence > >>> introducing the bulleted list that appear after the paragraph? If > >>> so, would adding "The following" be helpful? > >>> > >>> Original: > >>> A set of metrics can be created based on PAM introduced in Section 3. > >>> > >>> Perhaps (omit section pointer): > >>> The following set of metrics can be created based on PAM. > >>> > >>> Or (use "in this document" instead of section pointer): > >>> The following set of metrics can be created based on PAM as > introduced > >>> in this document. > >>> > >>> GIM>> I slightly prefer the latter option, but I can live with the > first one. > >>> > >>> --> > >>> > >>> > >>> 10) <!-- [rfced] We updated the first two bulleted lists in Section > >>> 3.2 (created parallel structure and removed the parentheses around > >>> sentences). Please review these changes in the diff file and let us > know any concerns. > >>> > >>> GIM>> I agree with the update that makes looks of lists in the > document consistent. > >>> > >>> --> > >>> > >>> > >>> 11) <!-- [rfced] May we change the first bulleted list in Sections > >>> 3.1 and all the bulleted lists in Section 3.2 to definition lists? > >>> See https://authors.ietf.org/en/rfcxml-vocabulary#dl. > >>> > >>> One example: > >>> > >>> Current: > >>> * VI is a time interval during which at least one of the performance > >>> parameters degraded below its configurable optimal level > >>> threshold. > >>> > >>> * SVI is a time interval during which at least one of the > >>> performance parameters degraded below its configurable critical > >>> threshold. > >>> > >>> * Consequently, VFI is a time interval during which all performance > >>> parameters are at or better than their respective pre-defined > >>> optimal levels. > >>> > >>> Perhaps: > >>> VI: A time interval during which at least one of the performance > >>> parameters degraded below its configurable optimal level > >>> threshold. > >>> > >>> SVI: A time interval during which at least one of the > >>> performance parameters degraded below its configurable critical > >>> threshold. > >>> > >>> VFI: A time interval during which all performance > >>> parameters are at or better than their respective pre-defined > >>> optimal levels. > >>> > >>> GIM>> I slightly prefer the current format, but I can live with the > update. > >>> > >>> --> > >>> > >>> > >>> 12) <!-- [rfced] Should "the following section" here read "this > >>> section"? This sentence appears in Section 3.3; the following > >>> section is Section 4, which does not mention a state model. > >>> > >>> Original: > >>> While the definition of a service state model is outside the scope of > >>> this document, the following section provides some considerations for > >>> how such a state model and accompanying configuration settings could > >>> be defined. > >>> > >>> Perhaps: > >>> While the definition of a service state model is outside the scope of > >>> this document, this section provides some considerations for > >>> how such a state model and accompanying configuration settings could > >>> be defined. > >>> > >>> GIM>> Thank you for your thoughtful consideration of the text. I agree > with the proposed update. > >>> > >>> --> > >>> > >>> > >>> 13) <!-- [rfced] Would it be helpful to update "YANG/NETCONF/RESTCONF > framework" > >>> as follows? Or do you prefer the current? > >>> > >>> Original: > >>> * A YANG data model will allow PAM to be incorporated into > >>> monitoring applications based on the YANG/NETCONF/RESTCONF > >>> framework. > >>> > >>> Perhaps: > >>> * A YANG data model will allow PAM to be incorporated into > >>> monitoring applications based on the YANG, NETCONF, > >>> and RESTCONF frameworks. > >>> > >>> GIM>> I agree with the proposed update. > >>> > >>> > >>> --> > >>> > >>> > >>> 14) <!-- [rfced] FYI - We rephrased this as follows to form a > >>> complete sentence. The other items in the list are complete > >>> sentences. Please review. > >>> > >>> Original: > >>> * The definition of the metrics that represent histograms for > >>> service level parameters with buckets corresponding to individual > >>> service level objectives, > >>> > >>> Updated: > >>> * Metrics can be defined to represent histograms for > >>> service-level parameters with buckets corresponding to individual > >>> SLOs.. > >>> > >>> GIM>> I agree with the proposed update. > >>> > >>> --> > >>> > >>> > >>> 15) <!