Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9452 <draft-ietf-sfc-ioam-nsh-13> for your review

Sarah Tarrant <starrant@amsl.com> Tue, 15 August 2023 14:59 UTC

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Hello Shwetha,

Thank you for your reply. We have now received all necessary approvals and consider AUTH48 complete:

https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9452

Thank you for your attention and guidance during the AUTH48 process.
We will move this document forward in the publication process at this time.

Sincerely,
RFC Editor/st

> On Aug 15, 2023, at 8:58 AM, Shwetha Bhandari <shwetha.bhandari@thoughtspot.com> wrote:
> 
> Hello Sarah,
> 
> Thanks for all the edits. The document looks good to me too.
> 
> Thanks
> Shwetha
> 
> On Mon, 14 Aug 2023, 7:19 pm Sarah Tarrant, <starrant@amsl.com> wrote:
> Hello Frank,
> 
> Thank you for your reply. We have marked your approval on the AUTH48 status page for this document (see https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9404__;!!MZ3Fw45to5uY!PbiZF46gCqWC6JubvBjVOEeHQBsXGkYEpa8fHBjM7zdw71xB11xUirYWDvhn2A24NoaPxIomzAIB6QWUNpzLhgFqQA$ ).
> 
> We will assume your assent to any further changes submitted by your coauthors unless we hear objection at that time. We will await approvals from each of the parties listed at the AUTH48 status page prior to moving this document forward in the publication process.
> 
> Thank you,
> RFC Editor/st
> 
> > On Aug 14, 2023, at 8:41 AM, Frank Brockners (fbrockne) <fbrockne@cisco.com> wrote:
> > 
> > Hi Sarah,
> > 
> > Thanks for implementing all the changes we discussed. The document looks ready for publishing to me.
> > 
> > Cheers, Frank
> > 
> >> -----Original Message-----
> >> From: Sarah Tarrant <starrant@amsl.com>
> >> Sent: Thursday, 10 August 2023 19:43
> >> To: Frank Brockners (fbrockne) <fbrockne@cisco.com>
> >> Cc: RFC Editor <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org>;
> >> shwetha.bhandari@thoughtspot.com; sfc-ads@ietf.org; sfc-chairs@ietf.org;
> >> gregory.mirsky@ericsson.com; andrew-ietf@liquid.tech;
> >> auth48archive@rfc-editor.org; shwetha.bhandari@gmail.com
> >> Subject: Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9452 <draft-ietf-sfc-ioam-nsh-13> for your
> >> review
> >> 
> >> Hello Frank,
> >> 
> >> Thank you for your reply and guidance. We have updated the document
> >> accordingly.
> >> 
> >> The files have been posted here (please refresh):
> >> https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9452.xml__;!!MZ3Fw45to5uY!PbiZF46gCqWC6JubvBjVOEeHQBsXGkYEpa8fHBjM7zdw71xB11xUirYWDvhn2A24NoaPxIomzAIB6QWUNpyA_qJ1Ng$ 
> >> https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9452.txt__;!!MZ3Fw45to5uY!PbiZF46gCqWC6JubvBjVOEeHQBsXGkYEpa8fHBjM7zdw71xB11xUirYWDvhn2A24NoaPxIomzAIB6QWUNpy622snag$ 
> >> https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9452.html__;!!MZ3Fw45to5uY!PbiZF46gCqWC6JubvBjVOEeHQBsXGkYEpa8fHBjM7zdw71xB11xUirYWDvhn2A24NoaPxIomzAIB6QWUNpy50XqlGQ$ 
> >> https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9452.pdf__;!!MZ3Fw45to5uY!PbiZF46gCqWC6JubvBjVOEeHQBsXGkYEpa8fHBjM7zdw71xB11xUirYWDvhn2A24NoaPxIomzAIB6QWUNpwoO7G95A$ 
> >> 
> >> The relevant diff files have been posted here:
> >> https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9452-diff.html__;!!MZ3Fw45to5uY!PbiZF46gCqWC6JubvBjVOEeHQBsXGkYEpa8fHBjM7zdw71xB11xUirYWDvhn2A24NoaPxIomzAIB6QWUNpx1bQUW5A$  (comprehensive diff)
> >> https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9452-rfcdiff.html__;!!MZ3Fw45to5uY!PbiZF46gCqWC6JubvBjVOEeHQBsXGkYEpa8fHBjM7zdw71xB11xUirYWDvhn2A24NoaPxIomzAIB6QWUNpx-QQ6M0g$  (comprehensive
> >> rfcdiff) https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9452-auth48diff.html__;!!MZ3Fw45to5uY!PbiZF46gCqWC6JubvBjVOEeHQBsXGkYEpa8fHBjM7zdw71xB11xUirYWDvhn2A24NoaPxIomzAIB6QWUNpyVv_tB8g$ 
