Re: [Cbor] Zaheduzzaman Sarker's No Objection on draft-ietf-cbor-file-magic-11: (with COMMENT)
Carsten Bormann <cabo@tzi.org> Wed, 20 April 2022 16:31 UTC
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Subject: Re: [Cbor] Zaheduzzaman Sarker's No Objection on draft-ietf-cbor-file-magic-11: (with COMMENT)
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Hi Zahed, thank you for this review. I have collected my proposed changes based on these and other comments in https://github.com/cbor-wg/cbor-magic-number/pull/21 under the commit https://github.com/cbor-wg/cbor-magic-number/pull/21/commits/c2fa2d2 Grüße, Carsten […] > > The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-cbor-file-magic/ > > > > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > COMMENT: > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > > Thanks for working on this document. I kind of like the question/answer style > of writing the document. > > Some comments/questions below, and I think addressing them would help improving > the document. > > - Section 2.1: it say's > > This tag needs to be allocated by the author of the CBOR Protocol > > it was not clear to me if "this tag" is the same tag that needs IANA > registration or not. It needs some clarification text on that. Well, the whole Section is about the "The CBOR Protocol Specific Tag”. I clarified this into: >> Allocation of the CBOR tag needs to be initiated by the author of the CBOR >> Protocol, who can provide a proposed tag number. > > - file(1) is both referred as command and program, I always thought it is a > command. It is a command that is, like the vast majority of UNIX shell commands, implemented by a program (which is usually stored in /usr/bin). But we can be consistent here (always calling it a command). > - Section 3.2: I didn't get the proper motivation for this section in this > document. There were no mention of other CBOR data items and certainly they > become the center piece in this section. I think it would be great to add some > text about the motivation. See Michael’s response. In UNIX, many file formats can be concatenated by “cat”, so the resulting occurrence of mid-sequence labels is not an unusual consideration. > - Speaking very frankly I feel like section 3.1 and section 3.2 are not the > center part of this specification and should be moved to appendix section. (See Michael’s response.) Grüße, Carsten
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