-- [rfced] Please review "that should be maintained". Should > >>> this read "and should be maintained", or is the current okay? Also, > >>> please confirm that "violated time units" is correct here. We do not > >>> see this mentioned elsewhere in the document. > >>> > >>> Original: > >>> The same service levels that > >>> constitute SLO violations for one flow that should be maintained as > >>> part of the "violated time units" and related metrics, may be > >>> compliant for another flow. > >>> > >>> Perhaps: > >>> The same service levels that > >>> constitute SLO violations for one flow and should be maintained as > >>> part of the "violated time units" and related metrics may be > >>> compliant for another flow. > >>> > >>> GIM>> I agree with the updated version. > >>> > >>> > >>> --> > >>> > >>> > >>> 16) <!-- [rfced] FYI - We updated this fragment as follows to create > >>> a complete sentence. > >>> > >>> Original: > >>> By the same token, where the definition of what constitutes a > >>> "severe" or a "significant" violation depends on configuration > >>> settings or context. > >>> > >>> Perhaps: > >>> By the same token, the definition of what constitutes a > >>> "severe" or a "significant" violation depends on configuration > >>> settings or context. > >>> > >>> GIM>> I agree with the proposed update. > >>> > >>> > >>> --> > >>> > >>> > >>> 17) <!-- [rfced] Abbreviations > >>> > >>> a) We see both of the following as the expansion for PAM. > >>> > >>> Precision Availability Metric (1 instance) > >>> Precision Availability Metrics (8 instances) > >>> > >>> We updated to use the latter form (i.e., the form with "Metrics"). > >>> Please let us know any objections. > >>> > >>> GIM>> Thank you for the question. I think that the use of singular, > i.e., "Metric", in Acronyms is valid. Consequently, all acronyms in the > document, in my opinion, should be changed to "PAMs". > >>> > >>> > >>> > >>> b) We see two instances of "PAMs" in the document (see below). Since > "Metrics" > >>> in the expansion is already plural, is the "s" needed in "PAMs"? > >>> Please review. > >>> > >>> Original: > >>> To indicate a historic degree of precision availability, additional > >>> derived PAMs can be defined as follows: > >>> ... > >>> It might be useful for a service provider to determine the current > >>> condition of the service for which PAMs are maintained. > >>> > >>> GIM>> If we agree that the acronym is expanded as "Precision > Availability Metric", then "PAMs" is the right form. > >>> > >>> > >>> > >>> > >>> c) OAM appears in the list of acronyms in Section 2.2 but is not > >>> mentioned elsewhere in the document. May we delete this term from the > list? > >>> > >>> GIM>> Yes, please remove it. > >>> > >>> > >>> > >>> d) FYI - We have added an expansion for the following abbreviation > >>> per Section 3.6 of RFC 7322 ("RFC Style Guide"). Please review each > >>> expansion in the document carefully to ensure correctness. > >>> > >>> IP Flow Information Export (IPFIX) > >>> > >>> GIM>> It seems that IPFIX is used only one time in the document. Do > you think that the expanded form without the acronym is sufficient? I'm > okay with any form. > >>> > >>> --> > >>> > >>> > >>> 18) <!-- [rfced] Please review the "Inclusive Language" portion of > >>> the online Style Guide > >>> <https://www.rfc-editor.org/styleguide/part2/#inclusive_language> > >>> and let us know if any changes are needed. > >>> > >>> Note that our script did not flag any words in particular, but this > >>> should still be reviewed as a best practice. > >>> > >>> GIM>> I agree, don't find anything that requires rewording. > >>> > >>> --> > >>> > >>> > >>> 19) <!-- [rfced] We see a number of author-inserted comments in the > >>> .xml file for this document. We are unsure if these have been > >>> resolved. Please review and let us know if these can be deleted or if > they need to be addressed. > >>> > >>> GIM>> :-) My apologies for not cleaning our workspace properly. 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