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Re: [auth48] [AD - Erik ] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9523 <draft-ietf-ntp-chronos-25> for your review

Erik Kline <ek.ietf@gmail.com> Tue, 20 February 2024 00:06 UTC

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Subject: Re: [auth48] [AD - Erik ] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9523 <draft-ietf-ntp-chronos-25> for your review
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> Comprehensive diffs:
>    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9523-diff.html

This looks good to me (LGTM).

I think the wording in S4.1 ("thereby, ...") is not the most natural,
but seems clear enough.

Thanks all, and apologies for the delay.

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