Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9302 <draft-ietf-lisp-6834bis-14> for your review
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From: Luigi Iannone <ggx@gigix.net>
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Subject: Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9302 <draft-ietf-lisp-6834bis-14> for your review
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Hi, Looks good to me. Thank you very much for your excellent work for the whole cluster. Ciao L. > On 23 Sep 2022, at 02:40, Alanna Paloma <apaloma@amsl.com> wrote: > > Hi Authors, > > We have updated the files per Dino’s response to the cluster-wide queries, and we have updated Damien’s affiliation information. > > Please note that, since we have already received all approvals, we only need 1 author to review the changes and let us know if they are agreeable or if any further changes are needed. > > The files have been posted here (please refresh): > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9302.txt > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9302.pdf > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9302.html > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9302.xml > > The relevant diff files are posted here: > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9302-diff.html (comprehensive diff) > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9302-auth48diff.html (all AUTH48 changes) > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9302-lastdiff.html (htmlwdiff diff between last version and this) > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9302-lastrfcdiff.html (rfcdiff between last version and this) > > Thank you, > RFC Editor/ap > >> On Sep 14, 2022, at 9:07 AM, Alanna Paloma <apaloma@amsl.com> wrote: >> >> Hi Luigi, Olivier, and Damien, >> >> Thank you for your replies. We have now received all necessary approvals and consider AUTH48 complete: >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9302 >> >> As this document is part of Cluster C381, you may track the progress of all documents in this cluster through AUTH48 at: >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/C381 >> >> We will move this document forward in the publication process once the other necessary documents in the cluster complete AUTH48 as well >> >> Please let us know if you have any questions. >> >> RFC Editor/ap >> >>> On Sep 14, 2022, at 3:18 AM, dsaucez <damien.saucez@inria.fr> wrote: >>> >>> Hello, >>> >>> I am ok with the suggestions as well. >>> >>> Thank you, >>> >>> Damien Saucez >>> >>>> On 14 Sep 2022, at 10:44, Olivier Bonaventure <Olivier.Bonaventure@uclouvain.be> wrote: >>>> >>>> Same for me, I agree with your changes and Luigi’s comments. >>>> >>>> Best regards, >>>> >>>> >>>> Olivier Bonaventure >>>> >>>> ________________________________________ >>>> From: Luigi IANNONE <luigi.iannone@huawei.com> >>>> Sent: Wednesday, September 14, 2022 8:51 AM >>>> To: Alanna Paloma >>>> Cc: rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org; Damien Saucez; Olivier Bonaventure; lisp-ads@ietf.org; lisp-chairs@ietf.org; padma.ietf@gmail.com; auth48archive@rfc-editor.org >>>> Subject: RE: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9302 <draft-ietf-lisp-6834bis-14> for your review >>>> >>>> Hi, >>>> >>>> I had a look at the latest diff and it looks all good to me. >>>> >>>> Thanks for your work. >>>> >>>> Ciao >>>> >>>> L. >>>> >>>> >>>>> -----Original Message----- >>>>> From: Alanna Paloma <apaloma@amsl.com> >>>>> Sent: Wednesday, 14 September 2022 00:51 >>>>> To: Luigi IANNONE <luigi.iannone@huawei.com> >>>>> Cc: rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org; damien.saucez@inria.fr; >>>>> Olivier.Bonaventure@uclouvain.be; lisp-ads@ietf.org; lisp-chairs@ietf.org; >>>>> padma.ietf@gmail.com; auth48archive@rfc-editor.org >>>>> Subject: Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9302 <draft-ietf-lisp-6834bis-14> for your >>>>> review >>>>> >>>>> Hi Luigi, >>>>> >>>>> Thank you for your reply. We have updated as requested. >>>>> >>>>> The files have been posted here (please refresh): >>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9302.xml >>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9302.txt >>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9302.html >>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9302.pdf >>>>> >>>>> The relevant diff files have been posted here: >>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9302-diff.html (comprehensive diff) >>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9302-auth48diff.html (AUTH48 >>>>> changes) >>>>> >>>>> Please review the document carefully and contact us with any further >>>>> updates you may have. Note that we do not make changes once a >>>>> document is published as an RFC. >>>>> >>>>> We will await approvals from each party listed on the AUTH48 status page >>>>> below prior to moving this document forward in the publication process. >>>>> >>>>> For the AUTH48 status of this document, please see: >>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9302 >>>>> >>>>> Thank you, >>>>> RFC Editor/ap >>>>> >>>>>> On Sep 13, 2022, at 4:24 AM, Luigi IANNONE >>>>> <luigi.iannone=40huawei.com@dmarc.ietf.org> wrote: >>>>>> >>>>>> Hi, >>>>>> >>>>>> Thank you very much for this review, >>>>>> See comments inline. >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>>> -----Original Message----- >>>>>>> From: rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org> >>>>>>> Sent: Tuesday, 13 September 2022 06:37 >>>>>>> To: Luigi IANNONE <luigi.iannone@huawei.com>; >>>>> damien.saucez@inria.fr; >>>>>>> Olivier.Bonaventure@uclouvain.be >>>>>>> Cc: rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org; lisp-ads@ietf.org; >>>>>>> lisp-chairs@ietf.org; padma.ietf@gmail.com; >>>>>>> auth48archive@rfc-editor.org >>>>>>> Subject: Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9302 <draft-ietf-lisp-6834bis-14> for >>>>>>> your review >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Authors, >>>>>>> >>>>>>> While reviewing this document during AUTH48, please resolve (as >>>>>>> necessary) the following questions, which are also in the XML file. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 1) <!-- [rfced] Please insert any keywords (beyond those that appear >>>>>>> in the >>>>>>> title) for use on https://www.rfc-editor.org/search. --> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 2) <!-- [rfced] RFC 6834 says the following: >>>>>>> >>>>>>> It is not meant to replace any >>>>>>> existing LISP mechanisms but rather to extend them by providing new >>>>>>> functionalities. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Should this text indicate that it updates the extensions or >>>>>>> functionalities, rather than the mechanisms? >>>>>> >>>>>> Can be simplified to: >>>>>> >>>>>> It is not meant to replace any existing LISP mechanism, rather providing >>>>> new functionalities. >>>>>> >>>>>> Better? >>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Original: >>>>>>> This document obsoletes RFC 6834 "Locator/ID Separation Protocol >>>>>>> (LISP) Map-Versioning", which is the initial experimental >>>>>>> specifications of the mechanisms updated by this document. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Original: >>>>>>> This document obsoletes [RFC6834], which is the initial experimental >>>>>>> specifications of the mechanisms updated by this document. >>>>>>> --> >>>>>> I guess the second is actually new text, which reads better. >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 3) <!-- [rfced] In the following, to what does "it" and "both" refer? >>>>>>> Is it "Map-Versioning" or "the information"? Because there are two >>>>>>> uses and the text refers to "both cases", we suggest using updating >>>>>>> this text to clearly separate the uses (e.g., perhaps use <ol> or <ul>). >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Original: >>>>>>> When Map-Versioning is used, LISP-encapsulated data packets contain >>>>>>> the version number of the two mappings used to select the RLOCs in >>>>>>> the outer header (i.e., both source and destination RLOCs). This >>>>>>> information has two uses. On the one hand, it enables the ETR >>>>>>> (Egress Tunnel Router) receiving the packet to know if the ITR >>>>>>> (Ingress Tunnel Router) is using the latest mapping version for the >>>>>>> destination EID. If this is not the case, the ETR can directly send >>>>>>> a Map-Request containing the updated mapping to the ITR, to