Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9390 <draft-ietf-dime-group-signaling-14> for your review

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Thank you for the editorial work.

Regards,

Lionel


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> -----Message d'origine-----
> De : Alanna Paloma <[e-mail]>
> Envoyé : jeudi 20 avril 2023 17:33
> À : Mark Jones <[e-mail]>; Marco Liebsch <[e-mail]>;
> MORAND Lionel INNOV/NET <[e-mail]>; [e-mail]
> Cc : [e-mail]; [e-mail]; [e-mail];
> [e-mail]; [e-mail]
> Objet : Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9390 <draft-ietf-dime-group-signaling-14> for your
> review
>
> All,
>
> Thank you for your replies. We have updated the files with Rob’s suggestion and
> noted you approvals on the AUTH48 status page:
> https://www.rfc-/
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>
> We have now received all necessary approvals and consider AUTH48 complete.
> We will move this document forward in the publication process at this time.
>
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> Thank you,
> RFC Editor/ap
>
> > On Apr 20, 2023, at 5:33 AM, Mark Jones <[e-mail]> wrote:
> >
> > Good morning Alanna,
> >
> > I have reviewed the changes in the latest version.  With Rob's feedback
> incorporated, I approve its publication.
> >
> > I echo the thanks for all the excellent feedback and editorial work.
> >
> > Regards
> > Mark
> >
> >
> > On 2023-04-20 06:18, Marco Liebsch wrote:
> >> Dear Alanna,
> >>
> >> I could not spot any remaining item that needs to be fixed. I approve
> >> the publication of the latest version of the document after having Robert's
> feedback to section 4.1.1 taken into account.
> >>
> >> Many thanks for your work on the document.
> >>
> >> Best regards,
> >> marco
> >>
> >> -----Original Message-----
> >> From: Alanna Paloma <[e-mail]>
> >> Sent: Donnerstag, 20. April 2023 02:29
> >> To: [e-mail]; [e-mail]; Marco Liebsch
> >> <[e-mail]>; [e-mail]
> >> Cc: [e-mail]; [e-mail];
> >> [e-mail]; [e-mail];
> >> [e-mail]
> >> Subject: Re: [AD] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9390
> >> <draft-ietf-dime-group-signaling-14> for your review
> >>
> >> Authors and *Robert,
> >>
> >> This is a friendly reminder that we await your approvals prior to moving this
> document forward in the publication process.
> >>
> >> *Robert (AD) - Please review and approve of the updated text in Section 4.1.1
> in the diff file below:
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> >> The AUTH48 status page for this document is available here:
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> >> Thank you,
> >> RFC Editor/ap
> >>
> >>> On Apr 12, 2023, at 3:43 PM, Alanna Paloma <[e-mail]> wrote:
> >>>
> >>> Hi Lionel,
> >>>
> >>> Thank you for your reply. We have updated the files accordingly.
> >>>
> >>> We will await any further changes you may have and approvals from each
> author and the AD prior to moving forward in the publication process.
> >>>
> >>> The files have been posted here (please refresh):
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> >>> Thank you,
> >>> RFC Editor/ap
> >>>
> >>>> On Apr 12, 2023, at 4:59 AM, [e-mail] wrote:
> >>>>
> >>>> Dear Alana,
> >>>>
> >>>> Thank you for your quick feedback.
> >>>> Please find our response below.
> >>>>
> >>>> Regards,
> >>>>
> >>>> Lionel
> >>>>
> >>>>
> >>>> Orange Restricted
> >>>>
> >>>>> -----Message d'origine-----
> >>>>> De : Alanna Paloma <[e-mail]> Envoyé : mardi 11 avril 2023
> >>>>> 22:40 À : MORAND Lionel INNOV/NET <[e-mail]>;
> >>>>> [e-mail] Cc : [e-mail]; [e-mail];
> >>>>> [e-mail]; dime- [e-mail]; [e-mail];
> >>>>> [e-mail]; auth48archive@rfc- editor.org Objet : Re: [AD]
> >>>>> AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9390 <draft-ietf-dime-group-signaling-14> for
> >>>>> your review
> >>>>>
> >>>>> Hi Lionel and AD*,
> >>>>>
> >>>>> *Robert - As the AD, please review and approve of the updated text
> >>>>> in Section
> >>>>> 4.1.1 in the diff file below:
> >>>>> https://eur03.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2F
> >>>>> http://www.rfc-editor.org/%2Fauthors%2Frfc9390-auth48diff.html&data=05%7C0
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> >>>>>
> >>>>> Lionel - Thank you for your reply. We have updated the files
> >>>>> accordingly. Please note that we have some additional queries:
> >>>>>
> >>>>> 1) You provided the following expansions for the listed acronyms:
> >>>>>
> >>>>>> GASR: Group-Abort-Session-Request
> >>>>>> GASA: Group-Abort-Session-Answer
> >>>>>> GSTA: Group-Session-Termination-Answer
> >>>>>> GSTR: Group-Session-Termination-Request
> >>>>> We have added preceding text to introduce the acronyms. Please
> >>>>> review and let us know of any concerns.
