Re: [auth48] [C381] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9306 <draft-ietf-lisp-vendor-lcaf-12> for your review

Dino Farinacci <farinacci@gmail.com> Sun, 25 September 2022 00:28 UTC

Return-Path: <farinacci@gmail.com>
X-Original-To: auth48archive@ietfa.amsl.com
Delivered-To: auth48archive@ietfa.amsl.com
Received: from localhost (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id B85CFC15256F; Sat, 24 Sep 2022 17:28:08 -0700 (PDT)
X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com
X-Spam-Flag: NO
X-Spam-Score: -2.108
X-Spam-Level:
X-Spam-Status: No, score=-2.108 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9, DKIM_SIGNED=0.1, DKIM_VALID=-0.1, DKIM_VALID_AU=-0.1, DKIM_VALID_EF=-0.1, FREEMAIL_FROM=0.001, RCVD_IN_DNSWL_NONE=-0.0001, SPF_HELO_NONE=0.001, SPF_PASS=-0.001, T_SCC_BODY_TEXT_LINE=-0.01, URIBL_ZEN_BLOCKED_OPENDNS=0.001] autolearn=unavailable autolearn_force=no
Authentication-Results: ietfa.amsl.com (amavisd-new); dkim=pass (2048-bit key) header.d=gmail.com
Received: from mail.ietf.org ([50.223.129.194]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id imGg5uXzc7mF; Sat, 24 Sep 2022 17:28:05 -0700 (PDT)
Received: from mail-pl1-x62f.google.com (mail-pl1-x62f.google.com [IPv6:2607:f8b0:4864:20::62f]) (using TLSv1.3 with cipher TLS_AES_128_GCM_SHA256 (128/128 bits) key-exchange X25519 server-signature RSA-PSS (2048 bits) server-digest SHA256) (No client certificate requested) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 09C77C15256A; Sat, 24 Sep 2022 17:28:05 -0700 (PDT)
Received: by mail-pl1-x62f.google.com with SMTP id b21so3271838plz.7; Sat, 24 Sep 2022 17:28:05 -0700 (PDT)
DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=gmail.com; s=20210112; h=to:in-reply-to:cc:references:message-id:date:subject:mime-version :from:content-transfer-encoding:from:to:cc:subject:date; bh=Z+c1ko0uY1gTCEohYDB9sBzGXkjXuCx4w2ZQ+VWu0eE=; b=RhkOEldOVNQxJqISOoq8QuXkUFNyi5wFzgVNcO2FswzENswvKPKDMX7fxQOL4in1zC mjY/7rDquCDEWu08XKodno2+b5/nasTDvykIMHe6rFk3p8ZlzU5pRYyskyDd9E1nP+Vc Fd+RDISTqh/dD+N4pv/Q0AwQbqCSXqCJ1YbqSFUUlCudAstJv4PhaCAJgO91UMknlOcv 7Qh11AqxjHcw8phMNoWpYTPf4Ye9nE40wU2sFZzw0GJ4yCiEho81sgJxQw1C/9t69VzN TUx6Iy6GHdAA60rhgct4F3Nn7ryXVaUhLtu8sgUPAv72zvu/NvzRImlTZdRGe1tBcFYC +3CA==
X-Google-DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=1e100.net; s=20210112; h=to:in-reply-to:cc:references:message-id:date:subject:mime-version :from:content-transfer-encoding:x-gm-message-state:from:to:cc :subject:date; bh=Z+c1ko0uY1gTCEohYDB9sBzGXkjXuCx4w2ZQ+VWu0eE=; b=aH5qhc+74hv/T9S6g/fAl9EJxSEqAQhdpg0ijIABeya6iUHK2pSOmYNsRQ4TjA8wSr TzH4F63FR2mNiP8guTgBM7SVBGFAUOAznM4nq6vVdIQlL8vqihllwfvyT7b5jHnG9AkQ Q7Q+LGxjznWitHCzjhyvECf9AazaSXsr9daK/MGzocWUGHgXyAikNn0PQW+uHz7x3hVT ieG5t+nEiVPmYg3lxxip2ivSMflBReogW4nMGfClCZRr7hzt9945NPzjXdnGbyw44lYu qz1ekk6GXTLR4lh6F7sT2/JZwEkLSXpcmepP3pcyWVNNnAvDCcrXBVXfg5CoD06NJ7Q7 nisw==
X-Gm-Message-State: ACrzQf3Y8tBD8UEsgKE6fXqJmxVLoUOEyzlhFFwex518gr1qfBwv2nGB dfxJCnPbMf7fcF+Xt70BcFQ=
X-Google-Smtp-Source: AMsMyM49TbXpC/j7BFV4wHtb9CTFiBpZOPJ11GR/r5A2sv27t/3pwAQctbi9pQOYxrwztce4Oq+iSw==
X-Received: by 2002:a17:90b:4f8e:b0:202:dd39:c04d with SMTP id qe14-20020a17090b4f8e00b00202dd39c04dmr17942210pjb.66.1664065679076; Sat, 24 Sep 2022 17:27:59 -0700 (PDT)
Received: from smtpclient.apple ([2601:646:9600:9710:e1d7:ee:f0d6:8554]) by smtp.gmail.com with ESMTPSA id a202-20020a621ad3000000b005380c555ba1sm9099288pfa.13.2022.09.24.17.27.58 (version=TLS1_3 cipher=TLS_AES_128_GCM_SHA256 bits=128/128); Sat, 24 Sep 2022 17:27:58 -0700 (PDT)
Content-Type: text/plain; charset="utf-8"
Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable
From: Dino Farinacci <farinacci@gmail.com>
Mime-Version: 1.0 (1.0)
Date: Sat, 24 Sep 2022 17:27:46 -0700
Message-Id: <F376CCAD-007C-4E65-8DCE-276448E8D12D@gmail.com>
References: <B5BE9701-8DA5-492F-B09D-0409E13E428C@amsl.com>
Cc: "Alberto Rodriguez-Natal (natal)" <natal@cisco.com>, ermagan@gmail.com, "Anton Smirnov (asmirnov)" <asmirnov=40cisco.com@dmarc.ietf.org>, "Vrushali Ashtaputre (vrushali)" <vrushali@cisco.com>, rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org, lisp-ads@ietf.org, lisp-chairs@ietf.org, ggx@gigix.net, auth48archive@rfc-editor.org, Fabio Maino <fmaino@cisco.com>
In-Reply-To: <B5BE9701-8DA5-492F-B09D-0409E13E428C@amsl.com>
To: Alanna Paloma <apaloma@amsl.com>
X-Mailer: iPhone Mail (20A362)
Archived-At: <https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/auth48archive/nZ-coh-lLxVLEVDy4dflNTuCJjc>
Subject: Re: [auth48] [C381] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9306 <draft-ietf-lisp-vendor-lcaf-12> for your review
X-BeenThere: auth48archive@rfc-editor.org
X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.39
Precedence: list
List-Id: "Archiving AUTH48 exchanges between the RFC Production Center, the authors, and other related parties" <auth48archive.rfc-editor.org>
List-Unsubscribe: <https://mailman.rfc-editor.org/mailman/options/auth48archive>, <mailto:auth48archive-request@rfc-editor.org?subject=unsubscribe>
List-Archive: <https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/browse/auth48archive/>
List-Post: <mailto:auth48archive@rfc-editor.org>
List-Help: <mailto:auth48archive-request@rfc-editor.org?subject=help>
List-Subscribe: <https://mailman.rfc-editor.org/mailman/listinfo/auth48archive>, <mailto:auth48archive-request@rfc-editor.org?subject=subscribe>
X-List-Received-Date: Sun, 25 Sep 2022 00:28:08 -0000

