Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9452 <draft-ietf-sfc-ioam-nsh-13> for your review
Shwetha Bhandari <shwetha.bhandari@thoughtspot.com> Tue, 15 August 2023 14:00 UTC
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Subject: Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9452 <draft-ietf-sfc-ioam-nsh-13> for your review
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Hello Sarah, Thanks for all the edits. The document looks good to me too. Thanks Shwetha On Mon, 14 Aug 2023, 7:19 pm Sarah Tarrant, <starrant@amsl.com> wrote: > Hello Frank, > > Thank you for your reply. We have marked your approval on the AUTH48 > status page for this document (see > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9404__;!!MZ3Fw45to5uY!PbiZF46gCqWC6JubvBjVOEeHQBsXGkYEpa8fHBjM7zdw71xB11xUirYWDvhn2A24NoaPxIomzAIB6QWUNpzLhgFqQA$ > ). > > We will assume your assent to any further changes submitted by your > coauthors unless we hear objection at that time. We will await approvals > from each of the parties listed at the AUTH48 status page prior to moving > this document forward in the publication process. > > Thank you, > RFC Editor/st > > > On Aug 14, 2023, at 8:41 AM, Frank Brockners (fbrockne) < > fbrockne@cisco.com> wrote: > > > > Hi Sarah, > > > > Thanks for implementing all the changes we discussed. The document looks > ready for publishing to me. > > > > Cheers, Frank > > > >> -----Original Message----- > >> From: Sarah Tarrant <starrant@amsl.com> > >> Sent: Thursday, 10 August 2023 19:43 > >> To: Frank Brockners (fbrockne) <fbrockne@cisco.com> > >> Cc: RFC Editor <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org>; > >> shwetha.bhandari@thoughtspot.com; sfc-ads@ietf.org; sfc-chairs@ietf.org > ; > >> gregory.mirsky@ericsson.com; andrew-ietf@liquid.tech; > >> auth48archive@rfc-editor.org; shwetha.bhandari@gmail.com > >> Subject: Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9452 <draft-ietf-sfc-ioam-nsh-13> for > your > >> review > >> > >> Hello Frank, > >> > >> Thank you for your reply and guidance. We have updated the document > >> accordingly. > >> > >> The files have been posted here (please refresh): > >> > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9452.xml__;!!MZ3Fw45to5uY!PbiZF46gCqWC6JubvBjVOEeHQBsXGkYEpa8fHBjM7zdw71xB11xUirYWDvhn2A24NoaPxIomzAIB6QWUNpyA_qJ1Ng$ > >> > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9452.txt__;!!MZ3Fw45to5uY!PbiZF46gCqWC6JubvBjVOEeHQBsXGkYEpa8fHBjM7zdw71xB11xUirYWDvhn2A24NoaPxIomzAIB6QWUNpy622snag$ > >> > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9452.html__;!!MZ3Fw45to5uY!PbiZF46gCqWC6JubvBjVOEeHQBsXGkYEpa8fHBjM7zdw71xB11xUirYWDvhn2A24NoaPxIomzAIB6QWUNpy50XqlGQ$ > >> > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9452.pdf__;!!MZ3Fw45to5uY!PbiZF46gCqWC6JubvBjVOEeHQBsXGkYEpa8fHBjM7zdw71xB11xUirYWDvhn2A24NoaPxIomzAIB6QWUNpwoO7G95A$ > >> > >> The relevant diff files have been posted here: > >> > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9452-diff.html__;!!MZ3Fw45to5uY!PbiZF46gCqWC6JubvBjVOEeHQBsXGkYEpa8fHBjM7zdw71xB11xUirYWDvhn2A24NoaPxIomzAIB6QWUNpx1bQUW5A$ > (comprehensive diff) > >> > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9452-rfcdiff.html__;!!MZ3Fw45to5uY!PbiZF46gCqWC6JubvBjVOEeHQBsXGkYEpa8fHBjM7zdw71xB11xUirYWDvhn2A24NoaPxIomzAIB6QWUNpx-QQ6M0g$ > (comprehensive > >> rfcdiff) > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9452-auth48diff.html__;!!MZ3Fw45to5uY!PbiZF46gCqWC6JubvBjVOEeHQBsXGkYEpa8fHBjM7zdw71xB11xUirYWDvhn2A24NoaPxIomzAIB6QWUNpyVv_tB8g$ > >> (AUTH48 changes only) > >> > >> Please review the document carefully as documents do not change once > >> published as RFCs. > >> > >> We will await any further changes you may have and approvals from each > >> author prior to moving forward in the publication process. > >> > >> For the AUTH48 status of this document, please see: > >> > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9452__;!!MZ3Fw45to5uY!PbiZF46gCqWC6JubvBjVOEeHQBsXGkYEpa8fHBjM7zdw71xB11xUirYWDvhn2A24NoaPxIomzAIB6QWUNpw0syHLWQ$ > >> > >> Thank you, > >> RFC Editor/st > >> > >>> On