> >>>>>
> >>>>> Current:
> >>>>>  Additionally, the following acronyms are used in the tables below.
> >>>>>
> >>>>>     GASR:  Group-Abort-Session-Request
> >>>>>
> >>>>>     GASA:  Group-Abort-Session-Answer
> >>>>>
> >>>>>     GSTA:  Group-Session-Termination-Answer
> >>>>>
> >>>>>     GSTR:  Group-Session-Termination-Request
> >>>> [[LM]] Thank you!
> >>>>
> >>>>> 2) Please clarify if “re-authorization request” or “Re-Authorization Request
> (RAR)”
> >>>>> should be made consistent. If so, which form should be used
> >>>>> throughout the document?
> >>>>>
> >>>>>>> 11) <!--[rfced] Throughout the text, the following terminology
> >>>>>>> appears to be used inconsistently.  Please review these
> >>>>>>> occurrences and let us now if/how they may be made consistent.
> >>>>>>>
> >>>>>>> re-authorization request vs. Re-Authorization Request (RAR)
> >>>>>>> -->
> >>>>>> [[LM]] OK!
> >>>> [[LM]] Sorry 😊 The point is that there is no inconsistency issue. One is
> "service-specific re-authorization request" whereas RAR is a one these re-
> authorization command defined in RFC6733. But I realized that we have missed
> something: RAR should be "Re-Auth-Request" and RAA should "Re-Auth-Answer"
> in some places.
> >>>> Moreover the coma (,) should be removed in "service-specific, server-
> initiated request". Both changes are addressed below.
> >>>>
> >>>> 4.2.2. Removing a Session from a Session Group
> >>>>
> >>>> OLD:
> >>>>
> >>>> When the Diameter server decides to remove a session from one or multiple
> particular session groups or from all session groups to which the session has
> been assigned beforehand, the server sends a Re-Authorization Request (RAR) or
> a service-specific, server-initiated request to the client, indicating the session in the
> Session-Id AVP of the request. The client sends a Re-Authorization Answer (RAA)
> or a service-specific answer to respond to the server's request.
> >>>>
> >>>> NEW:
> >>>>
> >>>> When the Diameter server decides to remove a session from one or multiple
> particular session groups or from all session groups to which the session has
> been assigned beforehand, the server sends a Re-Auth-Request (RAR) or a
> service-specific server-initiated request to the client, indicating the session in the
> Session-Id AVP of the request. The client sends a Re-Auth-Answer (RAA) or a
> service-specific answer to respond to the server's request.
> >>>>
> >>>> 4.2.3. Mid-session Group Assignment Modifications
> >>>>
> >>>> OLD:
> >>>>
> >>>> When a Diameter server decides to update assigned groups mid-session, it
> sends a Re-Authorization Request (RAR) message or a service-specific request to
> the client identifying the session for which the session group lists are to be
> updated. The client responds with a Re-Authorization Answer (RAA) message or a
> service-specific answer.
> >>>>
> >>>> NEW:
> >>>>
> >>>> When a Diameter server decides to update assigned groups mid-session, it
> sends a Re-Auth-Request (RAR) message or a service-specific request to the client
> identifying the session for which the session group lists are to be updated. The
> client responds with a Re-Auth-Answer (RAA) message or a service-specific
> answer.
> >>>>
> >>>>
> >>>> 4.4.1. Sending Group Commands
> >>>>
> >>>> OLD:
> >>>>
> >>>> For example, when a server sends a Re-Authorization Request (RAR) or a
> service-specific, server-initiated request to the client, it indicates to the client to
> follow the request according to one of three possible procedures.
> >>>>
> >>>> NEW:
> >>>>
> >>>> For example, when a server sends a Re-Auth-Request (RAR) or a service-
> specific server-initiated request to the client, it indicates to the client to follow the
> request according to one of three possible procedures.
> >>>>
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> >>>>>
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> >>>>> once a document is published as an RFC.
> >>>>>
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> >>>>>
> >>>>> Thank you,
> >>>>> RFC Editor/ap
> >>>>>
> >>>>>> On Apr 11, 2023, at 2:19 AM, [e-mail] wrote:
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>> Hi,
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>> Thank you for your patience.
> >>>>>> Please find below our feedback.
