[dispatch] draft-sunil-sankar-dispatch-sip-incr-00: comments and question

Brett Tate <brett@broadsoft.com> Mon, 13 June 2016 18:51 UTC

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Subject: [dispatch] draft-sunil-sankar-dispatch-sip-incr-00: comments and question
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Hi,

The following are a few comments concerning
draft-sunil-sankar-dispatch-sip-incr-00.

Thanks,
Brett

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1) The draft should clarify the relation to SHOULD and MUST within other
RFCs concerning header inclusion.  Section 6.1 appears to indicate that
you can ignore MUST statements within other RFCs concerning the need to
include a specific a header.  However, I'm currently unsure if section 4
next-to-last sentence supports or conflicts with that mandate.

2) You might want to reword section 4 to use normative language.

3) How would this draft interact with RFC 4028 from refresh -versus-
deactivation perspective?

4) How would this draft interact with draft-ietf-insipid-session-id since
the presence of the Session-ID is to help debug the call flow?

5) You should clarify that transaction specific headers such as Supported,
Require, Proxy-Require, and Content-Length need to be included again.