Re: [DNSOP] Working Group Last call for draft-ietf-dnsop-dns-error-reporting

Dick Franks <rwfranks@gmail.com> Tue, 20 June 2023 20:40 UTC

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From: Dick Franks <rwfranks@gmail.com>
Date: Tue, 20 Jun 2023 21:39:32 +0100
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To: Roy Arends <roy@dnss.ec>
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Subject: Re: [DNSOP] Working Group Last call for draft-ietf-dnsop-dns-error-reporting
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On Tue, 20 Jun 2023 at 12:21, Roy Arends <roy@dnss.ec> wrote:
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> > On 20 Jun 2023, at 12:14, Willem Toorop <willem@nlnetlabs.nl> wrote:
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> > I have one nit.
> >
> > In the Example in section 4.2., a request still "includes an empty ENDS0 report channel". The third paragraph of that same section states something similar: "As support for DNS error reporting was indicated by a empty EDNS0 report channel option in the request". But Section 6.1. Reporting Resolver Specification states: "The EDNS0 report channel option MUST NOT be included in queries."
> >
> > I believe the text in the Example section is a left over from an earlier version and should be corrected.
>
> Ah, yes, I will remove that sentence completely!

WGLC is supposed to be a review, nit-picking and clarification process.

Deleting that one sentence changes the meaning of the proposal from
explicitly querying the authoritative server for the appropriate
report channel to a dependence on authoritatives attaching an
(unsolicited) EDNS0 report channel option to each and every query.

That is a fundamental change to the document, and certainly not a nit-pick.

I withdraw my earlier statement that the document is almost ready.
Now, clearly it is not.


--rwf