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>> Regards,
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>> Lionel
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>> Orange Restricted
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>>> -----Message d'origine-----
> >>>>>>> De : [e-mail] <[e-mail]> Envoyé :
> >>>>>>> vendredi 24 mars 2023 18:08 À : [e-mail];
> >>>>>>> [e-mail]; MORAND Lionel INNOV/NET
> <[e-mail]> Cc :
> >>>>>>> [e-mail]; [e-mail];
> >>>>>>> [e-mail]; [e-mail]; [e-mail];
> >>>>>>> [e-mail] Objet : Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9390
> >>>>>>> <draft-ietf-dime-group-signaling-14> for your review
> >>>>>>>
> >>>>>>> Authors,
> >>>>>>>
> >>>>>>> While reviewing this document during AUTH48, please resolve (as
> >>>>>>> necessary) the following questions, which are also in the XML file.
> >>>>>>>
> >>>>>>> 1) <!-- [rfced] Please insert any keywords (beyond those that
> >>>>>>> appear in the title) for use on
> https://www.rfc-/
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> >>>>>>> -->
> >>>>>> [[LM]] Nothing to add.
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>>>
> >>>>>>> 2) <!--[rfced] For clarity, may we update this sentence below?
> >>>>>>>
> >>>>>>> Original:
> >>>>>>> If the Diameter server accepts the client's request for a group
> >>>>>>> assignment, the server MUST assign the new session to each of
> >>>>>>> the one or multiple identified session groups when present in
> >>>>>>> the
> >>>>>>> Session- Group-Info AVP.
> >>>>>>>
> >>>>>>> Perhaps:
> >>>>>>> If the Diameter server accepts the client's request for a group
> >>>>>>> assignment, the server MUST assign the new session to each (one
> >>>>>>> or
> >>>>>>> more) of the identified session groups when present in the
> >>>>>>> Session- Group-Info AVP.
> >>>>>>> -->
> >>>>>> [[LM]] We agree!
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>>>
> >>>>>>> 3) <!--[rfced] May we update instances of "service-specific auth"
> >>>>>>> to be "service-specific authorization"?
> >>>>>>>
> >>>>>>> Original:
> >>>>>>> When sending the response to the client, e.g., a
> >>>>>>> service-specific auth response as per NASREQ AA-Answer
> >>>>>>> [RFC7155], the server MUST include all Session-Group-Info AVPs as
> received in the client's request.
> >>>>>>>
> >>>>>>> Perhaps:
> >>>>>>> When sending the response to the client, e.g., a
> >>>>>>> service-specific authorization response as per NASREQ AA-Answer
> >>>>>>> [RFC7155], the server MUST include all Session-Group-Info AVPs as
> received in the client's request.
> >>>>>>> -->
> >>>>>> [[LM]]  in the present case, it can only be "authorization". And,
> >>>>>> as it is "e.g." it is
> >>>>> fine to say "service-specification authorization".
> >>>>>>>
> >>>>>>> 4) <!-- [rfced] We are having trouble parsing the latter part of this
> sentence.
> >>>>>>> Please consider whether the suggested update correctly conveys
> >>>>>>> the intended meaning.
> >>>>>>>
> >>>>>>> Original:
> >>>>>>> In such case, the response to the group command MUST NOT
> >>>>>>> identify any group but identify solely the single session for
> >>>>>>> which the command has been processed.
> >>>>>>>
> >>>>>>> Suggested:
> >>>>>>> In such case, the response to the group command MUST NOT
> >>>>>>> identify any group other than the single session for which the
> >>>>>>> command has been processed.
> >>>>>>> -->
> >>>>>> [[LM]] The node can request to process a request for all sessions
> >>>>>> assigned to
> >>>>> one or multiple groups identified in the request. But the
> >>>>> receiving node can decide to treat the request only for the Session-Id
> included in the request.
> >>>>>> Proposed clarification:
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>> OLD:
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>>   In such case, the response to the group command MUST
> >>>>>>   NOT identify any group but identify solely the single session for
> >>>>>>   which the command has been processed.
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>> NEW:
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>>  In such case, the response to the group command MUST  NOT
> >>>>>> include any group identifier but only the Session-Id identifying
> >>>>>> the
> >>>>> session for
> >>>>>>  which the command has been processed.
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>>>
> >>>>>>> 5) <!-- [rfced] Please review each artwork element in the xml file.
> >>>>>>> Specifically, should any artwork element be tagged as sourcecode
> >>>>>>> or another element?
> >>>>>>> -->
> >>>>>> [[LM]] OK. None of the artwork element should be tagged as sourcecode.
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>>>
> >>>>>>> 6) <!-- [rfced] Is the following general guidance for future
> >>>>>>> registries, or is it guidance for IANA in setting up these two
> >>>>>>> registries and it should be removed since the registries have
> >>>>>>> already been
> >>>>> created?
