Re: [dhcwg] WGLC for draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-unknown-msg-03 - Respond by Dec 2, 2013

<ian.farrer@telekom.de> Thu, 28 November 2013 16:45 UTC

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What about?:


(b) If a relay agent is not the target of a message it has received, and
the message type is not Relay-reply.

Cheers,
Ian

On 28/11/2013 16:21, "Ted Lemon" <ted.lemon@nominum.com> wrote:

>On Nov 28, 2013, at 2:54 AM, ian.farrer@telekom.de wrote:
>> (b) if the relay agent receives a message which it is not the target
>>of, and the message type is not Relay-reply.
>
>The RFC editor is going to want to fix that dangling preposition.   Might
>be better to come up with a different wording now... :)
>
>