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Re: [DNSOP] Working Group Last call for draft-ietf-dnsop-dns-error-reporting

Roy Arends <roy@dnss.ec> Tue, 20 June 2023 12:10 UTC

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From: Roy Arends <roy@dnss.ec>
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Subject: Re: [DNSOP] Working Group Last call for draft-ietf-dnsop-dns-error-reporting
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Thank Dick!

> On 16 Jun 2023, at 18:33, Dick Franks <rwfranks@gmail.com> wrote:
> 
> All
> 
> I have reviewed the document which appears to be almost ready for
> submission to IESG.
> 
> 
> Subsection 6.1.1 uses QNAME to refer to two different entities.
> The opening sentence needs to say nothing more than that the report
> query is a concatenation of the listed items.
> The conflicting usage is easily resolved by rewording the third item.
> 
> 6.1.1.  Constructing the Report Query
> 
>    The QNAME for the report query is constructed by concatenating the
> -   following elements, appending each successive element in the list to
> -   the right-hand side of the QNAME:
> +   following elements:
> 
>    *  A label containing the string "_er".
> 
>    *  The QTYPE that was used in the query that resulted in the extended
>       DNS error, presented as a decimal value, in a single DNS label.
> 
> -   *  The QNAME that was used in the query that resulted in the extended
> -      DNS error.  The QNAME may consist of multiple labels and is
> -      concatenated as is, i.e. in DNS wire format.
> +   *  The list of non-null labels representing the query which is the
> +      subject of the DNS error report.
> 
>    *  The extended DNS error, presented as a decimal value, in a single
>       DNS label.
> 

Much better, will update.

Thanks for the review and implementation support!

Roy

> 
> Regards
> 
> Dick Franks
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