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Re: [auth48] [AD - Erik ] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9523 <draft-ietf-ntp-chronos-25> for your review

Neta R S <neta.r.schiff@gmail.com> Tue, 20 February 2024 02:37 UTC

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From: Neta R S <neta.r.schiff@gmail.com>
Date: Mon, 19 Feb 2024 21:36:49 -0500
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To: Erik Kline <ek.ietf@gmail.com>
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Subject: Re: [auth48] [AD - Erik ] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9523 <draft-ietf-ntp-chronos-25> for your review
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Many thanks, Erik!


Neta

On Mon, Feb 19, 2024, 7:06 PM Erik Kline <ek.ietf@gmail.com> wrote:

> > Comprehensive diffs:
> >    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9523-diff.html
>
> This looks good to me (LGTM).
>
> I think the wording in S4.1 ("thereby, ...") is not the most natural,
> but seems clear enough.
>
> Thanks all, and apologies for the delay.
>

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