Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9452 <draft-ietf-sfc-ioam-nsh-13> for your review

Shwetha Bhandari <shwetha.bhandari@thoughtspot.com> Tue, 15 August 2023 14:00 UTC

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From: Shwetha Bhandari <shwetha.bhandari@thoughtspot.com>
Date: Tue, 15 Aug 2023 15:58:20 +0200
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Subject: Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9452 <draft-ietf-sfc-ioam-nsh-13> for your review
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Hello Sarah,

Thanks for all the edits. The document looks good to me too.

Thanks
Shwetha

On Mon, 14 Aug 2023, 7:19 pm Sarah Tarrant, <starrant@amsl.com> wrote:

> Hello Frank,
>
> Thank you for your reply. We have marked your approval on the AUTH48
> status page for this document (see
> https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9404__;!!MZ3Fw45to5uY!PbiZF46gCqWC6JubvBjVOEeHQBsXGkYEpa8fHBjM7zdw71xB11xUirYWDvhn2A24NoaPxIomzAIB6QWUNpzLhgFqQA$
> ).
>
> We will assume your assent to any further changes submitted by your
> coauthors unless we hear objection at that time. We will await approvals
> from each of the parties listed at the AUTH48 status page prior to moving
> this document forward in the publication process.
>
> Thank you,
> RFC Editor/st
>
> > On Aug 14, 2023, at 8:41 AM, Frank Brockners (fbrockne) <
> fbrockne@cisco.com> wrote:
> >
> > Hi Sarah,
> >
> > Thanks for implementing all the changes we discussed. The document looks
> ready for publishing to me.
> >
> > Cheers, Frank
> >
> >> -----Original Message-----
> >> From: Sarah Tarrant <starrant@amsl.com>
> >> Sent: Thursday, 10 August 2023 19:43
> >> To: Frank Brockners (fbrockne) <fbrockne@cisco.com>
> >> Cc: RFC Editor <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org>;
> >> shwetha.bhandari@thoughtspot.com; sfc-ads@ietf.org; sfc-chairs@ietf.org
> ;
> >> gregory.mirsky@ericsson.com; andrew-ietf@liquid.tech;
> >> auth48archive@rfc-editor.org; shwetha.bhandari@gmail.com
> >> Subject: Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9452 <draft-ietf-sfc-ioam-nsh-13> for
> your
> >> review
> >>
> >> Hello Frank,
> >>
> >> Thank you for your reply and guidance. We have updated the document
> >> accordingly.
> >>
> >> The files have been posted here (please refresh):
> >>
> https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9452.xml__;!!MZ3Fw45to5uY!PbiZF46gCqWC6JubvBjVOEeHQBsXGkYEpa8fHBjM7zdw71xB11xUirYWDvhn2A24NoaPxIomzAIB6QWUNpyA_qJ1Ng$
> >>
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> >>
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> >>
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> >>
> >> The relevant diff files have been posted here:
> >>
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> (comprehensive diff)
> >>
> https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9452-rfcdiff.html__;!!MZ3Fw45to5uY!PbiZF46gCqWC6JubvBjVOEeHQBsXGkYEpa8fHBjM7zdw71xB11xUirYWDvhn2A24NoaPxIomzAIB6QWUNpx-QQ6M0g$
> (comprehensive
> >> rfcdiff)
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> >> (AUTH48 changes only)
> >>
> >> Please review the document carefully as documents do not change once
> >> published as RFCs.
> >>
> >> We will await any further changes you may have and approvals from each
> >> author prior to moving forward in the publication process.
> >>
> >> For the AUTH48 status of this document, please see:
> >>
> https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9452__;!!MZ3Fw45to5uY!PbiZF46gCqWC6JubvBjVOEeHQBsXGkYEpa8fHBjM7zdw71xB11xUirYWDvhn2A24NoaPxIomzAIB6QWUNpw0syHLWQ$
> >>
> >> Thank you,
> >> RFC Editor/st
> >>
> >>> On Aug 9, 2023, at 8:17 AM, Frank Brockners (fbrockne)
> >> <fbrockne@cisco.com> wrote:
> >>>
> >>> Hi Sarah,
> >>>
> >>> I replied earlier today (see attached). Did you receive my reply?
> >>>
> >>> Cheers, Frank
> >>>
> >>>
> >>>> -----Original Message-----
> >>>> From: Sarah Tarrant <starrant@amsl.com>
> >>>> Sent: Wednesday, 9 August 2023 15:05