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> >> 
> >> Please review the document carefully as documents do not change once
> >> published as RFCs.
> >> 
> >> We will await any further changes you may have and approvals from each
> >> author prior to moving forward in the publication process.
> >> 
> >> For the AUTH48 status of this document, please see:
> >> https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9452__;!!MZ3Fw45to5uY!PbiZF46gCqWC6JubvBjVOEeHQBsXGkYEpa8fHBjM7zdw71xB11xUirYWDvhn2A24NoaPxIomzAIB6QWUNpw0syHLWQ$ 
> >> 
> >> Thank you,
> >> RFC Editor/st
> >> 
> >>> On Aug 9, 2023, at 8:17 AM, Frank Brockners (fbrockne)
> >> <fbrockne@cisco.com> wrote:
> >>> 
> >>> Hi Sarah,
> >>> 
> >>> I replied earlier today (see attached). Did you receive my reply?
> >>> 
> >>> Cheers, Frank
> >>> 
> >>> 
> >>>> -----Original Message-----
> >>>> From: Sarah Tarrant <starrant@amsl.com>
> >>>> Sent: Wednesday, 9 August 2023 15:05
> >>>> To: RFC Editor <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org>
> >>>> Cc: Frank Brockners (fbrockne) <fbrockne@cisco.com>;
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> >>>> Subject: Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9452 <draft-ietf-sfc-ioam-nsh-13> for
> >>>> your review
> >>>> 
> >>>> Greetings,
> >>>> 
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> >>>> RFC Editor/st
> >>>> 
> >>>>> On Jul 31, 2023, at 9:58 PM, rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org wrote:
> >>>>> 
> >>>>> Authors,
> >>>>> 
> >>>>> While reviewing this document during AUTH48, please resolve (as
> >>>>> necessary) the following questions, which are also in the XML file.
> >>>>> 
> >>>>> 1) <!-- [rfced] Please note that the title of the document has been
> >>>>> updated as follows ("In-situ" to "In Situ"):
> >>>>> 
> >>>>> Original:
> >>>>> Network Service Header (NSH) Encapsulation for In-situ OAM (IOAM)
> >>>>> Data
> >>>>> 
> >>>>> Current:
> >>>>> Network Service Header (NSH) Encapsulation for In Situ OAM (IOAM)
> >>>>> Data
> >>>>> -->
> >>>>> 
> >>>>> 
> >>>>> 2) <!-- [rfced] We are having trouble understanding "by means of
> >>>>> configuration."  Does the suggested text convey the intended meaning?
> >>>>> Also, does "encapsulating/decapsulating" mean "encapsulating and
> >>>>> decapsulating" or "encapsulating or decapsulating"?
> >>>>> 
> >>>>> Original:
> >>>>> In an administrative domain where IOAM is used,  insertion of the
> >>>>> IOAM header in NSH is enabled at the NSH tunnel  endpoints, which
> >>>>> also serve as IOAM encapsulating/decapsulating nodes  by means of
> >>>>> configuration.
> >>>>> 
> >>>>> Perhaps:
> >>>>> In an administrative domain where IOAM is used,  insertion of the
> >>>>> IOAM header in NSH is enabled at the NSH tunnel  endpoints, which
> >>>>> are also configured to serve as IOAM encapsulating and
> >>>>> decapsulating nodes.
> >>>>> -->
> >>>>> 
> >>>>> 
> >>>>> 3) <!-- [rfced] This text appears in and points to Section 3.  May
> >>>>> we delete "Section 3"?  Please review.
> >>>>> 
> >>>>> Original:
> >>>>> The operator MUST ensure that SFC-aware  nodes along the Service
> >>>>> Function Path support IOAM, otherwise packets  might be dropped (see
> >>>>> Section 3 further below, as well as [RFC8300]  Section 2.2).
> >>>>> 
> >>>>> Perhaps:
> >>>>> The operator MUST ensure that SFC-aware  nodes along the Service
> >>>>> Function Path support IOAM; otherwise, packets  might be dropped
> >>>>> (see more below, as well as Section 2.2 of [RFC8300]).
> >>>>> -->
> >>>>> 
> >>>>> 
> >>>>> 4) <!-- [rfced] Would it be helpful to expand MD for the reader?
> >>>>> Perhaps it
> >>>> could be added to list of abbreviations introduced in Section 2?
