Re: [auth48] [C381] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9306 <draft-ietf-lisp-vendor-lcaf-12> for your review
Alanna Paloma <apaloma@amsl.com> Mon, 19 September 2022 18:26 UTC
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Subject: Re: [auth48] [C381] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9306 <draft-ietf-lisp-vendor-lcaf-12> for your review
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Hi Dino, Alberto, and Anton, Thank you for your replies. We have noted Alberto’s and Anton’s approvals on the AUTH48 status page: https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9306 Alberto - We have updated the dates for RFCs-to-be 9300 and 9301 to be "September 2022". The files have been posted here (please refresh): https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9306.xml https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9306.txt https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9306.html https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9306.pdf The relevant diff files have been posted here: https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9306-diff.html (comprehensive diff) https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9306-auth48diff.html (AUTH48 changes) We will await approvals from Dino, Vina, and Vrushali prior to moving this document forward in the publication process. Thank you, RFC Editor/ap > On Sep 19, 2022, at 7:17 AM, Anton Smirnov (asmirnov) <asmirnov=40cisco.com@dmarc.ietf.org> wrote: > > All, > editorial changes look good. Approved with no comments. > > Anton Smirnov > From: rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org> > Sent: Friday, September 16, 2022 23:14 > To: Alberto Rodriguez-Natal (natal) <natal@cisco.com>; ermagan@gmail.com <ermagan@gmail.com>; Anton Smirnov (asmirnov) <asmirnov@cisco.com>; Vrushali Ashtaputre (vrushali) <vrushali@cisco.com>; farinacci@gmail.com <farinacci@gmail.com> > Cc: rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org>; lisp-ads@ietf.org <lisp-ads@ietf.org>; lisp-chairs@ietf.org <lisp-chairs@ietf.org>; ggx@gigix.net <ggx@gigix.net>; auth48archive@rfc-editor.org <auth48archive@rfc-editor.org> > Subject: Re: [C381] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9306 <draft-ietf-lisp-vendor-lcaf-12> for your review > > Authors, > > While reviewing this document during AUTH48, please resolve (as necessary) the following ques > tions, which are also in the XML file. > > 1) <!--[rfced] FYI, we updated the short title as follows, which appears in > the running header of the PDF file. Please review and let us know if updates > updates are needed. > > Original: > LISP-Vendor-LCAF > > Current: > Vendor-Specific LCAF > --> > > > 2) <!--[rfced] FYI, regarding the IANA-registered name "Vendor Specific", > within this document, we have updated to use the phrase with a hyphen > when needed in context, even though it doesn't exactly match the name. > For example, see the title of the RFC and "the Vendor-Specific LCAF" > (15 instances total). Please let us know if you prefer otherwise. > --> > > > 3) <!-- [rfced] Please review the "Inclusive Language" portion of the online > Style Guide <https://www.rfc-editor.org/styleguide/part2/#inclusive_language> > and let us know if any changes are needed. 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Rodriguez-Natal, V. Ermagan, A. Smirnov, V. Ashtaputre, D. Farinacci > WG Chair(s) : Joel M. Halpern, Luigi Iannone > Area Director(s) : Alvaro Retana, John Scudder, Andrew Alston
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- Re: [auth48] [C381] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9306 <draft… Dino Farinacci
- Re: [auth48] [C381] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9306 <draft… Alberto Rodriguez-Natal (natal)
- Re: [auth48] [C381] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9306 <draft… Anton Smirnov (asmirnov)
- Re: [auth48] [C381] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9306 <draft… Alanna Paloma
- Re: [auth48] [C381] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9306 <draft… Dino Farinacci
- Re: [auth48] [C381] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9306 <draft… Alanna Paloma
- Re: [auth48] [C381] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9306 <draft… Vrushali Ashtaputre (vrushali)
- Re: [auth48] [C381] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9306 <draft… Alanna Paloma
- Re: [auth48] [C381] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9306 <draft… Alanna Paloma
- Re: [auth48] [C381] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9306 <draft… Vina Ermagan
- Re: [auth48] [C381] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9306 <draft… Dino Farinacci
- Re: [auth48] [C381] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9306 <draft… Fabio Maino (fmaino)
- Re: [auth48] [C381] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9306 <draft… Dino Farinacci
- Re: [auth48] [C381] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9306 <draft… Alanna Paloma