Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-dime-app-design-guide-19

Martin Thomson <martin.thomson@gmail.com> Mon, 14 July 2014 17:47 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-dime-app-design-guide-19
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On 14 July 2014 10:44,  <lionel.morand@orange.com> wrote:
> Part of your comments has already addressed into the latest version. Some are still applicable. Please see below.
> Let me know if it is OK for you and I will produce a revision of the draft.

Sounds good.  Look to your sponsoring AD for guidance on when to post
a new revision.