> >>>> To: RFC Editor <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org>
> >>>> Cc: Frank Brockners (fbrockne) <fbrockne@cisco.com>;
> >>>> shwetha.bhandari@thoughtspot.com; sfc-ads@ietf.org;
> >>>> sfc-chairs@ietf.org; gregory.mirsky@ericsson.com;
> >>>> andrew-ietf@liquid.tech; auth48archive@rfc-editor.org
> >>>> Subject: Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9452 <draft-ietf-sfc-ioam-nsh-13> for
> >>>> your review
> >>>>
> >>>> Greetings,
> >>>>
> >>>> Just a friendly weekly reminder that this document awaits your
> attention.
> >>>>
> >>>> Please see the document-specific questions and AUTH48 announcement
> >> in
> >>>> this thread and let us know if we can be of assistance as you begin
> >>>> the
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> >>>>
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> .
> >>>>
> >>>> We look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.
> >>>>
> >>>> Thank you.
> >>>> RFC Editor/st
> >>>>
> >>>>> On Jul 31, 2023, at 9:58 PM, rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org wrote:
> >>>>>
> >>>>> Authors,
> >>>>>
> >>>>> While reviewing this document during AUTH48, please resolve (as
> >>>>> necessary) the following questions, which are also in the XML file.
> >>>>>
> >>>>> 1) <!-- [rfced] Please note that the title of the document has been
> >>>>> updated as follows ("In-situ" to "In Situ"):
> >>>>>
> >>>>> Original:
> >>>>> Network Service Header (NSH) Encapsulation for In-situ OAM (IOAM)
> >>>>> Data
> >>>>>
> >>>>> Current:
> >>>>> Network Service Header (NSH) Encapsulation for In Situ OAM (IOAM)
> >>>>> Data
> >>>>> -->
> >>>>>
> >>>>>
> >>>>> 2) <!-- [rfced] We are having trouble understanding "by means of
> >>>>> configuration."  Does the suggested text convey the intended meaning?
> >>>>> Also, does "encapsulating/decapsulating" mean "encapsulating and
> >>>>> decapsulating" or "encapsulating or decapsulating"?
> >>>>>
> >>>>> Original:
> >>>>> In an administrative domain where IOAM is used,  insertion of the
> >>>>> IOAM header in NSH is enabled at the NSH tunnel  endpoints, which
> >>>>> also serve as IOAM encapsulating/decapsulating nodes  by means of
> >>>>> configuration.
> >>>>>
> >>>>> Perhaps:
> >>>>> In an administrative domain where IOAM is used,  insertion of the
> >>>>> IOAM header in NSH is enabled at the NSH tunnel  endpoints, which
> >>>>> are also configured to serve as IOAM encapsulating and
> >>>>> decapsulating nodes.
> >>>>> -->
> >>>>>
> >>>>>
> >>>>> 3) <!-- [rfced] This text appears in and points to Section 3.  May
> >>>>> we delete "Section 3"?  Please review.
> >>>>>
> >>>>> Original:
> >>>>> The operator MUST ensure that SFC-aware  nodes along the Service
> >>>>> Function Path support IOAM, otherwise packets  might be dropped (see
> >>>>> Section 3 further below, as well as [RFC8300]  Section 2.2).
> >>>>>
> >>>>> Perhaps:
> >>>>> The operator MUST ensure that SFC-aware  nodes along the Service
> >>>>> Function Path support IOAM; otherwise, packets  might be dropped
> >>>>> (see more below, as well as Section 2.2 of [RFC8300]).
> >>>>> -->
> >>>>>
> >>>>>
> >>>>> 4) <!-- [rfced] Would it be helpful to expand MD for the reader?
> >>>>> Perhaps it
> >>>> could be added to list of abbreviations introduced in Section 2?
> >>>>>
> >>>>> -->
> >>>>>
> >>>>>
> >>>>> 5) <!-- [rfced] For readability, we have updated the text as
> >>>>> follows.  Please
> >>>> let us know if any corrections are needed.
> >>>>>
> >>>>> Original:
> >>>>> Per Section 2.2 of [RFC8300], packets with Next Protocol values not
> >>>>> supported SHOULD be silently dropped by default.
> >>>>>
> >>>>> Current:
> >>>>> Per Section 2.2 of [RFC8300], packets with unsupported Next
> >>>>> Protocol
> >>>> values
> >>>>> SHOULD be silently dropped by default.
> >>>>> -->
> >>>>>
> >>>>>
> >>>>> 6) <!-- [rfced] For readability, may we update the text as follows?
> >>>>>
> >>>>> Original:
> >>>>> IOAM is considered a "per domain" feature, where the operator
