Re: [CCAMP] WG last call on draft-ietf-ccamp-layer1-types-14

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Hi Tom, acknowledged. 

I will shepherd layer1-types and otn-topo-yang and help improve the English,
fix nits, et al.

BR, Dan.	

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From: tom petch <[e-mail]> 
Sent: 07 September 2022 10:07
To: [e-mail]; 'Daniele Ceccarelli'
<daniele.ceccarelli=[e-mail]>
Cc: [e-mail]
Subject: Re: [CCAMP] WG last call on draft-ietf-ccamp-layer1-types-14

From: CCAMP <[e-mail]> on behalf of [e-mail]
<[e-mail]>
Sent: 06 September 2022 14:48

Hi Daniele, WG.

Re: Anyone volunteering to be the shepherd of the draft?

I can perform this task.

Re: English Review

Although I have a few I-Ds that depend on this work, I never conducted an
English review. However, I can do an English review this week if the authors
plan an update post-LC comments.

<tp>
Dan

I did not comment on the English of this I-D because it seems more or less
ok; it is the otn-topo-yang where I found a significant number of quirks,
starting with Section 1!  I think I understand it but it is a lot for an RFC
Editor to correct and at least some of our recent AD have been commenting on
the English so we may get 50 or more corrections from the IESG review, in
which case, better we did it first.

Tom Petch

BR, Dan.

From: CCAMP <[e-mail]> On Behalf Of Daniele Ceccarelli
Sent: 06 September 2022 13:34
To: Daniele Ceccarelli <daniele.ceccarelli=[e-mail]>;
[e-mail]
Subject: Re: [CCAMP] WG last call on draft-ietf-ccamp-layer1-types-14

WG,

The polling is now closed. We'll proceed with submission to the IESG.

Anyone volunteering to be the shepherd of the draft?

Thanks
Daniele

From: CCAMP <[e-mail]<mailto:[e-mail]>> On
Behalf Of Daniele Ceccarelli
Sent: Monday, 22 August 2022 20:57
To: [e-mail]<mailto:[e-mail]>
Subject: [CCAMP] WG last call on draft-ietf-ccamp-layer1-types-14

CCAMP,

the IPR declaration collection has been successfully completed and we can
move to the next step together with draft-ietf-ccamp-otn-topo-yang.

This starts a 2 weeks working group last call on
draft-ietf-ccamp-layer1-types-14 The last call ends on Monday September 5th.
Please send you comments to the CCAMP mailing list.

All the IPR declarations from authors and contributors have been collected
and can be found in the history of the document:
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ccamp-layer1-types/history/<http
s://protect2.fireeye.com/v1/url?k=31323334-501cfaf3-313273af-454445554331-25
2b10ecd84e1edc&q=1&e=cf4762f0-40d9-412e-945a-00808e166b8e&u=https%3A%2F%2Fda
tatracker.ietf.org%2Fdoc%2Fdraft-ietf-ccamp-layer1-types%2Fhistory%2F>
Please note that no IPR was disclosed against this draft.

If interested, please volunteer to be the shepherd of the draft (authors
excluded).




Thanks

Daniele & Fatai