Re: [Gen-art] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dnsop-alt-tld-22

Lars Eggert <lars@eggert.org> Mon, 24 April 2023 14:11 UTC

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Behcet, thank you for your review! I have entered a No Objection ballot.

Lars

On 28. Mar 2023, at 19:00, Behcet Sarikaya <sarikaya2012@gmail.com> wrote:


I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
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Document:draft-ietf-dnsop-alt-tld-22
Reviewer:Behcet Sarikaya
Review Date:March 28, 2023
IETF LC End Date:April 10, 2023
IESG Telechat date: (if known)

Summary:Ready

Major issues:None

Minor issues:None

Nits/editorial comments:
a) I managed to find in this well written document one typo:

Section 6 

we would like to
   sincerely apolgized for anyone who we forgot to credit

apologize 
b) Lack of an example .alt TLD as indicated in the Artart LC Review. I wonder if this is due to maybe there will be none.

Behcet

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