[dispatch] New Version of draft-vanelburg-dispatch-private-network-ind

Mayumi Ohsugi <mayumi.ohsugi@ntt-at.co.jp> Thu, 12 September 2013 02:19 UTC

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Subject: [dispatch] New Version of draft-vanelburg-dispatch-private-network-ind
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Hi,

I have submitted the following draft:

http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-vanelburg-dispatch-private-network-ind-03.txt

The draft reflects all the comments discussed in DISPATCH list.

The major changes are as follows:

- corrected the abstract
- corrected the term "common domain" to "pre-arranged domain"
- added 7.1.4 "P-Private-Network-Indication verification"
- editorial changes
                                                                                   
Regards,
Mayumi