Re: [auth48] [EXTERNAL] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9313 <draft-ietf-v6ops-transition-comparison-04> for your review

["Patterson, Richard (IP Architect)" <[e-mail]>]

Looks good to me, thanks Rebecca!

From: Jordi Palet Martínez <[e-mail]>
Date: Friday, 23 September 2022 at 07:46
To: Rebecca VanRheenen <[e-mail]>, Gabor LENCSE <[e-mail]>, Warren Kumari <[e-mail]>, Patterson, Richard (IP Architect) <[e-mail]>, [e-mail] <[e-mail]>, <[e-mail]>
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Subject: [EXTERNAL] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9313 <draft-ietf-v6ops-transition-comparison-04> for your review
Confirmed tks!



Regards,
Jordi
@jordipalet


El 22/9/22, 22:46, "Rebecca VanRheenen" <[e-mail]> escribió:

    Hi Gábor and Warren,

    We deleted “NAPT44” in Section 4.1.1 as requested by Gábor. We also noted Warren’s approval of this change on the AUTH48 status page for this document (see https://eur01.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.rfc-editor.org%2Fauth48%2Frfc9313&amp;data=05%7C01%7Crichard.patterson%40sky.uk%7C456538b74b8e44ee53cd08da9d2f3ea3%7C68b865d5cf184b2b82a4a4eddb9c5237%7C0%7C0%7C637995123950326928%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQIjoiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C3000%7C%7C%7C&amp;sdata=78l0QpDa9%2FAX%2BRcH%2BK6WDqO2BqgfODbUrOBYCHmN%2FD8%3D&amp;reserved=0). Links to the updated files are below.

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    > On Sep 21, 2022, at 8:03 PM, Gabor LENCSE <[e-mail]> wrote:
    >
    > Dear Warren,
    >
    > Thank you very much for your approval.
    >
    > And my apologies for noticing it so late.
    >
    > Best regards,
    >
    > Gábor
    >
    > On 9/22/2022 10:55 AM, Warren Kumari wrote:
    >>
    >>
    >>
    >>
    >> On Wed, Sep 21, 2022 at 1:41 PM, Gabor LENCSE <[e-mail]> wrote:
    >> Dear Rebecca,
    >>
    >> All corrections are OK for me.
    >>
    >> However, I have just noticed a bug in the text above Table 3. The text is:
    >>
    >> "Presence or absence of NAPT44 per-flow state in the operator network."
    >>
    >> But NAPT44 is just WRONG here. NAPT44 indeed happens at the customer side in the case of the three other solutions. But the stateful translation that happens in the operator network is NOT NAPT44. (In the case of 464XLAT it is stateful NAT64. In the case                           of DS-Lite it looks like NAPT44, but also the softwire ID is a part of the tuple.) Anyway, the exact type of the translation is not interesting, the point is that there is a per-flow state.
    >>
    >> Could you just remove the word "NAPT44"?
    >>
    >> OLD:
    >>
    >> Presence or absence of NAPT44 per-flow state in the operator network.
    >>
    >> NEW:
    >>
    >> "Presence or absence of per-flow state in the operator network."
    >>
    >> Maybe this type of correction is not simply editorial, and thus it needs an AD approval?
    >>
    >> Warren, could please you approve the above change?
    >>
    >>
    >> Yes, this seems fine to me / approved.
    >>
    >> I do not think that it changes WG consensus, etc.
    >>
    >> W
    >>
    >>
    >> Best regards,
    >>
    >> Gábor
    >>
    >> On 9/21/2022 12:35 PM, Rebecca VanRheenen wrote:
    >>> Hi Gábor,
    >>>
    >>> We have updated the document per your latest email. The list of files is below. We have two further comments:
    >>>
    >>>
    >>>
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