notify it >>>>>>> of the latest version. The ETR can also solicit the ITR to trigger a >>>>>>> Map-Request to obtain the latest mapping by sending it a Solicit Map- >>>>>>> Request (SMR) message. Both cases are defined in >>>>>>> [I-D.ietf-lisp-rfc6833bis]. On the other hand, it enables an ETR >>>>>>> receiving such a packet to know if it has in its EID-to-RLOC Map- >>>>>>> Cache the latest mapping for the source EID. If this is not the >>>>>>> case, a Map-Request can be sent. >>>>>>> --> >>>>>> >>>>>> New suggested text: >>>>>> >>>>>> When Map-Versioning is used, LISP-encapsulated data packets contain >>>>>> the version number of the two mappings used to select the RLOCs in >>>>>> the outer header (i.e., both source and destination RLOCs). This >>>>>> information has two uses: >>>>>> >>>>>> 1. Map-Versioning enables the ETR (Egress Tunnel Router) receiving >>>>>> the packet to know if the ITR (Ingress Tunnel Router) is using the latest >>>>>> mapping version for the destination EID. If this is not the case, the ETR >>>>>> can directly send a Map-Request containing the updated mapping to >>>>>> the ITR, to notify it of the latest version. The ETR can also solicit the >>>>>> ITR to trigger a Map-Request to obtain the latest mapping by sending >>>>>> a Solicit Map- Request (SMR) message. Both options are defined in >>>>>> [I-D.ietf-lisp-rfc6833bis]. >>>>>> >>>>>> 2. Map-Versioning enables an ETR receiving the packet to know if it >>>>>> has in its EID-to-RLOC Map-Cache the latest mapping for the >>>>>> source EID. If this is not the case, a Map-Request can be sent. >>>>>> >>>>>> Better? >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 4) <!--[rfced] May we update instances of "Dest Map-Version number" >>>>>>> to "Destination Map-Version number" to reflect usage in RFC 6834? >>>>>>> Note that this document has 2 instances of "Destination Map-Version >>>>>>> number" and 14 instances of "Dest Map-Version number". >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Original: >>>>>>> Dest Map-Version number: Map-Version of the mapping in the EID-to- >>>>>>> RLOC Map-Cache used by the ITR to select the RLOC present in the >>>>>>> "Destination Routing Locator" field of the outer IP header of LISP- >>>>>>> encapsulated packets (Section 7.1). >>>>>>> --> >>>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> Actually should be the other way around, changing the two instances of >>>>> "Destination Map-Version Number: to "Dest Map-Version Number". The use >>>>> of "Dest Map-Version Number" has been chosen to be inline with the figure >>>>> 1 throughout the document. >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 5) <!-- [rfced] For clarity, may we update this text as follows? >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Original: >>>>>>> The ordering enables reacting differently to >>>>>>> "older" and "newer" Map-Version number, discarding the packet in the >>>>>>> former case and triggering a Map-Request in the latter (see Section 7 >>>>>>> for further details). >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Perhaps: >>>>>>> The ordering enables different reactions to >>>>>>> "older" and "newer" Map-Version numbers, whereby "older" numbers >>>>> are >>>>>>> discarded and "newer" numbers trigger Map-Requests (see Section 7 >>>>>>> for further details). >>>>>>> --> >>>>>> >>>>>> Yes. It reads better. >>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 6) <!-- [rfced] Do you want to use superscript (<sup>) here? >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Original: >>>>>>> V2 > V1 AND (V2 - V1) <= 2**(12-1) >>>>>>> >>>>>>> OR >>>>>>> >>>>>>> V1 > V2 AND (V1 - V2) > 2**(12-1) >>>>>>> >>>>>>> <sup> would display as follows in the text: >>>>>>> V2 > V1 AND (V2 - V1) <= 2^(12-1) >>>>>>> >>>>>>> OR >>>>>>> >>>>>>> V1 > V2 AND (V1 - V2) > 2^(12-1) >>>>>>> >>>>>>> (12-1) would display as superscript in HTML and PDF. >>>>>>> --> >>>>>> >>>>>> Yes, good idea. >>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 7) <!