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Re: [Gen-art] draft-baeuerle-netnews-cancel-lock-06 and RFCs 5536 & 5322

Julien ÉLIE <julien@trigofacile.com> Tue, 19 September 2017 19:19 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] draft-baeuerle-netnews-cancel-lock-06 and RFCs 5536 & 5322
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Hi all,

 > optional-field  = <see RFC 5322 Section 3.6.8>
 >
 > news-fields     =     approved /
 >                       archive /
 >                       control /
 >                       distribution /
 >                       expires /
 >                       followup-to /
 >                       injection-date /
 >                       injection-info /
 >                       lines /
 >                       newsgroups /
 >                       organization /
 >                       path /
 >                       summary /
 >                       supersedes /
 >                       user-agent /
 >                       xref
 >
 > optional-field  /=    news-fields

This change looks great (with typo fixed for "news-fields" instead of 
"newsfields").

Please note that the first line about <optional-field> updates Section 
1.4 of RFC 5536 (the line defining <fields> is changed to the line 
defining <optional-field>).

The other lines update Section 3 of RFC 5536.  The introduction of 
Section 3 should also refer to Section 3.6.8 of RFC 5322 instead of 
Section 3.6.

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Julien ÉLIE

« Vanitas uanitatum et omnia uanitas. » (Ecclésiaste)

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