Re: [dispatch] New Version of draft-vanelburg-dispatch-private-network-ind

[Paul Kyzivat <[e-mail]>]

A couple of additional nits.

On 10/29/13 10:11 AM, Mary Barnes wrote:

> - General: domains used in this document must use a reserved domain such
> as "example.com <http://example.com>" and must not use real domains.
> Thus, all occurrences of ericsson.com <http://ericsson.com> need to be
> changed to example.com <http://example.com>

Or foo.example.com

> NEW:
>
>     The private network indication defined in this document MUST only be used
>     in an environment where elements are trusted and where attackers are

delete the last "are"

>     do not have access to the protocol messages between those
>     elements.  Traffic protection between network elements can be
>     achieved by using IPsec and sometimes by physical protection of the
>     network.  In any case, the environment where the private network
>     indication will be used ensures the integrity and the confidentiality
>     of the contents of this header field.

	Thanks,
	Paul