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Re: [Curdle] [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-schaad-curdle-oid-registry-02

Roni Even <roni.even@huawei.com> Sun, 22 October 2017 12:39 UTC

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From: Roni Even <roni.even@huawei.com>
To: Jim Schaad <ietf@augustcellars.com>, 'Roni Even' <ron.even.tlv@gmail.com>, "gen-art@ietf.org" <gen-art@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [Curdle] [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-schaad-curdle-oid-registry-02
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OK
Roni

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Gen-art [mailto:gen-art-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Jim Schaad
> Sent: יום ב 16 אוקטובר 2017 16:30
> To: 'Roni Even'; gen-art@ietf.org
> Cc: curdle@ietf.org; ietf@ietf.org; draft-schaad-curdle-oid-
> registry.all@ietf.org
> Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-schaad-curdle-oid-
> registry-02
> 
> The style guide changed - a TOC is now required - so added it.
> 
> > -----Original Message-----
> > From: Roni Even [mailto:ron.even.tlv@gmail.com]
> > Sent: Monday, October 16, 2017 12:13 AM
> > To: gen-art@ietf.org
> > Cc: curdle@ietf.org; ietf@ietf.org; draft-schaad-curdle-oid-
> > registry.all@ietf.org
> > Subject: Genart last call review of
> > draft-schaad-curdle-oid-registry-02
> >
> > Reviewer: Roni Even
> > Review result: Ready with Nits
> >
> > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
> > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by
> > the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just like
> > any other last call comments.
> >
> > For more information, please see the FAQ at
> >
> > <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
> >
> > Document: draft-schaad-curdle-oid-registry-??
> > Reviewer: Roni Even
> > Review Date: 2017-10-16
> > IETF LC End Date: 2017-10-23
> > IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
> >
> > Summary: The document is ready for publication with nits as an
> > Informational RFC
> >
> > Major issues:
> >
> > Minor issues:
> >
> > Nits/editorial comments:
> >
> > 1. Add a sentence to the RFC editor to remove the "Contributing to
> > this document " section 2. The document is missing a table of content
> > 3. In the acknowledgment section the sentence "This document stole
> > text heavily from a previous document doing
> >    similar thing by Russ Housely" is not clear, do you hint that Russ also
> >    stole?  I think better wording "This document uses a lot of text from a
> >    similar document  by Russ Housely"
> 
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