Aug 9, 2023, at 8:17 AM, Frank Brockners (fbrockne) > >> <fbrockne@cisco.com> wrote: > >>> > >>> Hi Sarah, > >>> > >>> I replied earlier today (see attached). Did you receive my reply? > >>> > >>> Cheers, Frank > >>> > >>> > >>>> -----Original Message----- > >>>> From: Sarah Tarrant <starrant@amsl.com> > >>>> Sent: Wednesday, 9 August 2023 15:05 > >>>> To: RFC Editor <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org> > >>>> Cc: Frank Brockners (fbrockne) <fbrockne@cisco.com>; > >>>> shwetha.bhandari@thoughtspot.com; sfc-ads@ietf.org; > >>>> sfc-chairs@ietf.org; gregory.mirsky@ericsson.com; > >>>> andrew-ietf@liquid.tech; auth48archive@rfc-editor.org > >>>> Subject: Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9452 <draft-ietf-sfc-ioam-nsh-13> for > >>>> your review > >>>> > >>>> Greetings, > >>>> > >>>> Just a friendly weekly reminder that this document awaits your > attention. > >>>> > >>>> Please see the document-specific questions and AUTH48 announcement > >> in > >>>> this thread and let us know if we can be of assistance as you begin > >>>> the > >>>> AUTH48 review process. > >>>> > >>>> Please note that the AUTH48 status page of this document is viewable > >> at: > >>>> > https://urldefense.com/v3/__http://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9452__;!!MZ3Fw45to5uY!PbiZF46gCqWC6JubvBjVOEeHQBsXGkYEpa8fHBjM7zdw71xB11xUirYWDvhn2A24NoaPxIomzAIB6QWUNpzntjGIHw$ > >>>> > >>>> AUTH48 FAQs are available at > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/faq/*auth48__;Iw!!MZ3Fw45to5uY!PbiZF46gCqWC6JubvBjVOEeHQBsXGkYEpa8fHBjM7zdw71xB11xUirYWDvhn2A24NoaPxIomzAIB6QWUNpwTQ_NpFA$ > . > >>>> > >>>> We look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience. > >>>> > >>>> Thank you. > >>>> RFC Editor/st > >>>> > >>>>> On Jul 31, 2023, at 9:58 PM, rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org wrote: > >>>>> > >>>>> Authors, > >>>>> > >>>>> While reviewing this document during AUTH48, please resolve (as > >>>>> necessary) the following questions, which are also in the XML file. > >>>>> > >>>>> 1) <!-- [rfced] Please note that the title of the document has been > >>>>> updated as follows ("In-situ" to "In Situ"): > >>>>> > >>>>> Original: > >>>>> Network Service Header (NSH) Encapsulation for In-situ OAM (IOAM) > >>>>> Data > >>>>> > >>>>> Current: > >>>>> Network Service Header (NSH) Encapsulation for In Situ OAM (IOAM) > >>>>> Data > >>>>> --> > >>>>> > >>>>> > >>>>> 2) <!-- [rfced] We are having trouble understanding "by means of > >>>>> configuration." Does the suggested text convey the intended meaning? > >>>>> Also, does "encapsulating/decapsulating" mean "encapsulating and > >>>>> decapsulating" or "encapsulating or decapsulating"? > >>>>> > >>>>> Original: > >>>>> In an administrative domain where IOAM is used, insertion of the > >>>>> IOAM header in NSH is enabled at the NSH tunnel endpoints, which > >>>>> also serve as IOAM encapsulating/decapsulating nodes by means of > >>>>> configuration. > >>>>> > >>>>> Perhaps: > >>>>> In an administrative domain where IOAM is used, insertion of the > >>>>> IOAM header in NSH is enabled at the NSH tunnel endpoints, which > >>>>> are also configured to serve as IOAM encapsulating and > >>>>> decapsulating nodes. > >>>>> --> > >>>>> > >>>>> > >>>>> 3) <!-- [rfced] This text appears in and points to Section 3. May > >>>>> we delete "Section 3"? Please review. > >>>>> > >>>>> Original: > >>>>> The operator MUST ensure that SFC-aware nodes along the Service > >>>>> Function Path support IOAM, otherwise packets might be dropped (see > >>>>> Section 3 further below, as well as [RFC8300] Section 2.2). > >>>>> > >>>>> Perhaps: > >>>>> The operator MUST ensure that SFC-aware nodes along the Service > >>>>> Function Path support IOAM; otherwise, packets might be dropped > >>>>> (see more below, as well as Section 2.2 of [RFC8300]). > >>>>> --> > >>>>> > >>>>> > >>>>> 4) <!-- [rfced] Would it be helpful to expand MD for the reader? > >>>>> Perhaps it > >>>> could be added to list of abbreviations introduced in Section 2? > >>>>> > >>>>> --> > >>>>> > >>>>> > >>>>> 5) <!