-- [rfced] Is it the LISP site that assigns a new Map-Version number? >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Original: >>>>>>> The main idea of using Map-Version numbers is that whenever there is >>>>>>> a change in the mapping (e.g., adding/removing RLOCs, a change in the >>>>>>> weights due to Traffic Engineering policies, or a change in the >>>>>>> priorities) or a LISP site realizes that one or more of its own RLOCs >>>>>>> are not reachable anymore from a local perspective (e.g., through >>>>>>> IGP, or policy changes) the LISP site updates the mapping, also >>>>>>> assigning a new Map-Version number. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Perhaps: >>>>>>> The main idea of using Map-Version numbers is that whenever there is >>>>>>> a change in the mapping (e.g., adding/removing RLOCs, a change in the >>>>>>> weights due to Traffic Engineering policies, or a change in the >>>>>>> priorities) or a LISP site realizes that one or more of its own RLOCs >>>>>>> are no longer reachable from a local perspective (e.g., through IGP >>>>>>> or policy changes), the LISP site updates the mapping and also assigns >>>>>>> a new Map-Version number. >>>>>>> --> >>>>>> >>>>>> The suggested text is OK. >>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 8) <!-- [rfced] Is mapping intended to be singular or plural here? >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Original: >>>>>>> To this end simple measures can be >>>>>>> taken, like updating a mapping only when all active traffic is using >>>>>>> the latest version, or waiting sufficient time to be sure that >>>>>>> mapping in LISP caches expire, which means waiting at least as much >>>>>>> as the mapping Time-To-Live (as defined in >>>>>>> [I-D.ietf-lisp-rfc6833bis]). >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Perhaps: >>>>>>> To this end, simple measures can be taken, like >>>>>>> updating a mapping only when all active traffic is using the latest >>>>>>> version, or waiting a sufficient amount of time to be sure that the >>>>>>> mapping in LISP caches expires, which means waiting at least as long >>>>>>> as the mapping Time To Live (TTL) (as defined in [RFC9301]). >>>>>>> --> >>>>>> >>>>>> Singular is correct. >>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 9) <!-- [rfced] We are having trouble parsing this sentence. Should >>>>>>> the second instance of "ignoring the Source Map-Version number" be >>>>> deleted? >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Original: >>>>>>> The ETR checks only the Dest Map-Version number, ignoring the Source >>>>>>> Map-Version number as specified in the final sentence of Section 7.2, >>>>>>> ignoring the Source Map-Version number. >>>>>>> --> >>>>>> >>>>>> Yes, delete the second instance. >>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> 10) <!-- [rfced] Please review the "Inclusive Language" portion of >>>>>>> the online Style Guide <https://www.rfc- >>>>>>> editor.org/styleguide/part2/#inclusive_language> >>>>>>> and let us know if any changes are needed. Note that our script did >>>>>>> not flag any words in particular, but this should still be reviewed as a best >>>>> practice. >>>>>>> --> >>>>>> >>>>>> Nothing to change IMO. >>>>>> >>>>>> Thanks >>>>>> >>>>>> Ciao >>>>>> >>>>>> L. >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Thank you. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> RFC Editor >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> On Sep 12, 2022, at 9:33 PM, rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org wrote: >>>>>>> >>>>>>> *****IMPORTANT***** >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Updated 2022/09/12 >>>>>>> >>>>>>> RFC Author(s): >>>>>>> -------------- >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Instructions for Completing AUTH48 >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Your document has now entered AUTH48. 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- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9302 <draft-ietf-l… Luigi IANNONE
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9302 <draft-ietf-l… Olivier Bonaventure
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9302 <draft-ietf-l… dsaucez
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9302 <draft-ietf-l… Alanna Paloma
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9302 <draft-ietf-l… Alanna Paloma
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9302 <draft-ietf-l… Luigi Iannone
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