> >>>>> 
> >>>>> -->
> >>>>> 
> >>>>> 
> >>>>> 5) <!-- [rfced] For readability, we have updated the text as
> >>>>> follows.  Please
> >>>> let us know if any corrections are needed.
> >>>>> 
> >>>>> Original:
> >>>>> Per Section 2.2 of [RFC8300], packets with Next Protocol values not
> >>>>> supported SHOULD be silently dropped by default.
> >>>>> 
> >>>>> Current:
> >>>>> Per Section 2.2 of [RFC8300], packets with unsupported Next
> >>>>> Protocol
> >>>> values
> >>>>> SHOULD be silently dropped by default.
> >>>>> -->
> >>>>> 
> >>>>> 
> >>>>> 6) <!-- [rfced] For readability, may we update the text as follows?
> >>>>> 
> >>>>> Original:
> >>>>> IOAM is considered a "per domain" feature, where the operator
> >>>>> decides  on leveraging and configuring IOAM according to the
> >> operator's needs.
> >>>>> 
> >>>>> Suggested:
> >>>>> IOAM is considered a "per domain" feature, where the operator
> >>>>> decides  how to leverage and configure IOAM according to the
> >> operator's needs.
> >>>>> -->
> >>>>> 
> >>>>> 
> >>>>> 7) <!-- [rfced] For clarity, may we update the text as follows?
> >>>>> Please let us
> >>>> know if any corrections are needed.
> >>>>> 
> >>>>> Original:
> >>>>> Hardware and software friendly implementation: Hardware forwarders
> >>>>> benefit from an encapsulation that minimizes iterative look-ups of
> >>>>> fields within the packet: Any operation which looks up the value of
> >>>>> a  field within the packet, based on which another lookup is
> >>>>> performed,  consumes additional gates and time in an implementation
> >>>>> - both of  which are desired to be kept to a minimum.
> >>>>> 
> >>>>> Current:
> >>>>> Hardware- and software-friendly implementation: Hardware forwarders
> >>>>> benefit from an encapsulation that minimizes iterative lookups of
> >>>>> fields within the packet. Any operation that looks up the value of a
> >>>>> field within the packet, based on which another lookup is performed,
> >>>>> consumes additional gates and time in an implementation, both of
> >>>>> which should be kept to a minimum.
> >>>>> -->
> >>>>> 
> >>>>> 
> >>>>> 8) <!-- [rfced] Terminology
> >>>>> 
> >>>>> a) We note that Figure 1 contains “IOAM Option and Optional Data
> >>>>> Space”, while the text defines “IOAM Option and Data Space”. Please
> >>>>> review and let us know if these should be consistent.
> >>>>> 
> >>>>> 
> >>>>> b) These terms may be used inconsistently.  Please review and let us
> >>>>> know if the forms on the right (on the right of the arrow) should be
> >>>>> used consistently, or if any other updates are needed.
> >>>>> 
> >>>>> IOAM-Data-fields & IOAM data fields -> IOAM-Data-Fields
> >>>>> IOAM-Option-Types -> IOAM Option-Type
> >>>>> -->
> >>>>> 
> >>>>> 
> >>>>> 9) <!-- [rfced] Please review the "Inclusive Language" portion of
> >>>>> the online Style Guide
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> >>>>> and let us know if any changes are needed.
> >>>>> 
> >>>>> Note that our script did not flag any words in particular, but this
> >>>>> should still be reviewed as a best practice.
> >>>>> -->
> >>>>> 
> >>>>> 
> >>>>> Thank you.
> >>>>> 
> >>>>> RFC Editor
> >>>>> 
> >>>>> 
> >>>>> On Jul 31, 2023, at 7:53 PM, rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org wrote:
> >>>>> 
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> >>>>> RFC Editor
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> >>>>> --------------------------------------
> >>>>> RFC9452 (draft-ietf-sfc-ioam-nsh-13)
> >>>>> 
> >>>>> Title            : Network Service Header (NSH) Encapsulation for In-situ
> >> OAM
> >>>> (IOAM) Data
> >>>>> Author(s)        : F. Brockners, Ed., S. Bhandari, Ed.
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