[core] Ben Campbell's Discuss on draft-ietf-core-senml-14: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)
Ben Campbell <ben@nostrum.com> Mon, 16 April 2018 05:15 UTC
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Subject: [core] Ben Campbell's Discuss on draft-ietf-core-senml-14: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)
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Ben Campbell has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-core-senml-14: Discuss When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-core-senml/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- DISCUSS: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- Hopefully this is easy to address: §4.7 talks about how SenML can also be used to configure parameters and controlling actuators. That capability has some rather significant security implications, but I failed to find mention of it in the security considerations. That needs to be explicitly discussed. ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- Substantive: §4.4: "If this value is a version number larger than the version which the system understands, the system SHOULD NOT use this object." Why not MUST NOT? Are there situations where an implementation might reasonably use an object with a higher version number than the implementation understands? Editorial/Nits: The title is misleading. It makes it sound like the document is just registering media types; in fact it defines SenML. §1, first paragraph: "This format was defined...": The antecedent of "this" is unclear, since the fact the document defines SenML has not yet been mentioned. §4.3, table 1: What do the asterisks mean? §5.1.2, paragraph starting with "Note that...": I'm surprised to find normative requirements buried in a note in an example. §10, first paragraph: " the an integrated sum...": competing articles. §14: "Sensor data can range from information with almost no security considerations..." s/security/privacy
- [core] Ben Campbell's Discuss on draft-ietf-core-… Ben Campbell
- Re: [core] Ben Campbell's Discuss on draft-ietf-c… Peter Saint-Andre
- Re: [core] Ben Campbell's Discuss on draft-ietf-c… Carsten Bormann
- Re: [core] Ben Campbell's Discuss on draft-ietf-c… Carsten Bormann
- Re: [core] Ben Campbell's Discuss on draft-ietf-c… Ari Keränen
- Re: [core] Ben Campbell's Discuss on draft-ietf-c… Ben Campbell
- Re: [core] Ben Campbell's Discuss on draft-ietf-c… Ari Keränen