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Re: [Gen-art] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lamps-cmp-updates-18

Lars Eggert <lars@eggert.org> Mon, 30 May 2022 10:29 UTC

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From: Lars Eggert <lars@eggert.org>
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Date: Mon, 30 May 2022 13:29:24 +0300
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Linda, thank you for your review. I have entered an Abstain ballot for this document.

Lars


> On 2022-5-15, at 6:43, Linda Dunbar via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> wrote:
> 
> Reviewer: Linda Dunbar
> Review result: Ready
> 
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
> by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just
> like any other last call comments.
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> Document: draft-ietf-lamps-cmp-updates-18
> Reviewer: Linda Dunbar
> Review Date: 2022-05-14
> IETF LC End Date: 2022-05-11
> IESG Telechat date: 2022-06-02
> 
> Summary:
> This document describes the changes to the Certificate Management protocol and
> explains why the changes are needed. The description is very clear.
> 
> Major issues: None
> 
> Minor issues: None
> 
> Nits/editorial comments:
> Will the updated CMP be published as a whole? instead of requiring readers to
> refer to multiple RFCs?
> 
> Thanks, Linda Dunbar
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