I am copying this list because I don’t have the distribution list for 9303 (since I’m not listed as an author). 

I have one comment on 9303. There is a reference to “128-bits-long”. I don’t think it should be hyphenated for these reasons:

(1) There is nothing distinguished about the word “long”. 

(2) “long” is redundant with 128-bits just like a “short minute” is a contradiction. 

(3) It should read either “128-bits in length” or simply “128-bits long”. 

This should be the case throughout the cluster. Please confirm if this is just an isolated case. 

Dino

> On Sep 23, 2022, at 2:52 PM, Alanna Paloma <apaloma@amsl.com> wrote:
> 
> Hi Authors,
> 
> We have updated the affiliation information in the files accordingly.
> 
> We will await Vina’s approval prior to moving this document forward in the publication process. 
> 
> The files have been posted here (please refresh):
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9306.xml
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9306.txt
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9306.html
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9306.pdf
> 
> The relevant diff files have been posted here:
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9306-diff.html (comprehensive diff)
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9306-auth48diff.html (AUTH48 changes)
> 
> For the AUTH48 status of this document, please see:
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9306
> 
> Thank you,
> RFC Editor/ap
> 
>> On Sep 21, 2022, at 12:29 PM, Alanna Paloma <apaloma@amsl.com> wrote:
>> 
>> Hi Vrushali,
>> 
>> Thank you for your reply. We have noted your approval on the AUTH48 status page:
>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9306
>> 
>> Please note that we are awaiting word regarding how Vina and Dino would would like their affiliation information to appear across the documents in C381, as well as Vina’s approval. Once these are received, we will move this document forward in the publication process. 
>> 
>> Best regards,
>> RFC Editor/ap
>> 
>>>> On Sep 20, 2022, at 9:25 AM, Vrushali Ashtaputre (vrushali) <vrushali@cisco.com> wrote:
>>> 
>>> I approve.
>>> 
>>> Thank You,
>>> Vrushali
>>> 
>>> -----Original Message-----
>>> From: Alanna Paloma <apaloma@amsl.com>
>>> Date: Tuesday, September 20, 2022 at 8:47 AM
>>> To: Dino Farinacci <farinacci@gmail.com>
>>> Cc: "Anton Smirnov (asmirnov)" <asmirnov=40cisco.com@dmarc.ietf.org>, "Alberto Rodriguez-Natal (natal)" <natal@cisco.com>, "rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org" <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org>, "ermagan@gmail.com" <ermagan@gmail.com>, "Vrushali Ashtaputre (vrushali)" <vrushali@cisco.com>, "lisp-ads@ietf.org" <lisp-ads@ietf.org>, "lisp-chairs@ietf.org" <lisp-chairs@ietf.org>, "ggx@gigix.net" <ggx@gigix.net>, "auth48archive@rfc-editor.org" <auth48archive@rfc-editor.org>
>>> Subject: Re: [C381] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9306 <draft-ietf-lisp-vendor-lcaf-12> for your review
>>> 
>>>  Hi Dino,
>>> 
>>>  Thank you for your reply. We have noted your approval on the AUTH48 status page:
>>>    https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9306
>>> 
>>>  Best regards,
>>>  RFC Editor/ap
>>> 
>>>> On Sep 19, 2022, at 12:37 PM, Dino Farinacci <farinacci@gmail.com> wrote:
>>>> 
>>>>> We will await approvals from Dino, Vina, and Vrushali prior to moving this document forward in the publication process.
>>>> 
>>>> I approve.
>>>> 
>>>> Dino
>>>> 
>>> 
>>> 
>> 
>