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Re: [dhcwg] Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-pd-relay-requirements-04: (with COMMENT)

ianfarrer@gmx.com Thu, 17 December 2020 10:32 UTC

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Subject: Re: [dhcwg] Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-pd-relay-requirements-04: (with COMMENT)
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Hi Murray,

Thank you for the comments. Please see inline below.

Ian

> On 16. Dec 2020, at 06:38, Murray Kucherawy via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> wrote:
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> Murray Kucherawy has entered the following ballot position for
> draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-pd-relay-requirements-04: No Objection
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> In the Abstract the term "memo" is used, but everywhere else it's called a
> "document".  I suggest updating the Abstract to conform.

[If - Will change in the next version]

> 
> In Section 2.1: "... forwarding DHCPv6 messages containing IA_PD/IAPREFIX ..."
> -- Just to confirm, does that "/" mean "or"?

[if - It’s both - the IA_PD option is a contain one or more IAPREFIX options (that hold prefix itself).
Suggest changing to:

“… forwarding DHCPv6 messages containing IA_PD and IAPREFIX …"

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