Re: [dns-privacy] [Ext] AD review of draft-ietf-dprive-unilateral-probing-09

Brian Haberman <brian@innovationslab.net> Tue, 01 August 2023 20:37 UTC

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Subject: Re: [dns-privacy] [Ext] AD review of draft-ietf-dprive-unilateral-probing-09
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Hey Paul,

      As document shepherd...

On 7/21/23 2:56 PM, Paul Hoffman wrote:
> Substantial bits below; others were accepted withtout note.
> 
> On Jul 17, 2023, at 5:06 AM, Eric Vyncke (evyncke) <evyncke=40cisco.com@dmarc.ietf.org> wrote:
>> # Shepherd's write-ip
>>
>> The shepherd's write-up states "the WG would like to ensure that this list remains in the document once it is published as an RFC" but the appendix A states "RFC Editor: please remove this section before publication". I.e., the shepherd's write-up and the I-D MUST be coherent ;-)
> 
> Paul Wouters pointed out on the list (2023-07-02) that Appendix A is not in the format from RFC 7942, and is not at all definitive, and thus can be removed.
> 

I got the sense that the WG wanted the list of implementations to remain 
to facilitate testing. If that is not the case, I can update the 
shepherd's writeup to remove the offending request to retain the list.

Regards,
Brian