Re: [eman] Fwd: New Version Notification for draft-nordman-eman-er-framework-01.txt

I'd like to thank you for staking out your argument with what's wrong 
with the current document out with text. Doing so is not a small effort.

joel

On 7/16/13 3:30 PM, Bruce Nordman wrote:
> I have updated the Energy Reporting Framework (ERF) draft that I 
> posted last week.
>
> The -01 version:
> --has some wording changes to clarify some points,
> --fixes reference formatting,
> --adds brand and model fields to the basic data, and
> --adds and drops some outstanding issues.
>
> I believe that this document is the best one we have available that meets
> the charter needs for the framework for EMAN.
>
> Compared to content of draft-ietf-eman-framework-08, the ERF is
> simpler while having more capabilities, and so should be easier
> to implement and use.  Compared to the presentation of
> draft-ietf-eman-framework-08, the ERF is much shorter and I
> believe much more accessible to a variety of audiences - which
> will be important for EMAN to be successful.
>
> I look forward to comments on the list on how to improve this
> draft for a version -02.  I am unable to be in Berlin but this draft
> will be presented there and so I look forward to the minutes from
> the meeting and any improvements to the draft that arise from that.
> (I will be off email the week of the IETF meeting).
>
> Thanks,
>
> --Bruce
>
> ---------- Forwarded message ----------
> From: <internet-drafts@ietf.org <mailto:internet-drafts@ietf.org>>
> Date: Mon, Jul 15, 2013 at 3:41 PM
> Subject: New Version Notification for 
> draft-nordman-eman-er-framework-01.txt
> To: Bruce Nordman <bnordman@lbl.gov <mailto:bnordman@lbl.gov>>
>
>
>
> A new version of I-D, draft-nordman-eman-er-framework-01.txt
> has been successfully submitted by Bruce Nordman and posted to the
> IETF repository.
>
> Filename:        draft-nordman-eman-er-framework
> Revision:        01
> Title:           Energy Reporting Framework
> Creation date:   2013-07-16
> Group:           Individual Submission
> Number of pages: 28
> URL: 
> http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-nordman-eman-er-framework-01.txt
> Status: http://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-nordman-eman-er-framework
> Htmlized: http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-nordman-eman-er-framework-01
> Diff: http://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-nordman-eman-er-framework-01
>
> Abstract:
>    Managing energy consumption of devices presents new challenges and
>    issues.  The EMAN Requirements draft identifies essential
>    capabilities needed to accomplish this.  This draft describes how an
>    energy management system can use EMAN to gather and interpret data
>    from individual devices, and how some of the Requirements are
>    implemented in the model.  This document focuses on Energy Reporting,
>    though acknowledges and fully includes the limited control functions
>    specified in the Requirements draft.  Topics addressed in detail
>    include the topology of power distribution, reporting mechanisms, and
>    the various roles of devices, power interfaces, and components.
>
>
>
>
> The IETF Secretariat
>
>
>
>
> -- 
> *Bruce Nordman*
> Lawrence Berkeley National Laboratory
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