Re: [auth48] [C381] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9306 <draft-ietf-lisp-vendor-lcaf-12> for your review

["Alberto Rodriguez-Natal (natal)" <[e-mail]>]

Thanks for taking care of the document.

The [rfced] changes look good to me, thanks!

One small question, while reviewing the references section, I’m not entirely sure the dates listed for RFC9300 and RFC9301 are correct. They show as “18 November 2020” while my understanding is that they should be “September 2022”. See below for a possible update, in case this needs fixing.

Otherwise the document looks ready for publication.

Thanks!
Alberto


EDITS:

Section 7. Normative References

OLD:
   [RFC9300]  Farinacci, D., Fuller, V., Meyer, D., Lewis, D., and A.
              Cabellos, Ed., "The Locator/ID Separation Protocol
              (LISP)", RFC 9300, DOI 10.17487/RFC9300, 18 November 2020,
              <https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/rfc9300>.
NEW:
   [RFC9300]  Farinacci, D., Fuller, V., Meyer, D., Lewis, D., and A.
              Cabellos, Ed., "The Locator/ID Separation Protocol
              (LISP)", RFC 9300, DOI 10.17487/RFC9300, September 2022,
              <https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/rfc9300>.

OLD:
   [RFC9301]  Farinacci, D., Maino, F., Fuller, V., and A. Cabellos,
              Ed., "Locator/ID Separation Protocol (LISP) Control
              Plane", RFC 9301, DOI 10.17487/RFC9301, 18 November 2020,
              <https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/rfc9301>.
NEW:
   [RFC9301]  Farinacci, D., Maino, F., Fuller, V., and A. Cabellos,
              Ed., "Locator/ID Separation Protocol (LISP) Control
              Plane", RFC 9301, DOI 10.17487/RFC9301, September 2022,
              <https://www.rfc-editor.org/info/rfc9301>.


From: [e-mail] <[e-mail]>
Date: Friday, September 16, 2022 at 11:14 PM
To: Alberto Rodriguez-Natal (natal) <[e-mail]>, [e-mail] <[e-mail]>, Anton Smirnov (asmirnov) <[e-mail]>, Vrushali Ashtaputre (vrushali) <[e-mail]>, [e-mail] <[e-mail]>
Cc: [e-mail] <[e-mail]>, [e-mail] <[e-mail]>, [e-mail] <[e-mail]>, [e-mail] <[e-mail]>, [e-mail] <[e-mail]>
Subject: Re: [C381] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9306 <draft-ietf-lisp-vendor-lcaf-12> for your review
Authors,

While reviewing this document during AUTH48, please resolve (as necessary) the following ques
tions, which are also in the XML file.

1) <!--[rfced] FYI, we updated the short title as follows, which appears in
the running header of the PDF file. Please review and let us know if updates
updates are needed.

Original:
LISP-Vendor-LCAF

Current:
Vendor-Specific LCAF
-->


2) <!--[rfced] FYI, regarding the IANA-registered name "Vendor Specific",
within this document, we have updated to use the phrase with a hyphen
when needed in context, even though it doesn't exactly match the name.
For example, see the title of the RFC and "the Vendor-Specific LCAF"
(15 instances total). Please let us know if you prefer otherwise.
-->


3) <!-- [rfced] Please review the "Inclusive Language" portion of the online
Style Guide <https://www.rfc-editor.org/styleguide/part2/#inclusive_language>
and let us know if any changes are needed. Note that our script did not flag
any words in particular, but this should still be reviewed as a best practice.
-->


Thank you.

RFC Editor/ap/ar


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RFC9306 (draft-ietf-lisp-vendor-lcaf-12)

Title            : Vendor-Specific LISP Canonical Address Format (LCAF)
Author(s)        : A. Rodriguez-Natal, V. Ermagan, A. Smirnov, V. Ashtaputre, D. Farinacci
WG Chair(s)      : Joel M. Halpern, Luigi Iannone
Area Director(s) : Alvaro Retana, John Scudder, Andrew Alston