> >>>>> decides  on leveraging and configuring IOAM according to the
> >> operator's needs.
> >>>>>
> >>>>> Suggested:
> >>>>> IOAM is considered a "per domain" feature, where the operator
> >>>>> decides  how to leverage and configure IOAM according to the
> >> operator's needs.
> >>>>> -->
> >>>>>
> >>>>>
> >>>>> 7) <!-- [rfced] For clarity, may we update the text as follows?
> >>>>> Please let us
> >>>> know if any corrections are needed.
> >>>>>
> >>>>> Original:
> >>>>> Hardware and software friendly implementation: Hardware forwarders
> >>>>> benefit from an encapsulation that minimizes iterative look-ups of
> >>>>> fields within the packet: Any operation which looks up the value of
> >>>>> a  field within the packet, based on which another lookup is
> >>>>> performed,  consumes additional gates and time in an implementation
> >>>>> - both of  which are desired to be kept to a minimum.
> >>>>>
> >>>>> Current:
> >>>>> Hardware- and software-friendly implementation: Hardware forwarders
> >>>>> benefit from an encapsulation that minimizes iterative lookups of
> >>>>> fields within the packet. Any operation that looks up the value of a
> >>>>> field within the packet, based on which another lookup is performed,
> >>>>> consumes additional gates and time in an implementation, both of
> >>>>> which should be kept to a minimum.
> >>>>> -->
> >>>>>
> >>>>>
> >>>>> 8) <!-- [rfced] Terminology
> >>>>>
> >>>>> a) We note that Figure 1 contains “IOAM Option and Optional Data
> >>>>> Space”, while the text defines “IOAM Option and Data Space”. Please
> >>>>> review and let us know if these should be consistent.
> >>>>>
> >>>>>
> >>>>> b) These terms may be used inconsistently.  Please review and let us
> >>>>> know if the forms on the right (on the right of the arrow) should be
> >>>>> used consistently, or if any other updates are needed.
> >>>>>
> >>>>> IOAM-Data-fields & IOAM data fields -> IOAM-Data-Fields
> >>>>> IOAM-Option-Types -> IOAM Option-Type
> >>>>> -->
> >>>>>
> >>>>>
> >>>>> 9) <!-- [rfced] Please review the "Inclusive Language" portion of
> >>>>> the online Style Guide
> >>>>> <
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> >
> >>>>> and let us know if any changes are needed.
> >>>>>
> >>>>> Note that our script did not flag any words in particular, but this
> >>>>> should still be reviewed as a best practice.
> >>>>> -->
> >>>>>
> >>>>>
> >>>>> Thank you.
> >>>>>
> >>>>> RFC Editor
> >>>>>
> >>>>>
> >>>>> On Jul 31, 2023, at 7:53 PM, rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org wrote:
> >>>>>
> >>>>> *****IMPORTANT*****
> >>>>>
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> >>>>>
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> >>>>>
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> >>>>>
> https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9452-rfcdiff.html__;!!MZ3Fw45to5uY!PbiZF46gCqWC6JubvBjVOEeHQBsXGkYEpa8fHBjM7zdw71xB11xUirYWDvhn2A24NoaPxIomzAIB6QWUNpx-QQ6M0g$
> (side by
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> >>>>> Diff of the XML:
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> >>>>>
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> >>>>>
> >>>>> XMLv3 file that is a best effort to capture v3-related format
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> >>>>>
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> >>>>>
> >>>>> Please let us know if you have any questions.
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> >>>>> RFC Editor
> >>>>>
> >>>>> --------------------------------------
> >>>>> RFC9452 (draft-ietf-sfc-ioam-nsh-13)
> >>>>>
> >>>>> Title            : Network Service Header (NSH) Encapsulation for
> In-situ
> >> OAM
> >>>> (IOAM) Data
> >>>>> Author(s)        : F. Brockners, Ed., S. Bhandari, Ed.
> >>>>> WG Chair(s)      : Joel M. Halpern, Jim Guichard
> >>>>>
> >>>>> Area Director(s) : Alvaro Retana, John Scudder, Andrew Alston
> >>>>>
> >>>>>
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