> >>>>>>> Original:
> >>>>>>> The AVP names can be used as registry names
> >>>>>>> -->
> >>>>>> [[LM]] only guidance for IANA. Can be removed when processed.
> >>>>>>>
> >>>>>>> 7) <!-- [rfced] Would you like the references to be alphabetized
> >>>>>>> or left in their current order?
> >>>>>>> -->
> >>>>>> [[LM]] no specific preference. It is actually based on the first
> >>>>>> occurrence but any
> >>>>> order would be fine for us.
> >>>>>>>
> >>>>>>> 8) <!--[rfced] We have lowercased "Service-Specific" in the
> >>>>>>> sentence below, as there are case no occurrences of the
> >>>>>>> capitalized form used in RFC
> >>>>> 6733.
> >>>>>>> Please let us know if you have any conerns.
> >>>>>>>
> >>>>>>> Original:
> >>>>>>> As in [RFC6733], the term
> >>>>>>> Service-Specific below refers to a message defined in a Diameter
> >>>>>>> application (e.g., Mobile IPv4, NASREQ).
> >>>>>>>
> >>>>>>> Perhaps:
> >>>>>>> As in [RFC6733], the term
> >>>>>>> 'service-specific' below refers to a message defined in a
> >>>>>>> Diameter application (e.g., Mobile IPv4, NASREQ).
> >>>>>>> -->
> >>>>>> [[LM]] OK!
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>>>
> >>>>>>> 9) <!--[rfced] Should Tables 2 and 3 have titles? Please review,
> >>>>>>> and provide titles if desired. -->
> >>>>>>>
> >>>>>> [[LM]] OK! For sake of clarity:
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>> OLD:
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>> Table 2
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>> NEW:
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>> Table 2: Group Authorization Session State Machine for Stateful
> >>>>>> Client
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>> OLD:
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>> Table 3
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>> New:
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>> Table 3: Group Authorization Session State Machine for Stateful
> >>>>>> Server
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>>> 10) <!--[rfced] How should the following acronyms that appear in
> >>>>>>> Tables 2 and 3 be expanded?  Would it be helpful to include text
> >>>>>>> that precedes Tables 2 and 3 to define the expansions of these
> acronyms?
> >>>>>>>
> >>>>>>> GASR
> >>>>>>> GASA
> >>>>>>> GSTA
> >>>>>>> GSTR
> >>>>>>> -->
> >>>>>>>
> >>>>>> [[LM]] it would not arm to list all of them:
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>> GASR: Group-Abort-Session-Request
> >>>>>> GASA: Group-Abort-Session-Answer
> >>>>>> GSTA: Group-Session-Termination-Answer
> >>>>>> GSTR: Group-Session-Termination-Request
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>>> 11) <!--[rfced] Throughout the text, the following terminology
> >>>>>>> appears to be used inconsistently.  Please review these
> >>>>>>> occurrences and let us now if/how they may be made consistent.
> >>>>>>>
> >>>>>>> result code vs. Result-Code
> >>>>>> [[LM]] No inconsistency here. "result code" is a value. "Result-Code" is the
> AVP.
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>>> re-authorization request vs. Re-Authorization Request (RAR)
> >>>>>>> -->
> >>>>>> [[LM]] OK!
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>>>
> >>>>>>> 12) <!-- [rfced] Please review the "Inclusive Language" portion
> >>>>>>> of the online Style Guide
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> >>>>>>> and let us know if any changes are needed.
> >>>>>>>
> >>>>>>> For example, please consider whether "natively" should be updated.
> >>>>>>> -->
> >>>>>> [[LM]] only one occurrence.
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>> OLD:
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>> Newly defined Diameter applications may natively support Diameter
> >>>>>> session grouping and group operations.  Such applications provide
> >>>>>> intrinsic discovery for the support of session grouping
> >>>>>> capability using the assigned Application Id advertised during
> >>>>>> the capability exchange phase described in Section 5.3 of [RFC6733].
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>> NEW:
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>> Newly defined Diameter applications may intrinsically support
> >>>>>> Diameter session grouping and group operations.  In such a case,
> >>>>>> there is no need of a specific discovery mechanism for the
> >>>>>> support of session grouping capability besides the discovery of
> >>>>>> the Application Id assigned to the application advertised during
> >>>>>> the capability exchange phase described in Section 5.3 of [RFC6733].
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>
> >>>>>>> Thank you.
> >>>>>>>
> >>>>>>> RFC Editor
> >>>>>>>
> >>>>>>>
> >>>>>>> On Mar 24, 2023, at 10:05 AM, [e-mail] wrote:
> >>>>>>>
> >>>>>>> *****IMPORTANT*****
> >>>>>>>
> >>>>>>> Updated 2023/03/24
> >>>>>>>
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