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Re: [Gen-art] Review: draft-ietf-nfsv4-scsi-layout-06.txt

Joel Halpern <jmh@joelhalpern.com> Fri, 26 August 2016 00:54 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Review: draft-ietf-nfsv4-scsi-layout-06.txt
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This document is still ready for publication as a Proposed Standard.

(I think I even see why the reference in section 3.3 is point to 2.1.)

Yours,
Joel

On 7/5/16 6:26 PM, Joel M. Halpern wrote:
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> Document: draft-ietf-nfsv4-scsi-layout-06.txt
>     Parallel NFS (pNFS) SCSI Layout
> Reviewer: Joel M. Halpern
> Review Date: 5-July-2016
> IETF LC End Date: 12-July-2016
> IESG Telechat date: N/A
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> Summary: This document is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard.
>
> The reviewer notes that he fouund the document quite readable, but
> nonetheless made no effort to review the storage details.
>
> Major issues:
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> Minor issues:
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> Nits/editorial comments:
>     It seems likely that the cross-reference in section 3.3 paragraph 1
> which points to section 2.1 is actually intended to point to section 3.1
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