-- [rfced] For readability, we have updated the text as > >>>>> follows. Please > >>>> let us know if any corrections are needed. > >>>>> > >>>>> Original: > >>>>> Per Section 2.2 of [RFC8300], packets with Next Protocol values not > >>>>> supported SHOULD be silently dropped by default. > >>>>> > >>>>> Current: > >>>>> Per Section 2.2 of [RFC8300], packets with unsupported Next > >>>>> Protocol > >>>> values > >>>>> SHOULD be silently dropped by default. > >>>>> --> > >>>>> > >>>>> > >>>>> 6) <!-- [rfced] For readability, may we update the text as follows? > >>>>> > >>>>> Original: > >>>>> IOAM is considered a "per domain" feature, where the operator > >>>>> decides on leveraging and configuring IOAM according to the > >> operator's needs. > >>>>> > >>>>> Suggested: > >>>>> IOAM is considered a "per domain" feature, where the operator > >>>>> decides how to leverage and configure IOAM according to the > >> operator's needs. > >>>>> --> > >>>>> > >>>>> > >>>>> 7) <!-- [rfced] For clarity, may we update the text as follows? > >>>>> Please let us > >>>> know if any corrections are needed. > >>>>> > >>>>> Original: > >>>>> Hardware and software friendly implementation: Hardware forwarders > >>>>> benefit from an encapsulation that minimizes iterative look-ups of > >>>>> fields within the packet: Any operation which looks up the value of > >>>>> a field within the packet, based on which another lookup is > >>>>> performed, consumes additional gates and time in an implementation > >>>>> - both of which are desired to be kept to a minimum. > >>>>> > >>>>> Current: > >>>>> Hardware- and software-friendly implementation: Hardware forwarders > >>>>> benefit from an encapsulation that minimizes iterative lookups of > >>>>> fields within the packet. Any operation that looks up the value of a > >>>>> field within the packet, based on which another lookup is performed, > >>>>> consumes additional gates and time in an implementation, both of > >>>>> which should be kept to a minimum. > >>>>> --> > >>>>> > >>>>> > >>>>> 8) <!-- [rfced] Terminology > >>>>> > >>>>> a) We note that Figure 1 contains “IOAM Option and Optional Data > >>>>> Space”, while the text defines “IOAM Option and Data Space”. Please > >>>>> review and let us know if these should be consistent. > >>>>> > >>>>> > >>>>> b) These terms may be used inconsistently. Please review and let us > >>>>> know if the forms on the right (on the right of the arrow) should be > >>>>> used consistently, or if any other updates are needed. > >>>>> > >>>>> IOAM-Data-fields & IOAM data fields -> IOAM-Data-Fields > >>>>> IOAM-Option-Types -> IOAM Option-Type > >>>>> --> > >>>>> > >>>>> > >>>>> 9) <!-- [rfced] Please review the "Inclusive Language" portion of > >>>>> the online Style Guide > >>>>> < > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/styleguide/part2/*inclusive_language__;Iw!!MZ3Fw45to5uY!PbiZF46gCqWC6JubvBjVOEeHQBsXGkYEpa8fHBjM7zdw71xB11xUirYWDvhn2A24NoaPxIomzAIB6QWUNpzuNWn4_g$ > > > >>>>> and let us know if any changes are needed. > >>>>> > >>>>> Note that our script did not flag any words in particular, but this > >>>>> should still be reviewed as a best practice. > >>>>> --> > >>>>> > >>>>> > >>>>> Thank you. > >>>>> > >>>>> RFC Editor > >>>>> > >>>>> > >>>>> On Jul 31, 2023, at 7:53 PM, rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org wrote: > >>>>> > >>>>> *****IMPORTANT***** > >>>>> > >>>>> Updated 2023/07/31 > >>>>> > >>>>> RFC Author(s): > >>>>> -------------- > >>>>> > >>>>> Instructions for Completing AUTH48 > >>>>> > >>>>> Your document has now entered AUTH48. 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Brockners, Ed., S. Bhandari, Ed. > >>>>> WG Chair(s) : Joel M. Halpern, Jim Guichard > >>>>> > >>>>> Area Director(s) : Alvaro Retana, John Scudder, Andrew Alston > >>>>> > >>>>> > >>> > >>> <Mail Attachment.eml> > > > >
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- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9452 <draft-ietf-s… Frank Brockners (fbrockne)
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