[babel] Alissa Cooper's No Objection on draft-ietf-babel-applicability-07: (with COMMENT)

[Alissa Cooper via Datatracker <[e-mail]>]

Alissa Cooper has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-babel-applicability-07: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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Thanks for writing this.

I find the use of "we" and "our" odd for a consensus document. I think the
document would be improved if these used the document itself as the subject
(e.g., "this document describes" instead of "we describe").

I think the claims made in the bulleted list at the end of Section 2.2 need
citations.